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Our Love For Maryj by Dhellake: 7:01pm On Oct 12, 2015
Take the scorched leafs, Grind, Make a roll
Light up, inhale the smoke
Perfect succour when you feeling low
Get high and you feel the glow
This ain't no joke

Lovely scent from a lovely plant
Inhale the scents, snakes then look like threads
Dangerous parts looks easy to thread
A little drag getting you so far ahead
God's own plant, Your Gospel I'll forever spread


Spliff in your hands, to the sky goes your worries
Numbness to pain, closer to happiness
Pump into those lungs, smokes of freedom
Not cowardice, just confidence
It doesn't kill, pardon my innocence

Dried, Grinded, Licked, Lighted, Inhaled, Chewed, Cooked, Swallowed
Different variants of bliss
God's own leaf, God's own bliss
Blessed leaf, Brings nothing but peace


No holy book says spliffers will go to hell
But hypocrites always yell
Go to your heaven, We go to our hell
We all end up in God's house
Just some spliff, that hell will be a haven

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Re: Our Love For Maryj by GidiQuotes: 7:25pm On Oct 12, 2015
cheesy
Re: Our Love For Maryj by Nihilist: 12:13am On Oct 13, 2015
While the intention is admirable, the execution falls flat on its face...

I can't know if this a poem or a badly written R&B song...
Re: Our Love For Maryj by joseph1832(m): 8:10am On Oct 13, 2015
Nihilist:
While the intention is admirable, the execution falls flat on its face...

I can't know if this a poem or a badly written R&B song...
So you're now an expert on poems? Please care to identify a poetic device in every stanza of the poem. Humor me.
Re: Our Love For Maryj by Nihilist: 8:48am On Oct 13, 2015
joseph1832:
So you're now an expert on poems? Please care to identify a poetic device in every stanza of the poem. Humor me.

Die nigga. How many times have I told you to stop following me?
Re: Our Love For Maryj by joseph1832(m): 8:52am On Oct 13, 2015
Nihilist:


Die nigga. How many times have I told you to stop following me?
Those who absolutely know nothing about a thing are the ones who always make the loudest noise about it.
Re: Our Love For Maryj by Nihilist: 8:53am On Oct 13, 2015
joseph1832:
Those who absolutely know nothing about a thing are the ones who always make the loudest noise about it.



Tell that to your mirror nigga.
Re: Our Love For Maryj by joseph1832(m): 8:58am On Oct 13, 2015
Nihilist:


Tell that to your mirror nigga.
Name a poetic device mr man, or forever hold your peace.
Re: Our Love For Maryj by MztrChukwu(m): 10:44pm On Oct 13, 2015
Lmao. Swear I really enjoyed the piece. The thangs weed cause these days tho. Looool

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Re: Our Love For Maryj by Dhelake: 5:37pm On Nov 22, 2015
Nihilist:
While the intention is admirable, the execution falls flat on its face...

I can't know if this a poem or a badly written R&B song...
Baba, you just wan murder my just-starting poetic career
Re: Our Love For Maryj by Dhelake: 5:37pm On Nov 22, 2015
MztrChukwu:
Lmao. Swear I really enjoyed the piece. The thangs weed cause these days tho. Looool

Thanks bro
Re: Our Love For Maryj by Dhelake: 5:38pm On Nov 22, 2015
joseph1832:
Those who absolutely know nothing about a thing are the ones who always make the loudest noise about it.


Bro, would want an honest review from you
Re: Our Love For Maryj by joseph1832(m): 5:46pm On Nov 22, 2015
Dhelake:
Bro, would want an honest review from you
Really? Why me?
Re: Our Love For Maryj by Dhellake: 7:25pm On Nov 22, 2015
joseph1832:
Really? Why me?
Read some of your works on Nairaland, I feel you would have one or two advice to give
Re: Our Love For Maryj by joseph1832(m): 9:36pm On Nov 22, 2015
Dhellake:
Read some of your works on Nairaland, I feel you would have one or two advice to give
Just read on poetry and its type and also its structure. You'll know the rest...

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