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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 8:42am On Sep 02, 2016

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by yorhmienerd(m): 9:27am On Sep 02, 2016
Lost track of the story before but thank God I am back. Nice on bibijay123.
Crowniey I think you should see this

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Aitee1: 9:33am On Sep 02, 2016
bibijay123:



Skarlett' s diary of assistant girlfriend. You wee love it grin



Thanks dear I was busy reading your "Allen avenue"


I must confess you're gifted!!!

One more thing is that story real?

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Nobody: 11:23am On Sep 02, 2016
Your story is very nice, as usual. I think this Dantata character or his family as a whole will be very interesting. I suspect a family secret too (mother and sister where behind his father's death, because obviously their mourning was all fake).

I don't mean to override you, just that the story is really good.

Still here!

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 11:51am On Sep 02, 2016
Aitee1:




Thanks dear I was busy reading your "Allen avenue"


I must confess you're gifted!!!

One more thing is that story real?



Thank you. Yea the story is real. grin
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 11:52am On Sep 02, 2016
jagugu88li:
Your story is very nice, as usual. I think this Dantata character or his family as a whom will be very interesting. I suspect a family secret too (mother and sister where behind his father's death, because obviously their mourning was all fake).

I don't mean to override you, just that the story is really good.

Still here!


Thank you babe.....let's see how it goes grin

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 11:53am On Sep 02, 2016
yorhmienerd:
Lost track of the story before but thank God I am back.

I don't get. You were confused or ......?
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by olatex25(m): 12:04pm On Sep 02, 2016
Hmm, weldone sis. U are doing a gr8 job here..
Why on earth wil a wife want her husband died, tinz are happening oo. (obirin bimo fun ni koni koma pani).. To such ladies out dere, "dere is God ooo"..
I have a question for u & i wil b glad if u wil ans me; what is it reali feel like havin a girlfriend?

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by eROCK247(m): 12:16pm On Sep 02, 2016
How can a young lady be so lazy and dirty? Maybe it's her background? A lady that can't clean her own crib...the imagery u r painting is so detailed, I can practically perceive d foul smell in her room! Lol. Gud job... gladly #following

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by jacy67(f): 12:19pm On Sep 02, 2016
Bibi don come again o! Babe you too much...

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Aitee1: 12:36pm On Sep 02, 2016
bibijay123:



Thank you. Yea the story is real. grin

That's serious, now assuming I have a story(real life scenario) how do I get it across to you in detail

N/B: I won't have time to pen it down oh, maybe some phone conversation cos I'm certain I'm not in the same location with you.

Is that even possible?

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Daliano(m): 1:02pm On Sep 02, 2016
Someone should please send the link of "The President's daughter" by Victor Vames
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 1:03pm On Sep 02, 2016
Aitee1:


That's serious, now assuming I have a story(real life scenario) how do I get it across to you in detail

N/B: I won't have time to pen it down oh, maybe some phone conversation cos I'm certain I'm not in the same location with you.

Is that even possible?



Send me a pm. But the person whose story u want to share with me must have lend his/ her consent to it before i can write it. Thanks grin
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 1:05pm On Sep 02, 2016
olatex25:
Hmm, weldone sis. U are doing a gr8 job here..
Why on earth wil a wife want her husband died, tinz are happening oo. (obirin bimo fun ni koni koma pani).. To such ladies out dere, "dere is God ooo"..
I have a question for u & i wil b glad if u wil ans me; what is it reali feel like havin a girlfriend?

Lol u should ask the guys nau bt i think it feels eating ice cream and burger. Just be careful not to get ketchup on ur shirt and u r gud to go!, grin

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 1:05pm On Sep 02, 2016
jacy67:
Bibi don come again o! Babe you too much...


Thank u.
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Tunechi1(m): 1:57pm On Sep 02, 2016
Teespice:


read the devil has money and you will be amazed at her talent.
another thriller be dat oo
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Teespice(f): 1:59pm On Sep 02, 2016
Tunechi1:
another thriller be dat oo
you can say that again.
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 3:15pm On Sep 02, 2016
After a rough; busy day, cooling down with this ain't bad

Bibi; you're blessed

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by toboski1(m): 4:04pm On Sep 02, 2016
Bibi you Jesus is coming soon to take his people home pls comman update on time na grin
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 4:49pm On Sep 02, 2016
toboski1:
Bibi you Jesus is coming soon to take his people home pls comman update on time na grin

Lol.....foxy is in the kitchen grin but Una no dey criticize the story until i ask for review n i will be surprised to hear abt many error.
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 4:50pm On Sep 02, 2016
eROCK247:
How can a young lady be so lazy and dirty? Maybe it's her background? A lady that can't clean her own crib...the imagery u r painting is so detailed, I can practically perceive d foul smell in her room! Lol. Gud job... gladly #following


Lol grin
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 5:02pm On Sep 02, 2016
veekid:
After a rough; busy day, cooling down with this ain't bad

Bibi; you're blessed

U r blessed too
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by sniffydon(m): 5:45pm On Sep 02, 2016
My dream is to marry a good writer...

Time to start saving for an engagement ring

grin grin grin grin

Waiting to read more on your story.

More ink to your pen Bibi

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by DAramis: 6:16pm On Sep 02, 2016
jacy67:
Bibi don come again o! Babe you too much...
Madam,

Some one asked you a question at eedc thread, you should at least have replied the person.

Please check the thread and reply the guy.

Thanks.

Don't want to derail this thread
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by yorhmienerd(m): 7:03pm On Sep 02, 2016
bibijay123:

I don't get. You were confused or ......?
Yeah confused, but the next episodes she more light to it
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by toboski1(m): 7:43pm On Sep 02, 2016
bibijay123:


Lol.....foxy is in the kitchen grin but Una no dey criticize the story until i ask for review n i will be surprised to hear abt many error.

my brain is configured to auto correction that why you don't see me criticize grin
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Jay542(m): 8:41pm On Sep 02, 2016
This is how bibi wants to call it a night with this Dantata part angry Person go just get bad dream sad
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by noblet2(f): 9:02pm On Sep 02, 2016
I keep refreshing this page, yet Bibi has placed me on its coming...Diaris God ooo..
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by toboski1(m): 9:28pm On Sep 02, 2016
noblet2:
I keep refreshing this page, yet Bibi has placed me on its coming...Diaris God ooo..

tell her oooo
I no know the food foxflexy dey cook so
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bakeuhappy: 9:44pm On Sep 02, 2016
Hello Bibi,
Nice job keep it up. more ink to ur pen. i must confess your work is beautiful.
Pls I'm kinda lost in the area where Tomi went home to see her parents after a meal she went upstairs to her old room .how did Rich get to her room in her parents house n how did d other guy know her parents house. cos from your story her parents r yet to meet the man in her life.

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 9:45pm On Sep 02, 2016
* Continues*

Dedicated to Olatex25


Dantata


Being careful made me really observant of things going on around me. Back at the Joseph's residence, I was scared, a little. The turn out of people with goodwill towards that family was much. Those I had seen, those I've heard of and even the so called people that came to mock them whilst putting on sober faces. I saw them all. When the door opened and Kelvin with the vagabond of his friend, Tosin stepped in, I started sweating.


Tosin had always made me aware of myself. First, he doesn't speak much so I don't even know what is always going on in his head. Secondly, there is the special glint that flashes through his eyes whenever the name Victoria is mentioned. And the way he looks at her, God, makes me want to choke the life out of him. Who does that? Stares at a lady and forgets his immediate surroundings. Yes, you got it right, Tosin.


Do not blame me. I have something for Victoria. Mother had always told me that I should use my charm on Linda but the girl is just too rude and bossy for my liking. When Victoria came to me to be her date, I was taken aback. This is the same girl that I would gladly worship the ground that she steps on.


"Dantata, please do this for me. Just for a night."

Victoria had said when we met under the umbrella tree in their larger than life compound. Maggie had called me but refused to tell me what was up on the phone.


"Boyfriend for a night Victoria? What do you take me for?"


I asked staring into her lovely eyes.


"I take you as one who would do anything for a price."


Maybe she did not intend to say it for she quickly covered her mouth with her palms. I felt hurt all the same, more like a dagger slashing through my tender heart. There was no way in the world I would blame her. My reputation seemed to had preceded me in this case.



"200 thousand naira."


I called a price with an unsmiling face.


"Ah ahn, is it because of what I said? Dantata, remember our family are close to each other."


Victoria tried bargaining.


"Yes they are but business is business."


I replied curtly. She was quiet, as if thinking about what I said.


"Okay, pick me up tomorrow by 5:00pm."


I nodded, turned back, left the house, got into my mom's car and drove back to the house.


The date was awesome but even more awesome was the luncheon we had attended. I saw class and status. People speaking in accent and all the introductions taking place. All through I never left Victoria's side. Like the faithful boyfriend/handbag, I followed her everywhere. I whispered into her ears and made her laugh ceaselessly. Linda was staring at us, I saw jealousy in her eyes but I was past caring. Since her panties were way classier and bossier than me, I would make do with a paid class.


"Thank you Dantata. You are the best."


Victoria said as I dropped her. I was sad that the day had ended. No hugs, no kisses, not even a peck but I was contented. I had the woman of my dreams by my side.

"The pleasure is always mine."

I replied. I inched a little closer for her lips staring into her eyes. She looked back into my eyes and slightly shut hers. I moved in, aiming for the kill closing my eyes midway.


"Dantata, here is your money. It was such a wonderful experience. We should do it some other time."


I heard Victoria's voice. Picture me inched a little sideways, eyes closed and lips a little pouted. I opened my eyes to see Victoria holding an envelope. She dropped it on my dash board, moved close and pecked me on my cheek. I remained in that position till the gate of their mansion shut behind her.


*******************************

My ringtone "Maga don pay" by Kelly Handsome brought me back to the present.

"Baby Woju"


Displayed on my screen.


"Hello beautiful angel."


I said into the phone. I was only on my boxers as I laid sprawled on my bed.


"Pie, I am so wet and can't wait for your tongue on my fat swollen clit."


I squirmed away from the phone. Apart from being on the fat side, Baby Woju had the face of a created that had wanted to form a creator. Bleached and distorted for her face is the example of a colour riot aka rainbow. Yellow, black, red (burnt) and green (veins). The only colour missing was indigo and violet and you will have ROYGBIV.


"I can't wait to have you straddling me with my tongue buried deep in your honey pot baby."


I replied. I had to. Part of the business is keeping a client happy and doing their bidding.


"You mean it?"


She asked.


"Grrrr!"


I imitated a lion.

"Awww... That's so sexy. Bark like a dog!"


She commanded me.


"Woof! Woof!!"


I complied.


"Meow like a cat."


I complied.


"Baaa like a goat."


She commanded. I kept quiet.


"I can't hear you..."


"Baaaaaaaa!"


I hate my job.


"I am waiting for you sexy hunk."


That boosted my ego. I dropped the call, stood up and walked into my bathroom. Dropping my boxers I stared at my pe.nis and the pain it would go through. I shrugged. I am the man of the house and mother had told me I should provide for the family. The only way I could achieve that was do mother's bidding and they never seemed to end. What do I know, mum is always right.




To be continued....


Foxyflow.

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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 9:46pm On Sep 02, 2016
bakeuhappy:
Hello Bibi,
Nice job keep it up. more ink to ur pen. i must confess your work is beautiful.
Pls I'm kinda lost in the area where Tomi went home to see her parents after a meal she went upstairs to her old room .how did Rich get to her room in her parents house n how did d other guy know her parents house. cos from your story her parents r yet to meet the man in her life.

Awww. Pls reread it. She hugged them after dinner and left for her own apartment.

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