Good job, but i noticed a mistake on the last update...... where you said Mirabel die,
Please, Ejo, Biko, correct that error fast for peace and progress. How could you allowed my favorite character to die. My Mirabel *Sobbing*

Mara and clara. promise and mirable

Could it be Promise?

. Ghost Reader here... Well done boss...

I sensed it that Mirabel was going to die.
Promise is not yet married but did not want to belittle herself or make herself cheap, the two of them will go on a dinner right in Nigeria, reunite their friendship nd then formalise it. then relocate to the States.

Vincent and Nancy who has being having issues with their relationship before will now be allowed, they will have a very big wedding which in turn unites the two families again not minding the identity of Mirable, the embarrassment it caused and her death.

That will equally make Victor now become the In-Law to the President's family despite all odds.

Then for the circumstances surrounding the birth of Mirabel, there was a mix up while tagging the babies at birth and the hospital was closed down for some time but reopened later.

Goodnite!

I sensed it that Mirabel was going to die.
Promise is not yet married but did not want to belittle herself or make herself cheap, the two of them will go on a dinner right in Nigeria, reunite their friendship nd then formalise it. then relocate to the States.

Vincent and Nancy who has been having issues with their relationship before will now be allowed, they will have a very big wedding which in turn unites the two families again not minding the identity of Mirable, the embarrassment it caused and her death.

That will equally make Victor now the In-Law to the President's family despite all odds.

Then for the circumstances surrounding the birth of Mirabel, there was a mix up while tagging the babies at birth and the hospital was closed down for some time but reopened later.

Goodnite!

Well, I think Promise will be the President daughter, maybe they interchange d babies after birth. We will get d answer in d next episode.

Why do i keep on thinking victor is having a really really bad dream...o.m.g..mirabel nooooooooo

Promise wil finally turn out to be the president's daughter

comradespade:
ghost mode deactivated time to comment.

sir vame y Mirabel go die my crush....ooooo y u no die? y he cum b mirabel.......dem send u make u just dey kill all my crush? first one na Dorothy second one na Lola now Mirabel. chairman I go fight u o........all d way nice write up have been following u since d part one reached front page more ink to your pen and more grease to ya elbow

e be like say your crush strong o.. This one the crush de kill everybody the crush de crush

If to say him die you think say story go come out ni??

A very heart touchin story, tinz lyk ds cn apen in reality as well, OP ds story is so awesome.
Ehen u saiid we shud gues wats apenin next, my opinion is dat victor might b d son of d president, he and mirabel myt b changed at birth by nancy mum because she wana av a male child, wel as 4 me i dnt tink promise is d dota of d president, or culd it b dorothy?.
Make i wait till monday so dat i cn find out, great work once again OP

Oga vict vames, I doff my hat...... Mahn, you're a writer.
Those that are saying, promise will be president's daughter, don't get too happy because what we all thought was promise would be the donor and mirabel would apologize and all......
Nice twist op.. For this amazing work $20,000 is your reward
Epp me manage it

Perhaps promise is the real daughter of the president..


#dodgesStones.....RunsOuttaThread

Bukkiminat:
Perhaps promise is the real daughter of the president..


#dodgesStones.....RunsOuttaThread

that's just what am thinking of too
and I think promise is just trying to forget about Victor but she is not really married

I still believe that Promise is not yet married and she is the president's daughter.
Cant wait for the next update.
Ride on

Oya Naija film, Mr Victor, d 1st episode of dis story is about to unfold o, Beware ! (Fingers crossed.)

Bro u have tried..
Promise is not married she is pretending..
WOAW.
SIR, I passed my final exams..now SS3 LOADING.
I beg your pardon
Prepare a latest one to help me during boring classes..
In case u need help financially... My mail:
Rershieth@gmail.com

Wow!!!

This story has kept me on my toes and a lot of lesson has been learnt. I think Promise is the daughter of the President! And oh! my deepest condolences to Mr. Vict-vames.

Victor I want to draw your attention to some people who are posting your stories on rogue sites and WhatsApp groups! I don't know if you personally allow it but I could track some of those people electronically for you bro! You work hard for this mehn!

#peace

donjayz321:
Wow!!!

This story has kept me on my toes and a lot of lesson has been learnt. I think Promise is the daughter of the President! And oh! my deepest condolences to Mr. Vict-vames.

Victor I want to draw your attention to some people who are posting your stories on rogue sites and WhatsApp groups! I don't know if you personally allow it but I could track some of those people electronically for you bro! You work hard for this mehn!

#peace

we'll really love if you can be of help so that we'll bring them down

I don't know how some people will confidently steal people's work without conscience

What a sad way to end such a wonderful story

Mr Vick ur story kept me on this section this long nw DAT this story is ending I can't wait to read another story from u thanks A MILLION for the wonderful time. for all my days on nairaland this story is the only 1 DAT finish well u are gifted pls keep it up.

Promise can't be President daughter because they don't have the same birthday date. We should have gotten an hint on Mirabel birthday if they do.

#sobbing seriously,,,,, rip Mirabel!! May her gentle and loving soul rest in peace. I didn't think bout it for once that Mirabel s gonna..we've lost so many in this story oo! RIP to Lola,Dorothy..can't wait to have the novel on my table!! #wiping my tears now

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You've done a good job here. Cheers!!!

Ghost mode deactivate... time to comment.. can't just keep d silent again #victvame UA really genius #indeed a great writer... really love story #u try alot Bro #more grese to your elbow #more wisdom to u bro... have a blessed weekend

If I no comment Nah bad thing, this story got my hands filled, putting me in a frantic race to get to the root of the love story, Now I'm waiting for the last episode..... Bless you vames, you are good... But Shey we no fit do revival session for 7 churches for 7 days, maybe she go wake, Abeg resurrect her now.. .abeg

victor, you did a wonderful job in getting this story so far. you happen to be my birthday mate i love the plot thumbs up bro

Ghost mode deactivated.........

Mr. Vick, I will say you have done a near perfect job. The construction of your work gets improved episode by episode.....love your effort..it shows a lots of hard work.

Keep the ink running.......Victvames.



First time to comment on Nairaland since years that I joined......All for you, Victor.

Wow! What a beautiful and heart touching story. Kudos to u bro.. U av really done a good job. Can't just wait for d last update.

RIP Mirabel
Vict Weldon may God bless u more
waiting for last breathe
hope to hear president daughter
don't tell it promizy!!