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King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 7:17pm On Dec 11, 2015
Poets: Llaykorn and MuhdG


Poem Title: The Nigerian God

Look at how a Nigerian worships his god or God. The hypocrisy involved, the ignorance and wisdom of all adherents. The believe in one source but the hypocritical hatred for different tribes. The worship of men of God as the worship of God.
The disturbances of loud speakers and the blessing from a good God with someone's missing or misplaced money. Every evil associated with the Nigerian way of worshipping God.

Creativity - 2 points


Entertainment(Enjoyability) - 2 points



Rhymes - 2 points



Flow - 1 point



Consistency on Topic - 3 points



Vocabulary - 2 points (depending on topic) - 2 points



Emotion - 2 points



Imagery - 2 points


Your verses MUST be in line with the topic.


*The maximum number of lines for each verse should be 24Lines, No more, No less!!!

*Deadline is 6pm, 11th of December 2015

*Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than the deadline date.

*No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling.

*No complaining about votes.

*A no show attracts a ban.

*No unnecessary comments.

*No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof.
*If there's anything you need to say in defence of your poem/verses please save them for after voting's over.

*No arguments with established vets OR voters.

*Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that.

*Only vets and regular section posters are allowed to vote.

Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by llaykorn: 7:29pm On Dec 11, 2015
The heedless thirst to acheive consistent holy goals

Leaves my kinsmen vulnerable to men of lowly souls

Men acting like they had a glimpse through Moses' scrolls

But in truth they raising veiled banners for the devil

Carving followers into hate objects to get them in heaven

So they don't respect people's rights or learn to be gentle

I know there should be more dopeness hidden in these lines

But some church vigil kept me awoke throughout the night

I even have a depressed mind; I couldn't bear the sight

When they posted pics of the lil' kid shredded and torn

Explosives strapped on her to leave her helpless and burn

If it's God that makes people sefless and love

Why would someone kill a hundred yelling God is great?

Or they mean to say that in the eyes of God, love is hate?

Men with Holy Books leaving lil girls with bloodied fates

I cry for grown men walking around with baby minds

Cringing when the pastor yells "pay the tithe"!

Dues for the church and they aint even make the dime.

The sordid pastor rides in a late-model Highlander Jeep

While dust has turned his old-model white sandals green

Running behind the greedy men "Hi Father, please"

But guards won't let him near the man he calls Daddy

Think! Think bro! You aint a kid; stop that shît!

Hahah...Kiddy mindsets! Stinking mindsets; lock that pit!

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Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 7:35pm On Dec 11, 2015
Enjoy my half done verse




May God bless . . . Help . . . Protect . . .

Amen
.
.
.
Congregations answering (amen) as leaders end preaches

Feeling holy in heart, makes you feel you could bend bridges

They eyes teary, clinch together as they catch feelings

But once the foot's out they dry up, claiming “ain't
That silly”

Go to church, go to mosque, pray to God to make that money come

Promise you'll give alms and help others when conflict comes

But when it's right at your door step, you try to pull some funny stunts

Coz Beggars stomachs still same form as their unfilled cups

Few naira notes for your cups weren't part of my pay

Defying our religious teaching is the act of the day

As they bounce off, look sideways and walkaway

What u give is yours that's what my religion teaches

But that aint logical, i rather keep every dime n still have ma riches

Feelings get crushed when my brother aint my brother

And blood covers land when ma brother gets me smothered


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Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 7:49pm On Dec 11, 2015
Nice one, guys. I will call the judges soon. Writers block is very bad.
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 8:13pm On Dec 11, 2015
Open For Votes..
Judges

Sinizia
Funlord
Alexpissu
Adanna28
Kr0ne
Guykhena
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by kr0ne(m): 8:38pm On Dec 11, 2015
Creativity - 2 points - Tie


Entertainment(Enjoyability) - 2 points - Tie



Rhymes - 2 points - Tie



Flow - 1 point - Tie



Consistency on Topic - 3 points - Tie

These guys acted like twin brothers the way they matched every criterion with almost the same rhyme scheme and script layout. They both came prepared IMO. But I'm giving the W to Llaykorn for completing his lines. MuhdG was just a lazy lad

MVGT - Llaykorn!

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Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 8:55pm On Dec 11, 2015
kr0ne:
Creativity - 2 points - Tie


Entertainment(Enjoyability) - 2 points - Tie



Rhymes - 2 points - Tie



Flow - 1 point - Tie



Consistency on Topic - 3 points - Tie

These guys acted like twin brothers the way they matched every criterion with almost the same rhyme scheme and script layout. They both came prepared IMO. But I'm giving the W to Llay korn for completing his lines. Muhd G was just a lazy lad

MVGT - Llayk orn!
Lmao

I'm even surprised i got some points

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Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 8:55pm On Dec 11, 2015
Reyginus:
Nice one, guys. I will call the judges soon. Writers block is very bad.
Very bad I tell u
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by funlord(m): 9:16am On Dec 12, 2015
grin

Okay battle!

I have to say llaykorn did quite well in delivering a more rounded and entertaining rap poem! Was not on the level of his 1st poem in the group stages
but all join!

Muhdg? Why did your effort seem as if you did not "bring it"? Incomplete? Wtf? Anyway you get an "a" for effort but not much else!

"If you could not be bothered to complete the task/, you know there is no way in victorys glare you deserve
to bask/"...

( Shege funlord! Even while dropping verds he still spits flames!) LOL


Creativity - llaykorn

Entertainment - llaykorn

Rhymes - muhdg

Flow - llaykorn

Consistency on Topic - tie

Vocabulary - llaykorn

Emotion - muhdg

Imagery - llaykorn




MVGT; LLAYKORN


Best graph [ by llyakorn]:


"Why would someone kill a hundred yelling God is
great?

Or they mean to say that in the eyes of God,
love is hate?

Men with Holy Books leaving lil girls with bloodied
fates!"


Best graph [muhdg]

"Coz Beggars stomachs still same form as their
unfilled cups

Few naira notes for your cups weren't part of
my pay

Defying our religious teaching is the act of the
day"
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by sinizia: 9:54am On Dec 12, 2015
MVGT: Llaykorn.

Muhdg was good as well and would have won but he brought an incomplete verse to the arena. Nice one guys.
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 3:16pm On Dec 12, 2015
More votes please. I will close the process by 7:30pm.
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Guykhena(m): 4:56pm On Dec 12, 2015
Llaykorn verse was amazing on point with the topic,ironically MuhdG verse was great also,but just when his verse was getting more interesting he just stopped .
I'm sure if his verse was complete he would have given llaykorn a run for his money.

MVGT-Llaykorn
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 7:49pm On Dec 12, 2015
For the obvious fact that MuhdG didn't complete his verse Llaykorn wins.
Thread Closed. Llaykorn advances to Semi Final.
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 10:04pm On Dec 12, 2015
Congratulations ma man!

Go get the title cheesy

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