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Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 12:06pm On Oct 07, 2016
TORN (Chapter Forty-five)

She rolled on her side and squeezed her face. One side of her head was throbbing with a blinding ache. She took a deep breath, placed both hands on her head and sat up. She tried to swallow spittle, but, her mouth was unusually dry. She raised her head and looked around the room.

The bottle water on the bedside drawer was empty. She groaned and got down from the bed. Each step she made towards the door seemed to magnify the ache and the sharp twist she felt in her tummy accelerated her discomfort. She reached the door and turned the knob. It didn't bulge.

She frowned. She didn't lock the door. Why was it stiff?

She tried to open it again. It remained still. She bent her head and checked the knob. She discovered that the door had been locked on the otherside. She stood straight and frowned.

Who locked her up? Why was she locked up? What sort of games was the person playing?

A sharp pain pierced her tummy. She cried out, held her stomach and fell on her knees.

Oh God help me!

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Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Julietogbo(f): 12:16pm On Oct 07, 2016
Omg please don't let Funmi die please
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 12:23pm On Oct 07, 2016
Torn 46 on the way
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 12:26pm On Oct 07, 2016
I apologize for the mix up.
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 12:28pm On Oct 07, 2016
Phew! I will update TORN and B.F.F after lunch time. Thanks for your patience.
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 12:31pm On Oct 07, 2016
Torn 46 on the way
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Julietogbo(f): 12:32pm On Oct 07, 2016
Me I dnt understand again oooooooooo from 45 to chapter 10
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by queentosks(f): 12:33pm On Oct 07, 2016
This is anoda story ooooo..... cry cry wah haPpened to funmike oooooo
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 12:34pm On Oct 07, 2016
Torn 46
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 12:42pm On Oct 07, 2016
Am so sorry. posted B.F.F here.

somebody help me ooooo
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 12:47pm On Oct 07, 2016
Torn 46 coming up
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Julietogbo(f): 12:47pm On Oct 07, 2016
U need to relax nice work
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by maridrug(m): 1:24pm On Oct 07, 2016
What went wrong with Funmi? Make this story reasonable please.
Thanks
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by yorhmienerd(m): 1:29pm On Oct 07, 2016
SheWrites:
Am so sorry. posted B.F.F here.

somebody help me ooooo
Modify all the post, erase them and post them in the place. Only you can help yourself. And for the new story, the chapters are too short. Work on that, Nice work here ma'am
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by stardomberry: 1:35pm On Oct 07, 2016
I was still expecting funmike story but got anoda thanks tho!! lesson for today always put all ur trust in God.
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by sirblero(m): 1:36pm On Oct 07, 2016
SheWrites:
Am so sorry. posted B.F.F here.

somebody help me ooooo
Lol...Thougt As Much! Nice One!!*shewrites...You're Genious! More Grease To Yah Elbow... Can't Wait To Finish *TORN
*still_glued_to_this_story..
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Nmaglit: 1:37pm On Oct 07, 2016
I don't understand it ooo
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Hardeybohwarley(m): 1:48pm On Oct 07, 2016
SheWrites:
Torn 46 on the way
Sorry is this still torn..someone is lost over here..
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by mondayfeb(m): 1:53pm On Oct 07, 2016
SheWrites:
Phew! I will update TORN and B.F.F after lunch time. Thanks for your patience.
. Plzzzzz @ she writes wats d Title of diz one? I wish 2 readit. 4rm beginning. Nice work

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Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 1:58pm On Oct 07, 2016
@mondayfeb... B.F.F: Best Friends Forever
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Nobody: 2:00pm On Oct 07, 2016
SheWrites:
Torn 46 coming up
k, i wondered too the updates are too short pls make it longer
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 2:02pm On Oct 07, 2016
@all... Am sooo sorry everyone. I was updating two stories at the same time and there was a mix up.

I will update the concluding part of Funmike's story today.

Thanks for following.

Thanks for all the compliment and encouragement.

I appreciate you all *winks* *hugs*

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Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by charytea(f): 2:37pm On Oct 07, 2016
Nice work dear. Still following
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Onyeocha20(m): 2:45pm On Oct 07, 2016
I am waiting oooo... but please don't post BFF story hia again..... because we r torn fan's not BFF fan's... but seriously it look like BFF is interesting also.... but please Please please ...
it u want to post BFF... Start afresh....
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by sirblero(m): 2:56pm On Oct 07, 2016
Onyeocha20:
I am waiting oooo... but please don't post BFF story hia again..... because we r torn fan's not BFF fan's... but seriously it look like BFF is interesting also.... but please Please please ...
it u want to post BFF... Start afresh....
LOL....
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by MissRelly: 3:05pm On Oct 07, 2016
gud afternoon everybody,shewrites u are doing so great,welldone,i luv dis story,i believe funmi introduction will b in their lips 4eva keeping on d good work of writing

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Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Opeade939(f): 3:42pm On Oct 07, 2016
Nice story@shewrites,but I think you 'rushed' it in the beginning,my opinion tho.
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 4:00pm On Oct 07, 2016
TORN 46

"Hello."

"Dante."

"My love, are you home now?"

"Yes," she drawled.

"Are you okay? You sound unwell."

"I don't know how I am feeling."

"What's going on?"

"I have a bad headache, my tummy is assualted by terrible cramps, my throat is patched, I can hardly move, I am losing strength," she sobbed.

"Go to the hospital, fast!"

"I can't."

"What's that supposed to mean?"

"I am locked in my own room. I don't know where my keys are."

"What the..."

"Dante, I don't feel good."

"Oh God! Who is home?"

"Everybody."

"Call someone."

"Their phones are switched off."

"What's really going on?"

"Today is my younger sister's introduction ceremony."

"My goodness! I am sure that they didn't tell you."

"They didn't."

"I am sure that one of them locked you up."

"I think my younger sister is the culprit."

"The little witch!"

"Dante!"

"Sorry. I am freaking out right now. Who else can you call?"

A thought crossed her mind, "Our security guard."

"Perfect."

She hung up and dialed the guard's number.

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Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by SheWrites(f): 4:22pm On Oct 07, 2016
TORN 47

She noticed the security guard the instant he came to stand by the window.

"Tanko."

"Yes aunty."

"Were you able to speak to my dad?"

"No. Aunty Folake didn't allow me to see oga. She said I will lose my job if I don't return to my post."

Her face turned red, "Didn't you tell her that I wasn't feeling fine?"

"I did. She said that you were lying."

Her eyes smarted with tears. What was wrong with her sister? How was she going to get out?

The pain in her tummy multiplied. She groaned and limped towards the bed. She lay on her side and dialed Dante's number.

"Hello, did they let you out?"

"The little witch sabotaged my plans."

"I am at the airport. I will be in Lagos in the next three hours. Please hang in there. I am on my way love."

Relief flooded her, "Okay, hurry," she cut the call and wrapped her arms around her slim frame.

The heavy music coming from the sitting room shook the walls. It reignited the ache in her head with vengence. She placed a pillow over her head and began to cry.

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Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Ikdbabie(f): 4:34pm On Oct 07, 2016
Like seriously what kind of a family is this. I can't take such nonsense, funmike you are too soft o.
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Holluwaphlexy(m): 4:34pm On Oct 07, 2016
so so emotional i feel for funmike lyk madt
Re: TORN (based On A True Life Story) by Kreamchic: 4:38pm On Oct 07, 2016
Oh boi, See love

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