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Re: Red Ashes by Wane2(m): 3:45pm On Jun 11, 2017
Wow This story was amazing from start to finish well done Ma Chumzypinky, Thank God I got to read this wonderful literature and learn the lessons. God bless you, may you never run out of ideas for great stories Amen.
Re: Red Ashes by iziebless: 6:45pm On Jun 16, 2017
amazing writer that's what u are...
Re: Red Ashes by switlolly27: 11:19pm On Jun 22, 2017
God bless u ma for dis wonderful story, i so much enjoyed it.
Re: Red Ashes by misskbest(f): 9:39pm On Jun 25, 2017
It's ending turned out fine
Re: Red Ashes by FengChui(m): 7:26am On Jul 05, 2017
dammypat:
Weldone ma! More inspiration from above,more ink to your pen and more grease to your elbow


Only six comments since 2015!
U can sabi hide o.
Re: Red Ashes by cbella(f): 3:31pm On Jul 09, 2017
Dear @chumzypinky,

I have been on the fence , reading and watching closely

just a few thoughts , after reading this thrilling and awesome story

Wonderful imagination, your ability to just make a character look real, describe that character to fit the story; Thumbs up for that

You will go places, keep it up

You are a mother indeed

And finally, your ability to endure pressure from your fans and engage them interactively is so out of this world

Cant wait to finish tradition,another awesome one

GOD BLESS YOU
Re: Red Ashes by dammypat(f): 9:17pm On Jul 16, 2017
FengChui:



Only six comments since 2015!
U can sabi hide o.
. Na u dem send from my papa village to dey monitor me,e gba mi oo
Re: Red Ashes by FengChui(m): 12:49am On Jul 17, 2017
dammypat:
. Na u dem send from my papa village to dey monitor me,e gba mi oo
It took eleven days to even get a reply.
A fi comment so, a fi email so, eleven days yii nooni.
Be like say na u dem send me from my Papa village make I come dey wait for Abuja. grin
Re: Red Ashes by dammypat(f): 11:55am On Jul 17, 2017
FengChui:

It took eleven days to even get a reply.
A fi comment so, a fi email so, eleven days yii nooni.
Be like say na u dem send me from my Papa village make I come dey wait for Abuja. grin
. I just tire for you, every monitoring chinko spirit catch fire
Re: Red Ashes by FengChui(m): 3:54pm On Jul 17, 2017
dammypat:
. I just tire for you, every monitoring chinko spirit catch fire

Dis one don catch fire o, and the fire dey burn seriously for u.
Re: Red Ashes by Ali1king: 12:55am On Jul 21, 2017
Stupid story .....useless piece of S-H-I-T

I wasted a Whole day reading dis useless stuff

FFUUCCKK YYOOUU
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:46pm On Jul 22, 2017
Ali1king:
Stupid story .....useless piece of S-H-I-T
I wasted a Whole day reading dis useless stuff
FFUUCCKK YYOOUU
its useless yet u spent a whole day reading it

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Re: Red Ashes by meneski(m): 4:17pm On Jul 22, 2017
Ali1king:
Stupid story .....useless piece of S-H-I-T

I wasted a Whole day reading dis useless stuff

FFUUCCKK YYOOUU
.. Idiot ur papa and mama r useless pieces of dung... Nd i strongly believe u surpass them in stupidity...product of a Wasted sperm from. Ewu iberibe
Re: Red Ashes by Sonamjs: 6:38pm On Jul 22, 2017
Chumzypinky:

its useless yet u spent a whole day reading it

Nice answer smiley
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:37pm On Aug 16, 2017
Update removed by author
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 12:22am On Aug 21, 2017
wow...... i luv this story.... but most of the sweetest part had been removed................ i hardly understand d end now... pls how can i get d removed posts

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 12:29am On Aug 21, 2017
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Re: Red Ashes by ftosino(m): 11:31am On Sep 03, 2017
Mummmy Chumzypinky , Pls B4 I Start Reading, Is It Complete, I Dont Wanna Be Disappointed
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:17pm On Sep 03, 2017
ftosino:
Mummmy Chumzypinky , Pls B4 I Start Reading, Is It Complete, I Dont Wanna Be Disappointed
oh dear. Some updates are already deleted due to plagiarism. So sorry
Re: Red Ashes by Dstars: 11:07pm On Sep 20, 2017
Chumzypinky:

oh dear. Some updates are already deleted due to plagiarism. So sorry

Okay but is there a way we can read those parts u removed pls,I just finished with the tradition and saw this also...
Re: Red Ashes by smileing: 3:20pm On Sep 21, 2017
So I couldnt comment till the end of this story embarassed

But honestly chumzypinky you nailed it kiss
How you presented the characters to the diction and everything.I must say this story is awesome

When do you start another one cos am eager in reading more of your stories
Re: Red Ashes by Gloryejims(f): 1:41pm On Sep 26, 2017
This story is wow.. Started it yesterday and finished today... Chumzypinky, you really did a great job... I was in tears already. Thanks for this wonderful piece. You should really get it published though it's worth the time and money.. Kudos to you...

Cbella and Pearl05 I hope you've read this great piece if not, come and read it ohhhhh... Chumzypinky, once again you did well and I love the way you engage your readers in conversations that's nice, drawing out the ghostreaders from ghostmode.. Congratulations..

Kip it up wink
Re: Red Ashes by kikiwendy(f): 6:02pm On Sep 26, 2017
Gloryejims:
This story is wow.. Started it yesterday and finished today... Chumzypinky, you really did a great job... I was in tears already. Thanks for this wonderful piece. You should really get it published though it's worth the time and money.. Kudos to you...

Cbella and Pearl05 I hope you've read this great piece if not, come and read it ohhhhh... Chumzypinky, once again you did well and I love the way you engage your readers in conversations that's nice, drawing out the ghostreaders from ghostmode.. Congratulations..

Kip it up wink
Sorry to bother dear but is your surname Ejimole?
Re: Red Ashes by Gloryejims(f): 8:03pm On Sep 26, 2017
kikiwendy:

Sorry to bother dear but is your surname Ejimole?

Ejimole?? No
Re: Red Ashes by cbella(f): 7:18am On Sep 27, 2017
Gloryejims:
This story is wow.. Started it yesterday and finished today... Chumzypinky

Cbella and Pearl05 I hope you've read this great piece if not, come and read it ohhhhh... Chumzypinky, once again you did well and I love the way you engage your readers in conversations that's nice, drawing out the ghostreaders from ghostmode.. Congratulations..

Kip it up wink


You are late to the party! Been here from the beginning.

A 100% wonderful read....

She inspires me tho... Hope you get to read her other story 'Red Ashes'.

Chumzypinky, I wave you all my 10fingers
Re: Red Ashes by Gloryejims(f): 10:53am On Sep 27, 2017
cbella:
You are late to the party! Been here from the beginning.
A 100% wonderful read....
She inspires me tho... Hope you get to read her other story 'Red Ashes'.
Chumzypinky, I wave you all my 10fingers
This is Red Ashes...Im yet to read Tradition
Re: Red Ashes by cbella(f): 6:16pm On Sep 27, 2017
Gloryejims:

This is Red Ashes...Im yet to read Tradition


Eeiii, wasn't even watching... Another 100%, you would like it
Re: Red Ashes by dorin27(f): 12:52pm On Sep 29, 2017
I can't believe this story made me cry cry. God bless you chumzypinky for this wonderful story.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:19am On Oct 01, 2017
dorin27:
I can't believe this story made me cry cry. God bless you chumzypinky for this wonderful story.
thanks dear. God bless u too
Re: Red Ashes by WHOcarex: 10:45pm On Oct 13, 2017
grin
Re: Red Ashes by prospiraps(m): 6:53pm On Jan 20, 2018
Nice story ..d ending says it all. Live is not full of roses watin mk dis story no sweet me na all dis "update removed by authour" so annoying making me not to understand d story well

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Re: Red Ashes by Elviswifey1(f): 9:55am On Apr 25, 2018
Hahahahah this the blessedman.very good question joor.lolz.quote author=TheBlessedMAN post=54280692] Sequel to RED ASHES



Me- (faces Chumzypinky)

To what END!.. I say TO WHAT FORKING END do u av to do diz? Mrs CHUMZYPINKY?

because of the retreival of one stewpid 8gb memory thats full of 'ASSUMPTIONS' U took d life of an innocent? Ehn? Ok.. I dey come, make i bash ur characters first..



Me-(turns to MummyM) Madam Mabel... U see say na u kil ur own pikin? Only if u had kept ur mouth shut just for 6 more hours, i hav a feeling ur son might stil b alive.. Buh instead, u decided to let loose the gate of hell by running ur mouth like tap water...


Me - (turns to Kainene) And to u Kainene, U see ur life? I don dey expect u to do sometin unforgivable right frm the genesis of this story, buh instead u choose to do the damaging and unthinkable at the 90+added time mins of Red ashes.. Ah, u be commited Mugu..

Drop Gun, u no drop... Drop gun, u no drop... Drop gun, u no drop... Until u took d life of ur childs father? Av told u several times that, Thugery life, doesn't pay... Now u av killed him... Ur eye don clear.. Now go and marry the corpse o... U diz essential idiot.. U wan cry? Walahi, if i hear one cry 4 ur Mouth, i go give dat empty skull of urz a heavy Reset to factory settings Knock that wil send ur memory back to madness.. Stupid girl of a shameless father.. *hisses*



Me - (turns to Chucks) wait, shebi u suppose don die b4? Wetin u stil dey find? Everytin gud about this great story started falling apart, d moment u signed a contract with Chumzypinky to ruin peoples life... I wonder how much she offerred u, to av made u agreed to torment peoples life like diz.. Well, its like Death don forget u, maybe Death's stil grieving abt Arsenal's loss to Liverpool, thats why he forgets that u are next on his list..

once he kills u, pls i want u to do me a favour.. JUST STAY DEAD, cos if i hear say ur ugly ghost stil dey disturb people, wetin i go use ur eye see eh? U no go like am.. *hisses*



Me- (turns to Myra) Myra.. I have just 3 words for u.. THUNDER FIRE YOU (IJN)


ME- (Back to Chumzypinky) I just av one Question 4 u.. Ans it well, and u might av a chance of going scott free with all d crimes u and ur pen av both committed truout diz story..

The Question is, WHERE DID U GET THE GUN U GAVE KAINENE?
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