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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 6:54pm On May 19, 2016
dimssy:
Na so I go download the song... @donkross1,gbayi.

You gbadun d song abi?
DandyPearl:
Hemmm....Oyinprince, I'm an oliver twist. You might not know this but donkross1 knows cheesy. So abeg give us more bikowink

I know you well well na.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by aprilwise(m): 5:24am On May 20, 2016
wonderful masterpiece.

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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Iyke1998(m): 11:25am On May 20, 2016
Oya baba DonKross,come show us love abeg.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Tunechi1(m): 12:00pm On May 20, 2016
gbens2000:
u guys are redefining perfection,i really hail una wella.u av caught ppl attention with the intensity,variable suspense and ur articulated writing.nice one guys keep it up,waiting for the next chapter in anticipation of the thrills and trips.
haba why do u have to quote the whole update just to comment fear God ooo
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by gbens2000(m): 12:03pm On May 20, 2016
Tunechi1:
haba why do u have to quote the whole update just to comment fear God ooo
i didnt really mean to.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Tunechi1(m): 12:11pm On May 20, 2016
gbens2000:
i didnt really mean to.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Tunechi1(m): 12:12pm On May 20, 2016
gbens2000:
i didnt really mean to.
alrt bro but try dey pity us wey dey use small fone
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by gbens2000(m): 12:30pm On May 20, 2016
Tunechi1:

alrt bro but try dey pity us wey dey use small fone
lolz ok sir
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Nobody: 2:50pm On May 20, 2016
Please we need updates @ donkross
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Stlomo1s(f): 3:13pm On May 20, 2016
U guys ar 2 much,more ink 2 ur pen''donkross1 wetin happen,ur wife no follow u come here cos she no 2 dey comment ooo..nice work@oyinprince well done
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by SenatorPope(m): 3:37pm On May 20, 2016
I must confess that this Literary work is Superb... Kudos to you Guys.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 9:56pm On May 20, 2016
aprilwise:
wonderful masterpiece.

Thanks boss
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 9:56pm On May 20, 2016
SenatorPope:
I must confess that this Literary work is Superb... Kudos to you Guys.

Thanks Pope smiley
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 9:58pm On May 20, 2016
Stlomo1s:
U guys ar 2 much,more ink 2 ur pen''donkross1 wetin happen,ur wife no follow u come here cos she no 2 dey comment ooo..nice work@oyinprince well done

Lool my wife dey oo, she just silent ni.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 10:01pm On May 20, 2016
Iyke1998:
Oya baba DonKross,come show us love abeg.

mhiz:
Please we need updates @ donkross


We sincerely apologise for not being able to post here today but you can please catch up with Chapter 5b and Chapter 6a here http://www.youngicee.com/?m=1

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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Hawlahscho(m): 10:16pm On May 20, 2016
Wow! Two people writing a story.

I believe you guys are together and not two ghosts that met online. grin

I see this story going places and the expert method of carefully using your words to fit in is astonishing.

Both of you should keep it up. I wish to feature any or both of you in any story. I write as well. smiley
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 10:29pm On May 20, 2016
5B



Host returned six hours after he left, after having with his girlfriend a nice time; a process he believed was a refreshment to his body and soul. The guys were looking famished already, only their phones had been able to keep them from complaining bitterly. Of course, except for Fabio who was looking lifeless, like a prayer warrior who had just finished a thirty days and nights fasting without getting an answer to his problems.

They all stopped what they were doing with their phones and rose to their feet on hearing the approaching footsteps of Host. He walked in seconds later and quietly proceeded to the seat he previously occupied. He had changed his clothes now and was looking calmer, he also had his green Beret on his head. He remained quiet for a couple of minutes, looking like he was reflecting on a plan.

"What have you people being able to come up with so far?" He finally broke the silence with his question.

There was no answer to his question. Host looked at each of their faces one after the other and smirked on seeing Fabio's face. The contorted look on Fabio's face and the thick lines on his forehead revealed his bottled-in frustration.

"The White Tigers would not let El Salam go without a fight and I'm sure the fight is coming soon," he continued. "Like I said earlier, it's time to use the opportunity and finally take over. Enough is enough! We should stop ruling the campus alongside the tigers, now we would wipe them out and show the world who reigns indeed. We've always been their masters, it's just that we've allowed them play too much."

~~~

**Next morning**

"So make sure you write all the assignments and submit them on Monday." Ojo said to the guy standing in front of him. They were both standing in front of Ojo's car and the door to the driver's seat was opened, Ojo was ready to step into his car but only had to finish off his conversation with the guy.

"Alright, I'll submit the ones I can and bring those ones whose submission dates have passed to you." The guy replied.

Ojo Bolarinde was a final year student of business administration. He was one of those invisible students in class, he only shows up for classes three to four times in a semester and never waits till the end of any lectures. He hardly shows up for tests and exams also but his scripts and signature on the attendance booklets are always found miraculously by the examiners.

This was one of the days he showed up for lectures, he had come in twenty minutes to the end of the lecture and waited till the lecturer left the hall. He then walked up to meet one of the intelligent students in his class and called him aside to see him. He had a coursemate who was always helping him with assignments before but was absent from school for some weeks due to an unknown illness. He had to choose another one who was a close friend to the former and whom he knew was aware of his activities with his friend.

Some students rumoured Ojo to be a married man with kids who was working in a multinational company and just wanted to further his education. They said he had no time to read as all his time was invested into making money for himself and his family.

Another popular rumour in the department was that he was a top member of the White Tigers, one of the most notorious cults in school. But none had been able to prove their claims, all they passed around were hearsays. Only few students who were officials in the Student Union Government were sure of their claims. Their proof was the semblance of his name, Ojo to the well noised nick of the third in command to the White Tiger's Cappon, Screw.

Screw, his deputy, Coded and OJ were well known by their nicks, but their faces were unknown by other people. OJ's face was still well known amongst the cult members who keeps his identity secret but Screw the Boss and Coded was only known by the top ranked members.

The second rumour only began to look truer recently when a lecturer insulted Ojo in the class and promised to ensure Ojo fails in his course if he doesn't start to see him in class frequently. Ojo had been quiet while the man was talking that day and even apologized after the lecturer finished with his insults, stating that he would have loved to always be present for lectures but the nature of his job would not permit. The lecturer ignored Ojo's apologies and added more insults but Ojo remained quiet and waited until thirty minutes after the lecture before leaving the class in his usual manner.

It was a big surprise to everyone in the class when the next day, news circulated that the lecturer's tongue had been cut off by unknown people in his residence that night, his wife and eldest daughter were also molested by the attackers. Since then, the lecturer did not show up in the university again and nothing more was heard about him. It was still not confirmed that the lecturer's tragedy was a result of his haulingĀ  of insults on Ojo. The police had investigated the case and found Ojo innocent of any charge. That left people doubting if OJ was a member of the White Tigers or not but most people had to accept that he wasn't because they had never seen him with a known member of the tigers in school or anywhere else.

The sound of a car horn distracted both Ojo and the guy he was talking with. The guy had to move closer to Ojo's car as a Camry pencil occupied the space close next to them.

"Please make sure you bring them early enough, so I can submit them myself. Most of the lecturers are my friends and they understand my busy schedule." Ojo said with a smile.

"Okay then, I'll call you" the guy said and turned to leave.

"Thank you," Ojo watched him walk away first before turning to enter his car.

"... Slimmy, Woooow!" He stopped as he heard an excited scream from the car by his side. He turned back to look.

A young girl had just come out of the car, smiling as she stared into her phone with full attention. She quickly typed in some words into the phone before locking the car door. She looked into the phone briefly again before picking out her sunglasses and fixing it on her face. Her gaze met with Ojo's as she glanced up.

"Hi," he said to her, with a smile.

Read Chapter 6A on www.youngicee.com

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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 10:29pm On May 20, 2016
Hawlahscho:
Wow! Two people writing a story.

I believe you guys are together and not two ghosts that met online. grin

I see this story going places and the expert method of carefully using your words to fit in is astonishing.

Both of you should keep it up. I wish to feature any or both of you in any story. I write as well. smiley

We met online but we are not ghosts cheesy, he is a brother ... About the story, we can talk things out smiley.







Oyinprince ah see you spying, report for duty asap.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 10:33pm On May 20, 2016
Hawlahscho:
Wow! Two people writing a story.
I believe you guys are together and not two ghosts that met online. grin
I see this story going places and the expert method of carefully using your words to fit in is astonishing.
Both of you should keep it up. I wish to feature any or both of you in any story. I write as well. smiley
Yes sir, we agree together o, maybe not physically cheesy

Do you have your stories on NL?
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 10:33pm On May 20, 2016
donkross1:


We met online but we are not ghost cheesy, he is a brother ... About the story, we can talk things out smiley.







Oyinprince ah see you spying, report for duty asap.

Lol, Na your apology I first sight for the thread. I be like who teh this Don say we no go update today?
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 10:36pm On May 20, 2016
Oyinprince:


Lol, Na your apology I first sight for the thread. I be like who teh this Don say we no go update today?

As I no hear from you since morning na, I been think say you dey experience #change cheesy
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 10:53pm On May 20, 2016
donkross1:


As I no hear from you since morning na, I been think say you dey experience #change cheesy
Correct! you no need prophet to tell u say Na change things hold me down since morning. As I con hustle to charge for thirty minutes now, Updates con plenty for me to type, I no sabi where I go start from.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by uthman305(m): 7:42am On May 21, 2016
Let d killings Begin,,, surely heads will roll
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 12:38pm On May 21, 2016
[b]
Host drove as as fast as he could as soon as he got the message from Adesuwa, he didn't even think twice before leaving the mansion, he couldn't even tell Slimmy who is his right hand man, all he was thinking is how fast he could get to Adesuwa's house to give her the inhaler she left in his car when they went out earlier that day, he wouldn't forgive himself if he didn't get there in time to save her from the asthma attack. He parked his car right in front of her compound and stormed through the gate, he was about to turn the knob of the door when he noticed something strange, the key was left hanging outside, he held himself from opening the door even when all he wanted to do was save his girlfriend, the moon of his life, the only lady he has ever loved ever since he was forced to kill his first love when he newly joined the arch angels, he could still remember the shock in her eyes when he stabbed her in the abdomen, he could still remember the look of betrayal, he could still remember her last words 'Why Olanrewaju, why' she kept on repeating till she lost all her strength and gave up the ghost.


He stood at the door trying to listen if he could hear some struggles or sounds from Adesuwa inside but there was nothing, on the contrary he thought to himself that it was a trap, there and then he started fixing the lines, Adesuwa has never at any point risked not having at least 3 to 4 extra inhalers in her room, Adesuwa has never texted him in abbreviations like the message was sent
"Ola my inhaler pls am dying pls brng it 2 my ause"

And to top it all, he remembered vividly that Adesuwa never call him Ola, it's either she calls him Olanrewaju or Host. At that moment he made up his mind that it was all a trap that he had almost fallen into, he ran back into his car and drove off but a voice inside of him kept repeating those delicate words

'Why Olanrewaju, why '




*** Few hours back ******


"... Slimmy, Woooow!" He stopped as he heard an excited scream from the car by his side. He turned back to look.

A young girl had just come out of the car, smiling as she stared into her phone with full attention. She quickly typed in some words into the phone before locking the car door. She looked into the phone briefly again before picking out a black sunglasses and fixing it on her face. Her gaze met with Ojo's as she glanced up.

"Hi," he said to her, with a smile.

"Hi' she replied back less enthusiastically.

"Surely you don't remember me do you? " he was now out of his car and stranding in front of her

"Nope, should I"

"My name is Ojo, I met with you and your cousin Halimat the other day at the cafeteria "

"Oooh it's you, am so sorry for being rude hey"

"It's no problem, pardon me but I can't seem to remember that sweet name of yours"

"Hadijat"

"I promise I won't forget that anymore"

"So what's up with you and my cousin"

"Your cousin is the best actress that can star in a movie titled hard to get" he joked and they both laugh really hard.

"You seem like a nice guy, I might put in a good word for you " she replied still smiling.

"I will really appreciate it"

"I gotta run now, I have a class to attend"

"Okay dear, please don't forget to put in a good word for me"

"Okay lover boy" she replied as she walked away and he drove off, she then took out her phone again to check if she really saved the image before being distracted by Ojo, the image was right there in her gallery, a picture of Slimmy that she just saw on Gentle's profile picture, a picture of a shirtless Slimmy laughing hysterically, it was really a sight to behold, the picture made her melt inside, she didn't even realise when she screamed out his name moments ago when she was the picture.




_________



"Are you sure you don't want to come inside and get a little massage from momma" Adesuwa asked Host teasingly

"Ohh sounds tempting but have got some things to fix" Host replied and Adesuwa dropped from the car, watched Host zoom off before entering her gate, she just finished turning the key and about to turn the knob when she felt a cold metal at her head.

'Just open the door and go inside slowly' a male voice commanded from behind and she obliged, she went into the house and four guys came inside with her.

'we are not here for you, just do as we say and you will scale through all of these unscathed' the commanding voice spoke again 'bring out your phone and unlock it' she did as she was told, the guy with the commanding tone typed somethings on the phone and dropped it on the sofa afterwards, he instructed the other guys to place a tape on Adesuwa's mouth

'Just to be sure, you didn't remember to pick your inhaler from Host's car, did you ?" The guy with the commanding tone asked her and Adesuwa shook her head with a look of shock all over her face.

"Wondering how we got to know that yeah? One of my boys just checked his car to confirm that and do you even know where he is right now?" he asked her again while she just kept quiet and stared at him inquisitively 'He is stuck in traffic, one of my boys just drove a motorcycle past him and he made sure to scan for the inhaler that was laying on the driver's side, I bet you were expecting me to say he is with another girl" the guy said laughing really hard, looked like he was enjoying himself.


* * Present time * *


They all sat down patiently awaiting Host's arrival. After some minutes they heard a car parking outside the compound, one of them immediately rushed towards the curtains to check who was approaching from the gate 'It's him' he announced, they all took brought out their nine millimetres and pointed it to the door, they were all ready to shoot him as soon as he opened the door but for some reasons he didn't, he just stayed outside for a moment ,then turned back and rushed away.


'Seems like your boyfriend don't really care if you die from an asthma attack' the guy with the commanding tone spoke, in a much angrier tone this time. "Check what he's doing," he ordered one of the boys with a head gesture.
The guy quickly peeped through the window and checked. "He's driving out o," he returned saying to the one who seemed to be the leader of the attack.
The guy took in a breath, his face clearly displayed his anger and disgust as he confirmed with the sound of the car driving away. Kill Host, that was the plan. But they wouldn't leave without doing anything if Host refuses to present himself. He paced around angrily for a few minutes, staring at Adesuwa who was vibrating and visibly terrified.
He glanced at his wristwatch, they had waited about six minutes for Host and he wasn't returning. He stopped pacing around and began to think. It would be dangerous to linger any longer. Host may just have another plan for them, remembering that Host was more conversant with the area than he and his men. He raised up his gun and cocked it. He pointed it straight to the middle of Adesuwa's forehead.

[/b]


Chapter 6b is available here http://www.youngicee.com/2016/05/a-new-creation-chapter-6b.html
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Hawlahscho(m): 1:29pm On May 21, 2016
donkross1:


We met online but we are not ghosts cheesy, he is a brother ... About the story, we can talk things out smiley.



Oyinprince ah see you spying, report for duty asap.

hawlahscho@gmail.com you can mail me your WhatsApp digits smiley
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Hawlahscho(m): 1:30pm On May 21, 2016
Oyinprince:
Yes sir, we agree together o, maybe not physically cheesy

Do you have your stories on NL?

I've just two (part 1 and 2)

I'm not willing to drop others free, maybe publish them first. abi what do you think smiley
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Hawlahscho(m): 1:44pm On May 21, 2016
Hmmmmmm.


Still I Follow!
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by hefelove(m): 8:48pm On May 21, 2016
Mk i no lie am soo loving dis story. Awon boyz mejeji yi oyin ati don elenu pa
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Nobody: 10:21pm On May 21, 2016
Oh my God!!!, this is getting interesting.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Nobody: 10:27pm On May 21, 2016
mhiz:
Oh my God!!!, this is getting interesting.
is it?
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Freeezzz(m): 11:06pm On May 21, 2016
Don't shoot idi-ot, use the pillow or teddy bear, so it will look like she really choked to death and Host will still have himself to blame and more importantly, you won't risk letting Host and his team know about your plan. wink cool
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Nobody: 11:11pm On May 21, 2016
juhan:
is it?
Lol, yea.

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