here is my lame story, if youre bored enough, read it.


It Started With A Kiss…

It was a cold and windy day, the air was crisp and clear. The outside looked very gloomy and the leaves started to become bright and beautiful. Being the day that it was Kenneth and I decided to stay inside and hang out. Bored out of our minds, we decided to watch Twilight for what seemed like the 100th time.
Kenneth and I got warm and cozy with blankets and pillows. The movie started and I tried to stay as focused as possible. It was torture lying next to a man with nothing but his Calvin Klein boxers. He was looking right and ready. Tall dark handsome and muscular, just the way I like them.
Out of nowhere he leaned over and gave me the kiss of my life. In the back of my head Sade’s “Kiss Of Life” was playing, over and over again. He kissed me passionately as my blood and heart raced a million times a minute. Something came over my body as Sade’s “Kiss Of Life” became replaced with fast pace music. There was no stopping me then.
I reached over to him pressing my body against his and eating his lips up like a chunk of chocolate. Then I worked my way down to his chest kissing, licking, sucking, and rubbing. Oh, I can tell the faint groans and moans he was letting out turned him on. I even attempted to put my hand on his crotch while doing so, and ill tell you it sure did work.
Working my way down his beautiful body, I remembered the Altoids that were left on the table. I popped two in my mouth, waited for them to partially melt, then I continued on. My mouth was now warm, just like the real thing. I started off with no hands, kissing, licking, and sucking him until he was as ripe as a banana. Moving slowly then quickly up and down. Now taking my hands I jerked him off while continuing to suck. Its like I can almost feel Kenneth channeling the chills going down his spine. I pulled back, gave him a kiss, and knew it was his turn to work.
As I moved back I sat in a position that gave him the clear view of my body. I teased him by rubbing and playing with my own clit as he watched. He did the same by playing with himself while watching me. Oh, the tension was deep and adrenaline was running. Literally pouncing on me he began to kiss and suck my breast, and caress them like Nobody’s business. While doing so he then placed his hand near my female cavity and penetrated it softly and smoothly. It was enough for me all at once. I came.
Wrapping my legs around his neck he began to lick and suck. This was the best I’ve gotten it so far. His tongue sent shivers up my spine and I couldn’t help but to moan loudly. Even that didn’t feel like enough. I had to grab onto the blanket and squeeze very tightly. I was floating on cloud nine.
Without warning he places his penis inside of me penetrating deep and hard. I moan and it only increases his desire and he goes more. I’m on my side while he is beating. My chest bouncing and I see as he watches with amazement and sees my face from pain and pleasure. He turns me on my back and places my legs over his shoulders and he continues again. I moan. He moans. With his sudden urge to let go he busts on my chest and stomach. And I do what a good girl does by playing with it a bit and rubbing it in, even being playful and giving it a little taste.
I was in awe, the only thing I could hear was Keith Sweat’s “Nobody” playing over and over again. I felt the need to be in control and to take action so I turned him onto the bed and jumped on his privates like that! I then was doing my movements, making sure that my boobs were bouncing to keep his erection going longer. I rode that di.ck like a professional jockey. Nothing can stop me now. Then I feel hot juices flowing inside of me. I knew I had done it again. My baby was satisfied, and so was I. at our attempt to go our last round we had to do the ultimate position. I got on all fours and he banged me up until he had me begging for mercy. It felt like it couldn’t get any better than this.
When we were through, I laid back and watched him. I just stared at him, deep in the eyes, wondering if we were thinking the same thing. As I lay there I just stared at his pretty long black dik, thinking about how he just gave me the time of my life. With a few more strokes to his manhood he came for the last time, all over my stomach. Again, doing what a good girl does, I made sure to make good use of it. Knowing that would be all for now, he sealed it off with a kiss. I lay my head back on his chest and carried on watching the movie almost like nothing happened. More of a spur of the moment type of thing.


- THE AMAKA

Honey that was guuuudddd, dön't u tink u shuld b writing erotic novels. U've got the penhand. Thumbs up.

thanks! lol
i actually wrote this while on NL within the last 45minutes.
my little fingers are tired though.

is this a true story?

no, not at all.
its 100% fiction. lol

THE AMAKA:

I rode that privates like a professional jockey.

That is the shiznit right there .

Much of dat stuff does not just comeout of imagination but also a great deal of experience, even great writers of erotica have said so.

Much of dat stuff does not just comeout of imagination but also a great deal of experience, even great writers of erotica have said so.

Much of dat stuff does not just comeout of imagination but also a great deal of experience, even great writers of erotica have said so.

Eshyy:

Much of dat stuff does not just comeout of imagination but also a great deal of experience, even great writers of erotica have said so.

well ill tell you its all from imagination.
can you believe a virgin wrote that? lol
_{and i have watched a bit of porn too, so. . . lolol}

THE AMAKA:


and i have watched a bit of porn too, so. . . lolol

Gerrout of hia. Only a bit ma foot

Eshyy:

Much of dat stuff does not just comeout of imagination but also a great deal of experience, even great writers of erotica have said so.

You Can Say That Again .

wow u mean this is fake?

Eshyy:

Much of dat stuff does not just comeout of imagination but also a great deal of experience, even great writers of erotica have said so.

ditto

really? you people cant believe it?
OMG! what have i done?
im just a girl with a big imagination, i swear.
you dont need to experience this kinda stuff to write about it. or do you?


@ chich
yes a bit
lol

Bút d fact is weda true or fictiøn the story was tyt. We giv dat to ya

thanks!

Great story amaka!

THE AMAKA:

With his sudden urge to let go he busts on my chest and stomach. And I do what a good girl does by playing with it a bit and rubbing it in, even being playful and giving it a little taste.

- THE AMAKA

i know that's straight from a flick lol. . . i dont know any girl that would do that

ure good. u should post here- there is an erotica thread i made that several differnt people have posted in: you should check it out!


Give it to me Good Erotica Thread

thanks! i just did.
ahh when im in the mood to post another story, dont worry, i will.
that one is a story i threw together in less than 30minutes.
this time imma take some time and give it a real thought.

you should see what Gators posted in that thread

shes[i] really[/i] creative

So is theseeker

hahaha yeah i kinda glanced through it.
too much to read.
ill read one day when im bored enough.
but i did read two posts from Gators, she's pretty good.

THE AMAKA:

here is my lame story, if youre bored enough, read it.


It Started With A Kiss…

It was a cold and windy day, the air was crisp and clear. The outside looked very gloomy and the leaves started to become bright and beautiful. Being the day that it was Kenneth and I decided to stay inside and hang out. Bored out of our minds, we decided to watch Twilight for what seemed like the 100th time.
Kenneth and I got warm and cozy with blankets and pillows. The movie started and I tried to stay as focused as possible. It was torture lying next to a man with nothing but his Calvin Klein boxers. He was looking right and ready. Tall dark handsome and muscular, just the way I like them.
Out of nowhere he leaned over and gave me the kiss of my life. In the back of my head Sade’s “Kiss Of Life” was playing, over and over again. He kissed me passionately as my blood and heart raced a million times a minute. Something came over my body as Sade’s “Kiss Of Life” became replaced with fast pace music. There was no stopping me then.
I reached over to him pressing my body against his and eating his lips up like a chunk of chocolate. Then I worked my way down to his chest kissing, licking, sucking, and rubbing. Oh, I can tell the faint groans and moans he was letting out turned him on. I even attempted to put my hand on his crotch while doing so, and ill tell you it sure did work.
Working my way down his beautiful body, I remembered the Altoids that were left on the table. I popped two in my mouth, waited for them to partially melt, then I continued on. My mouth was now warm, just like the real thing. I started off with no hands, kissing, licking, and sucking him until he was as ripe as a banana. Moving slowly then quickly up and down. Now taking my hands I jerked him off while continuing to suck. Its like I can almost feel Kenneth channeling the chills going down his spine. I pulled back, gave him a kiss, and knew it was his turn to work.
As I moved back I sat in a position that gave him the clear view of my body. I teased him by rubbing and playing with my own clit as he watched. He did the same by playing with himself while watching me. Oh, the tension was deep and adrenaline was running. Literally pouncing on me he began to kiss and suck my breast, and caress them like Nobody’s business. While doing so he then placed his hand near my female cavity and penetrated it softly and smoothly. It was enough for me all at once. I came.
Wrapping my legs around his neck he began to lick and suck. This was the best I’ve gotten it so far. His tongue sent shivers up my spine and I couldn’t help but to moan loudly. Even that didn’t feel like enough. I had to grab onto the blanket and squeeze very tightly. I was floating on cloud nine.
Without warning he places his penis inside of me penetrating deep and hard. I moan and it only increases his desire and he goes more. I’m on my side while he is beating. My chest bouncing and I see as he watches with amazement and sees my face from pain and pleasure. He turns me on my back and places my legs over his shoulders and he continues again. I moan. He moans. With his sudden urge to let go he busts on my chest and stomach. And I do what a good girl does by playing with it a bit and rubbing it in, even being playful and giving it a little taste.
I was in awe, the only thing I could hear was Keith Sweat’s “Nobody” playing over and over again. I felt the need to be in control and to take action so I turned him onto the bed and jumped on his privates like that! I then was doing my movements, making sure that my boobs were bouncing to keep his erection going longer. I rode that di.ck like a professional jockey. Nothing can stop me now. Then I feel hot juices flowing inside of me. I knew I had done it again. My baby was satisfied, and so was I. at our attempt to go our last round we had to do the ultimate position. I got on all fours and he banged me up until he had me begging for mercy. It felt like it couldn’t get any better than this.
When we were through, I laid back and watched him. I just stared at him, deep in the eyes, wondering if we were thinking the same thing. As I lay there I just stared at his pretty long black dik, thinking about how he just gave me the time of my life. With a few more strokes to his manhood he came for the last time, all over my stomach. Again, doing what a good girl does, I made sure to make good use of it. Knowing that would be all for now, he sealed it off with a kiss. I lay my head back on his chest and carried on watching the movie almost like nothing happened. More of a spur of the moment type of thing.


- THE AMAKA

nonsense! ! ! see virgin dey lie to our face, u wey neva see wetin d1ck look like b4 wan write ur fantasy after reading story book, abeg go watch hannah montana or go complete ur home work jare

whatever dude.
its a story, get over it.

i wrote this ish in less than 30minutes.
what are you looking for here?
abeg, getta way jor!

THE AMAKA:

whatever dude.
its a story, get over it.

i wrote this ish in less than 30minutes.
what are you looking for here?
abeg, getta way jor!

if i catch u! funny enough, it is u girls that know nothing about sex that is always writing erotic stuff, if e dey worry u like that, take permission from ur papa and go do the thing make we hear word

okay. whatever.

are u sure u wrote the story urself or copied it from somwhere. i doubt the handiwork.

sobriquet!:

are u sure u wrote the story urself or copied it from somwhere. i doubt the handiwork.

im taking that as an insult and a compliment.
thanks for the fact that it looks good enough that you would think i stole it from somewhere.
and what an insult to think i would steal another person's work.
hell no!
i wrote this one myself, all me.

This is good , must confess u got my third leg up and it nearly walked away 4m my body. It was so glaring, so much that the girl seating next to me(cyber cafe ) noticed it and nearly took to her hills.

Rooneyboy:

This is good , must confess u got my third leg up and it nearly walked away 4m my body. It was so glaring, so much that the girl seating next to me(cyber cafe ) noticed it and nearly took to her hills.

DAMN! for real?
dont just be saying things now, just because. lol
i really want real review on my story.

i think its shit actually cause i did it so quicky.
i didnt even read over it or edit anything before posting.

If u truly claim this to be ur work and not someone elses then i ll love 2 know u better , by the way are u a novelist ? If no, then u wasting away.BIG TIME

enjoy the story, no strings attached.
but thanks, this is really my work.

Shut d hell up b****. U just copied dat 4rm an erotic website and u claim its ur imagination. I've read dozens of similar stories and here u are giving us fabuuu. Go get a job

exactly! they are all similar because sex is sex.
most came from imagination and a bit from inspiration from a book.
the altoid part to be specific.
sorry they all sound the same, DUH!
but you dont have to believe it anyway.

that b**** part was just uncalled for.
getta way jor and go your way.


thanks for taking the time to read it and wasting your time.