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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 12:05am On Nov 11, 2020
King2019:


Are you still in Korea?

Yeah my brother. The fam is here with me.
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by King2019(m): 12:09am On Nov 11, 2020
ironkurtain:


Yeah my brother. The fam is here with me.

Wow I wonder how Korea is like but I am studying the language just for the fun of it

Hope things are good for you there?
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 12:16am On Nov 11, 2020
King2019:


Wow I wonder how Korea is like but I am studying the language just for the fun of it

Hope things are good for you there?


That's cool bro. Anyway everybody are doing their thing over here and the country is doing quite well.

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by King2019(m): 12:18am On Nov 11, 2020
ironkurtain:



That's cool bro. Anyway everybody is doing their thing over here and the country is doing quite well.
Thanks
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 12:18am On Nov 11, 2020
After 8am over here and navigating through the morning traffic. You have a blessed day.

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Vidamia(m): 4:25am On Nov 11, 2020
ironkurtain:
After 8am over here and navigating through the morning traffic. You have a blessed day.
why did you abandon us with update about your blockbuster story......please come complete the story. Abeg you

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 4:32am On Nov 11, 2020
Vidamia:
why did you abandon us with update about your blockbuster story......please come complete the story. Abeg you

My good brother i'm really sorry for the long silence. This Covid wahalla really got me running in circles throughout this year. The wife is not working cos my daughter is not going to kindergarten for almost a year now. We are taking serious precautions so i'm the solo breadwinner in the family and that means no holiday for me. Well it will soon be over.....but the story i have now i intend to put it in Kindle books.

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 4:34am On Nov 11, 2020
As for the last story, it will soon be completed. Pls do exercise alittle patience. Have a blessed day.

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Ibunkun1(m): 2:55pm On Nov 12, 2020
Vidamia:
why did you abandon us with update about your blockbuster story......please come complete the story. Abeg you

Sorry is there another one apart from this?, so that i can grab it fast cheesy
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Vidamia(m): 5:20pm On Nov 12, 2020
Ibunkun1:


Sorry is there another one apart from this?, so that i can grab it fast cheesy
yeah.....check his username and you will find fantastic stories

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Ibunkun1(m): 9:24pm On Nov 12, 2020
Vidamia:
yeah.....check his username and you will find fantastic stories


Wow... Thank you very much. I've been sleeping the bicycle all thus while
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by King2019(m): 10:14pm On Jan 13, 2021
Hello brother

I have personal questions,

Do you have any platform that we can use to communicate in English?
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 12:05am On Jan 14, 2021
King2019:
Hello brother

I have personal questions,

Do you have any platform that we can use to communicate in English?


You can add me on WhatsApp 82 10 3936 0456
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by alleazardous(m): 1:45pm On Feb 23, 2021
This should be my tenth times of reading this story
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Omoakin5(m): 9:58am On Mar 12, 2021
if u are in this forum and u are yet to read this story pls do because this is tenth times am reading it.am waiting for another story from the author.
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 8:22am On May 12
BLOODLINE.....PART3 ??

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ashatoda: 9:05am On May 12
ironkurtain:
BLOODLINE.....PART3 ??

Hey oya o party time
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 9:12am On May 12
ashatoda:


Hey oya o party time

Haba, I am just thinking aloud o
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by yungbanks(m): 10:02am On May 12
ironkurtain:


Haba, I am just thinking aloud o
We have been here patiently waiting don't forget to tag me on it ooo
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 10:45am On May 12
yungbanks:
We have been here patiently waiting don't forget to tag me on it ooo

But I said there won't be a part 3. Hmm okay o.
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by samebony1: 11:13am On May 12
You can always reconsider that idea
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ashatoda: 2:08pm On May 12
ironkurtain:


Haba, I am just thinking aloud o
Abeg no let me start fight o
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 2:32pm On May 12
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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 2:40pm On May 12
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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 2:44pm On May 12
I will be deleting it on Sunday evening.
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Tech01: 3:28pm On May 12
ironkurtain:
I will be deleting it on Sunday evening.
ironkurtain:


I did so, but it's been almost four years since I had written anything. So I'm kind of feeling very rusty cos I just keep writing and deleting. Anyway I would like to drop some kind of a DEMO. So I want you guys to read and pls be honest in your critics. I want to know if I should continue or still stand by my decision not to write a third installment.

samebony1.

yungbanks.

ashatoda


DEMO 1.


The three men came over and stood close to the edge of their table. Eric regarded them with a benign smile while Lisa gave no attention to their presence. He took a quick note of their faces and saw that the short one wasn't handsome either.

The short man gave Eric a brief stare with an indifference that showed a clear disregard for his presence and turned the somewhat cold beady eyes of his at Lisa.

"Hello young lady", he began at Lisa, his lips curving into smile that made his face look worse. "Good to see you again my dear", his lips parted to show his clean white teeth.

Lisa sucked her teeth, remained still for a few seconds and then looked at short man. "Hi", she began with a quiet noncommittal tone of voice.

"How are you doing?",

"Just minding the business that i'm having with my boyfriend".

Eric's eyes moved from the short man to the other two men that flanked him. Both of them were standing with their hands in the pockets of their jacket, chests puffed up with the stance of men that had spent alot of time in the gym lifting irons. They were staring down at him with a blank expression and poised as if they were having the intention to start something very unfriendly with him. Perhaps they were trying to intimidate him into not getting between the discussion the short man was trying to start with his female friend.

"I see", the shortman continued with a nod. "Anyway, like i told you earlier, my friends here do agree with me that you are definitely the most beautiful chick in the bar. And they also agreed that....i should give it another try".

"Thanks for the compliments", Lisa said coolly. "But i have already given you my answer, which is, that i'm already taken". She looked at Eric. "He is here with me too. Though am quite flattered by your insistence to hook-up with me, but i am very happy with what i have". Lisa turned her eyes back to the short man. "So it's no use wasting all these time and efforts", she concluded and then turned to Eric to continue their conversations and hoping that the man would finally get the message and leave her alone.

The short man nodded with a smirked. He made a few glances at the other two men with him and made a cursory look around the bar. Lisa, pretending like they don't even exist, tried to carry on with her conversations with Eric who only nodded with his eyes on his beer but with his full attention at the men beside them.

"So is that it?", the short man then asked, interrupting Lisa in her conversation.

"Yes, that's it", Lisa gave an immediate reply without looking at him. "And also bear in mind that it will remain the same...if we happen to see each other again", she added.

"Okay then, but you should have atleast showed some....appreciation", the short man stated with a cold tone that signalled a change in his seemingly friendly attitude that he had been displaying. This prompted Lisa to furrow her brows at him. Eric who appeared to be unbothered already knew what he meant.

"Appreciation for what?", Lisa asked, looking confused.

"Well, even though you wanna pass on the offer from a guy that will really take good care of a girl like you, aleast you should have shown some appreciation for my little generosity", the short man coldly said.

Lisa then got the gist of what he was talking about. "Oh, so you want me to show some appreciation for the drink, a drink that i never asked from you and not even drinking in the first place?", Lisa sneered and pointed at her cocktail.

"Seems necessary to me", the man shrugged and slipped both hands inside his brown coat. "And my friends here kind of agree with me".

"And i guess it was also necessary to bring your friends with you just to tell me all these?". Then Lisa looked at the beer on their table. "Or was there some kind of a crowd-funding for this one beer?", she asked coolly and looked at the short man. Eric rubbed his nose bridge with a faint smile that came out from a suppressed sneer.

"It doesn't matter how the drink was bought", the short man said curtly and glanced at Eric, knowing what Lisa had said was funny to him. "What matters to me right now is my kind gesture being disrespected".

"Okay", Lisa began and folded her arms. "So which one is it? Here with your friends to hit on me infront of my boyfriend or just looking for trouble?", she asked indifferently.

"Well, i came here with the former in mind. But the later could happen if i am given a reason to be unhappy", the man replied, regarding Lisa with an expressionless look on his face.

"Well, me and my boyfriend might have considered giving you your fifteen seconds of fame if it was clearly just the former. But from what i have seen so far, it's like you are more into the later. And we really dont want to waste our energy on that", Lisa retorted, her patience for the short man now exhausted.

Reconsider your idea, your story is still top-notch

More ink to your pen cool cool

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 3:29pm On May 13
ashatoda:

Abeg no let me start fight o

cheesy cheesy cheesy
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by yungbanks(m): 6:35pm On May 13
ironkurtain:
I will be deleting it on Sunday evening.
Boss tuale for u osiso , I can't wait for the main book mehn we have missed ur writings alot let me start packaging popcorns for a long wild ride
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ashatoda: 6:50pm On May 13
Please this is still the bomb come and continue
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Ibunkun1(m): 2:33am On May 14
cool cool cool continua boss
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by samebony1: 7:01am On May 17
Tech01:


Reconsider your idea, your story is still top-notch

More ink to your pen cool cool
Hi IronKurtain,
Instead of deleting, you should post the complete version. I need to read it

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