Onyeocha20:


I will like to see d real picture of dose two evil genius.... Foluke and Folake...
dy wicked pass devil

#am Telling You.......More Dan Sf!

Two more to go, waiting.........

TORN 54

"Please forgive me," Folake's eyes glistered with tears. She wouldn't have been able to forgive herself if her sister had not regained consciousness.

Her eyes smarted with tears, "I forgive you," she reached out for her hand.

"I am sorry for stopping you from attending my wedding. Please forgive me," Foluke pleade.

"It is okay," tears streamed down her fair face.

"It is my fault. I failed you as a father. I distanced myself from you instead of accepting you the way God has made you. Please forgive me for rejecting you for so long," he sat at the side of the bed.

"I forgive you daddy," she wiped her tears with the back of her hand.

"I am also at fault," Jibike stared at her daughter, "I should have stood by you and loved you regardless of how you looked. I should have defended you," she broke down, "I am sorry."

"It is all right mummy," joy filled her heart. God had used the bad situation to reunite her family. She saw Dantenimu from the corner of her eyes. He gave her a thumbs up.

I said ehya countless times while reading this episode.............am really happy funmike did not die afterall.like say na my sister.well ll done she writes,oti try gan

please seriously waiting for the up date

funmike Don fall my hands... she suppose to discharge his siblings and her parents.... and jux travel to abj with Dante..... and let her parents and her sisters suffer small tooo... because she suppose not to forgive dem... until 2months.... seriously Dat family na abomination dy be expect my funmike.....

[quote author=Onyeocha20 post=50008248]funmike Don fall my hands... she suppose to discharge his siblings and her parents.... and jux travel to abj with Dante..... and let her parents and her sisters suffer small tooo... because she suppose not to forgive dem... until 2months.... seriously Dat family na abomination dy be expect my funmike.....

Op still waiting for the updates o .Can't believe I quit reading to kill a mockingbird for this...Op ride on

Chapter 55

Last chapter can be viewed on bambooks.io or get your copy on www.okadabooks.com/user/serahiyare

Nice but short...More ink to your pen sis

Lovely. Complete story unlike others. More ink to your pen

Now I can sleep well.

abeg how I wan get d BFF that was posted here before?

why do story's always have an happy ending.... seriously... funmike incident suppose to make either her mom or dad... to collapse and die.... seriously....

The. Way you end this thing ehn...no room for questions .

Finally...I can relax now .
Thank you for this beautiful writeup

Onyeocha20:
why do story's always have an happy ending.... seriously... funmike incident suppose to make either her mom or dad... to collapse and die.... seriously....

guy you wicked o

Onyeocha20:
why do story's always have an happy ending.... seriously... funmike incident suppose to make either her mom or dad... to collapse and die.... seriously....

guy you wicked o

OP, u almost kill me o, I thought Funmike was gonna die cos ma heart was beating fast wen I heard she was no longer breathing, I almost cry o I swear but thank God it ended happily but seriously now, am feeling headache. Nice story and keep it up.

Barristertemmie:
guy you wicked o ;Dguy you wicked o

Just want it to be interesting.... I am tried of novel ended story's..... but dese write up suppose to end with questions and food for thought.... but d writer try sha.....

SheWrites:
TORN 55 Finale

THE END

Nice one. I just don't like the short updates. More ink to your pen.

Finally..... tnx alot it was a lovely and smooth ride. I hope 2 see more write ups... God bless you

Short,Precise, and on point.. Kudos to u dear..

Moral Lesson::
It always pays to be pure in heart..

SheWrites:: Perhaps ur story seems to depict a part of ur personal history, correct me if wrong.

@all... Am glad you all enjoyed this story. I had fun too.
You will also enjoy TOGETHER FOREVER and B.F.F: Best Friends Forever.
*hugs* *winks*

beautiful story. the thing that kept bothering me was, funmike was fair n beautiful, why were they hiding her just because she was skinny? I mean, that puzzled me. Dante who is rich n handsome has principles, that I loved. the mama funmi didn't act like a mother at all cos mothers stay by their kids no matter what, even if there was a deformity. I loved the love story, how he came to Lagos pretending to attend a wedding but actually wanted to see her, this was my best part...soooo sweet. most of us married women remember all our Hubby's went tru because of love (before d engagement n all) .those days...good memories.

So Like Play Like Play..Dis Story Don End??
@shewrites...Congrats!...U Too Try...Ending(torn/b.F.F) at Dsme Tyme ..Aiint An Easy Job...Bravo!!
Sorry Wen S D *Together Forever Coming Out??

@sirblero... I posted Together Forever a few weeks ago. Look For it. It is complete *winks*

SheWrites:
@sirblero... I posted Together Forever a few weeks ago. Look For it. It is complete *winks*

Can you please start another lovely piece of this nature. so much loving it Nice work

Cc ErnieSmallzz's have you seen this?

I'm no stalker....just.................

nope. Will try to read it all, thanks for the mention

BEENUEL:
Cc ErnieSmallzz's have you seen this?

I'm no stalker....just.................

Hardeybohwarley:


Can you please start another lovely piece of this nature. so much loving it Nice work

YEAH...So Much In Love With Her Stories...Please Post More... *murh Data 2 Yah Mb

@all... Once I post the concluding part of B.F.F: Best Friends Forever on Monday, I will update a new story.