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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Sageez(m): 8:56am On Dec 31, 2015
mizquote:
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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by aboyaji(m): 9:58am On Dec 31, 2015
Thumbs up mizquote
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Chigold121(f): 10:01am On Dec 31, 2015
[quote author=mizquote post=41476771]wishing my esteem readers a happy new year in advance.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by nimat158(f): 10:06am On Dec 31, 2015
[quote author=Chigold121 post=41511340][/quote] Thanks dearie
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by kristen12(f): 10:21am On Dec 31, 2015
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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 10:57am On Dec 31, 2015
her legs began to ache.
for she has been standing for a long while.

her teeth began to chatter.
she was shivering.

she looked around in the dark. her eyes where now accustomed to the night so she saw things quite clearly.

she moved to a closed shop and sat on the pavement.
her stomach hurt.

she hadn't eaten since morning. it was impossible for her to sleep in that kind of condition.

she was disturbed over what she had done earlier, how she had murdered a whole family in cold blood.

she couldn't pray. she had since lost any form of relationship with her creator.

she just sat in the cold.
wide eyed.

it was ten minute to the hour of eleven.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 11:07am On Dec 31, 2015
she obviously didn't know the time for she had no means of knowing.

then she heard footsteps.
she thought her mind was becoming wild for she was feeling a bit dizzy.

she sat upright.
then she caught the faint sound. it was coming towards the park but was a bit distant.


it came nearer.
for every step, her heart beat louder.

and twice faster.

she was so scared.
it wasn't a fear of dying.
it was a fear of something worst.

she thought to run away.
but she had to restrain her self.
for the park had a single exist and entrance.

better she to wait.
she sat upright and uptight.

the step was ten step to the park.
she felt hot urine drops, rolled down her thigh .

she knew something bad was going to happen.
then she saw it.
the Shadow of the creature.

and wet herself completely with hot urine.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 11:19am On Dec 31, 2015
she didn't run.

she saw the creature.
it was a man.

she saw him quite clearly.
he was evil.

she had spent all her life being with evil and mean people.
so she knew.

she could smell him.

she knew he would find her no sooner than later.
she was going to be a spectator.

a viewer in what will soon happen to her.

she observed him.
within 25seconds, she had a complete detailed comprehension about his physical outlook.

she observed to see if he had any weapon.
she knew he had.
she didn't see any but knew instinctively he had one conceive somewhere. he must have some sort of protection.

he saw her.
for a moment she froze.

her mind was devoid of any thought.
for she was consumed and lost in his stare.

he stopped for a while, she saw something like a smile play over his dangerous ugly face.

he began walking towards her.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by ysadiq(m): 11:44am On Dec 31, 2015
Sageez:
wish ya same dear. Where are my peeps Dandypearl, calmdove, donkross1, ysadiq and dandem?
sageez it been a while hw lyf nw
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by donkross1(m): 11:50am On Dec 31, 2015
Sageez:
wish ya same dear. Where are my peeps Dandypearl, calmdove, donkross1, ysadiq and dandem?
.

I don show.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Sageez(m): 1:25pm On Dec 31, 2015
ysadiq:
sageez it been a while hw lyf nw
haven't been better, where have you been hiding?
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Sageez(m): 1:26pm On Dec 31, 2015
donkross1:
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I don show.
welcome cobber
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by ysadiq(m): 1:32pm On Dec 31, 2015
Sageez:
haven't been better, where have you been hiding?
na dis nigeria
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Sageez(m): 1:43pm On Dec 31, 2015
ysadiq:
na dis nigeria
lol, welcome boh
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mismore(f): 4:07pm On Dec 31, 2015
mizquote:
wishing my esteem readers a happy new year in advance.

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Happy new year in advance too ma'am.

Thank you, nd nice updates as usual. *winks*
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Basit99(m): 10:20pm On Jan 01, 2016
mizquote:
she didn't run.

she saw the creature.
it was a man.

she saw him quite clearly.
he was evil.

she had spent all her life being with evil and mean people.
so she knew.

she could smell him.

she knew he would find her no sooner than later.
she was going to be a spectator.

a viewer in what will soon happen to her.

she observed him.
within 25seconds, she had a complete detailed comprehension about his physical outlook.

she observed to see if he had any weapon.
she knew he had.
she didn't see any but knew instinctively he had one conceive somewhere. he must have some sort of protection.

he saw her.
for a moment she froze.

her mind was devoid of any thought.
for she was consumed and lost in his stare.

he stopped for a while, she saw something like a smile play over his dangerous ugly face.

he began walking towards her.
big thumb up to d writer, extremely talented
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 12:31pm On Jan 02, 2016
she sat up. hugged her bag tightly and decide to prepare herself for whatever will happen.

maybe the man was sent to avenge the death of a whole family she killed.

her mind went to the scripture that read,
"an eye for an eye"
"give unto each man the same measure he gave unto others".

if it was so,
then death was the reward.

she watched the man move. his step were meticulous.
the step of calculated confidence.
she had a queer feeling.

she watched as he walked.
she held her breath as he approached her.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 12:40pm On Jan 02, 2016
he stopped, right before her.
no itch further.

she could see his face clearly. if the dictionary author had seen his face, he would have given the word 'ugly', a more intense and comprehensive definition.

the man wasn't just ugly, he looked heinous. he looked like the combination of an owl and a dog.

she didn't know what to say or how to behave.
she greeted him 'good evening'. so that if he was to kill her, he would be merciful and do it quick and a bit painless.

he didn't respond, not even with a nod of acknowledgment.

he stared deep into her eyes, he looked like someone who saw clearly in the dark.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 12:54pm On Jan 02, 2016
what are you doing here alone he asked.
his voice was so low more like a whisper, it sounded like a hiss.

she was scared.
dead scared.

she didn't know how to begin to explain to him,that she ran after killing her whole family.

she just shuddered.
he looked at her for a while, contemplating on what to do with her.

his hands began to crawl round her neck, his hands went deeper and deeper, down her cleavage region.

she knew what he wanted to do.
her heart sank.
she didn't protest, she let him do what he wanted to do.

even when he tore her dress and began stroking his manhood, she watched as it grew into an attention.

she didn't move.
she only had one regret.
she hated the fact that she was a woman.

the man had his way with her, spilled his seeds over her and stood up.
without a word, he zipped up and began to leave. he came there with the intention to steal from the boys who usually stay there but he saw her, and stole something else.

pleasure.

the man was her biological father brother.
he was her uncle.

none knew who the other was.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by slimkhan(m): 4:04pm On Jan 02, 2016
every post always killing it, fucking nice mehn

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Barney11: 7:47pm On Jan 02, 2016
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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Brown253(m): 9:19pm On Jan 02, 2016
As in, What manner of writer are u?
I've been painting the pictures of this story in my head as i read it, and i must tell u bae - This is out of this world.

Mizquote, ur story made me drop a tear.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 9:26pm On Jan 02, 2016
tnx everyone.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 9:37pm On Jan 02, 2016
that night was the worst night had ever had.
she was raped by an unknown man, mercilessly.
he had pummelled her. she wasn't arose and was dry. drier than the dust from the Sahara desert.
she had a tear.
for every stroke the mad did, the tear became wider. it felt like hot knife on a fresh wound.
the pain was intense. it was out of the world.
she bled. even after he left, she was dry faced. not a single tear dropped.
the cold became intensed . she tried to sleep. but sleep fled.
she never knew night was that long. she didn't sleep, not even a blink.
she prayed for nothing more. but morning. she waited desperately for morning to come.
soon enough. the day broke. slowly, lazily. it was morning.
its another day of suffering.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Missmossy(f): 10:31pm On Jan 02, 2016
Aww you are such an enthralling writer mizquote. Kudos dear, happy new year.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 10:41pm On Jan 02, 2016
hi everyone. I have some stories I wish to publish in hard copies.
if you have any publisher in mind, kindly pm me.
tnx once again.
goodnight.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Barney11: 12:07am On Jan 03, 2016
Loving it but don't keep me high pls continue updating
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Godwinfriz(m): 12:20am On Jan 03, 2016
great

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by missfrancess(f): 6:35am On Jan 03, 2016
ride on
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 8:27am On Jan 03, 2016
as soon as the cloud swallowed the stars. she picked up her bag and left the garage.

she walked slowly, like an old woman, for her whole body was in pain.

more still, she was hungry. she walked aimlessly, like a sheep lost in the wilderness.

until some one called her
hey you girl, see blood for your cloth o.

she didn't respond, she just going walking.
she heard the voice say,

" see this agbaya o?, person dey tell you say blood dey your cloth, you no dey answer, useless beast of no nation.

she didn't turn, she just continue walking until she got to an uncompleted building, where she changed her cloth.

she sat there for a while, then she went out, it was mid day.

her stomach had began to protest and riot. she needed to eat lest she died of starvation.

she saw a restaurant and walked in.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by missfrancess(f): 12:49pm On Jan 03, 2016
pls continue am with u...

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