I hope nothing happens to her o

bibijay123:



Bro shey na me be d crazy bus driver or Linda?

Abeg jst put a twist on it. I don't want anything to happen to my Tomi o

bibijay123 please don't kill tomi(crying ) please save her.
meanwhile more power to your elbow. the story is getting more interesting. well written.

Oh no! I pray nothing happens to Tomi or I won't eat again. Girl, am in love with this story. Kudos to you

purity22:
Oh no! I pray nothing happens to Tomi or I won't eat again. Girl, am in love with this story. Kudos to you

you won't trick me again with this " I won't eat oo" i updated so that you can eat. lol * Tongue out* hope u hve eaten now?

I hope nothing happens to tomi

This cliff-hanger na die. Bibi, don't take so long before updating us o.

bibijay123:



The dude wanted to employ me.

Lol, I didn't even read the comment before the quote.

pls let bibi do what's best for the drama-thats how u people didn't allow her end Allen avenue well.its drama abeg

vandops10:
pls let bibi do what's best for the drama-thats how u people didn't allow her end Allen avenue well.its drama abeg

Really? How should It have ended? I mean Allen avenue? Do you have a thing against happy ever after?

Bibi plz, Tomi should not die o nd she should not be marred either. Plz work ur magic. I fear I won't sleep until I know she's okay Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

From the devil has the money to Allen Avenue and now this. U r really great ma'am. I must thank Kingphilip for showing me this masterpiece. Kudos ma'am.u v got a great fan in me. Pls I d wanna ask if u r aware that a certain page on fb is posting ur story (Allen Avenue), a certain page called will u marry me. Just wanted to let u know.

bibijay123:
Chapter Eleven


Dedicated to Swann, unmask, Fidelismaria, Tamedwolf90, purity22,

Awwn, thank you bibi for the dedication. I'm honoured. This update is a bomb. And im sure that the person that said kelvins are not good pple must be grinning from ear to ear...

lemme just see how it will end #foreverhooked

If I'm ignorant or novice of everything about life; wifey aint part ..... I'm sure she's not wicked to let anything happen to Tomi, I know you ain't the one to blame but the crazy driver... Linda sef is weirdo
Keep it up bae, keep making our family proud. We r all proud of ya.
More juice to your brain

Ochyglowsglows:
From the devil has the money to Allen Avenue and now this. U r really great ma'am. I must thank Kingphilip for showing me this masterpiece. Kudos ma'am.u v got a great fan in me. Pls I d wanna ask if u r aware that a certain page on fb is posting ur story (Allen Avenue), a certain page called will u marry me. Just wanted to let u know.

I am not aware of that.Thank you for letting me know.

TamedWolf90:
Bibijay123 thanks for the dedication, I'm glee but if Kelvin no enter that burning bus bring out Tomi, I will join NLC on solidarity strike and will stop reading o..na Tomi and kelvin character I just dy envisage here...likening them to Dominique and I. I had go into the flame for her

You would go into the fire for her? awww that is so sweet!

Bibi, I take God beg you, no kill did girl like did na plsssssssssss

'M guessing Tomi wasn't in the bus....i hope so too

M sure Tomi wasn't in the bus or why will Bibi wahn kill her eh

I pray Kelvin was dreaming.Bibi... come update biko.son of man is waiting

I just luv this with all my heart.

Pls tell me tomi was nt in that bus....... I will experience heart ache if she dies oooo. Pls mention me in ur nxt update. Kudos

Tomi no fit die na.

Bibi why you take us dey play rough play na?
Oya update let me assuage my fears.

Bibi ooooooo I want More!!!!!

bibi, plz dnt let anytin happen to tomi oooo cos mi o ni gba ooo; anoda update

wow!!! dats all I can say after reading dis super, mind blowing romantic story written by a super talented, creative n beautiful sunshine babe.......Bibijay
Ride on gurl

Bibijay123, please, don't do erekere ooo -'Tomi must not die oooo! Ehn hen.

So this chapter had to end like this, like seriously now why do I suddenly feel like flogging you?

I'll pray "it's over" refers to the fire and that the ambulances came in time to save Tomi or better yet, Kelvin is dreaming. Yes Kelvin is dreaming

m'Lady come update now
Still here

bummybummy:
bibi, plz dnt let anytin happen to tomi oooo cos mi o ni gba ooo; anoda update

ooo ni gba, o funy sha

Tanx for d update sis, more grace

Thanks bibijay123 this story is superb.... You are good dear..