Missmossy:
Beautiful imagery i must confess, though the turn out of events didn't favour Edwin who suffered glad he survived it all. Fake friends everywhere, Hakeemn didn't try same with Aduke. Keep it up, thumbs up.

Yeah, fake friends everywhere. You never know what's what. I still have plans to write a sequel. Follow my ongoing piece via my signature. You already know it's a masterpiece.

Can you guys please express your opinions on the story?

OluwabuqqyYOLO:
Can you guys please express your opinions on the story?

The story is great I must say, but what's it with backbiting and betrayals? Hakeem turned backed on his friend and ended up marrying his mistress. Karen working for Nini in disguise. So no justice at all for the lowly?

The phone that Nini claimed to have used in recording the incident should have been collected as exhibit or evidence which the defense counsel should had used to get the actually date the recording was made.

The accused didn't defend himself at all even though he was a learned man. Huh

Where is the sequel?

MrCork:

Wataguan

OluwabuqqyYOLO:

Yeah, fake friends everywhere. You never know what's what. I still have plans to write a sequel. Follow my ongoing piece via my signature. You already know it's a masterpiece.

Nice would do that.

It's a harsh reminder of all those in jail suffering for crimes not committed by them.

Nice piece brother, it was fantastic, but I think forthe story to be worth it you need to start the sequence and make the readers know what happen during the guys 5years stay in jail and how he plans on starting a new life.




But thumbs up boss.

Wow what a fabulous and wonderful story! Dis is one of the best creative arts on nairaland. What a world!

many people have said it all I think in my opinion the wicked should be made to pay for their wickedness, that will send a signal to those who are willing to or are fond of such habit to have a rethink for betraying the innocent.

in as much as the story is a masterpiece, I must also confess that I got lost along the way or should I say maybe as a result of your poetry lines. so my question now is: why did Nini set her husband or should I say went as far as charging him to court?
what happened to the private investigator barrister Hakeem hired?

Pearl05:


The story is great I must say, but what's it with backbiting and betrayals? Hakeem turned backed on his friend and ended up marrying his mistress. Karen working for Nini in disguise. So no justice at all for the lowly?

The phone that Nini claimed to have used in recording the incident should have been collected as exhibit or evidence which the defense counsel should had used to get the actually date the recording was made.

The accused didn't defend himself at all even though he was a learned man. Huh

Thanks for this. On some parts, I see that I couldn't fill every gap. But thanks.

Rhayne:
It's a harsh reminder of all those in jail suffering for crimes not committed by them.

Exactly. May God keep us safe.

sammyendowed:
Nice piece brother, it was fantastic, but I think forthe story to be worth it you need to start the sequence and make the readers know what happen during the guys 5years stay in jail and how he plans on starting a new life.




But thumbs up boss.

Sure, bro. I'll do that. I plan to. Thanks much.

adontcare:
Wow what a fabulous and wonderful story! Dis is one of the best creative arts on nairaland. What a world!

Thank you, dear. And, yeah, what a world!

Sylva2147:
many people have said it all I think in my opinion the wicked should be made to pay for their wickedness, that will send a signal to those who are willing to or are fond of such habit to have a rethink for betraying the innocent.

I agree with you. But don't you think karma is not always around? Sometimes, evil prevails. But I'll start a sequel soon anyway.

garex:
in as much as the story is a masterpiece, I must also confess that I got lost along the way or should I say maybe as a result of your poetry lines. so my question now is: why did Nini set her husband or should I say went as far as charging him to court?
what happened to the private investigator barrister Hakeem hired?

She was blinded by the urge to revenge. And Timi bought the private investigator over. I hope you understand now. Thanks.

OluwabuqqyYOLO:

She was blinded by the urge to revenge. And Timi bought the private investigator over. I hope you understand now. Thanks.

yes I do understand now.. I've one more question: I thought Timi was married with kids, abi na me no understand that part of the story ni

OluwabuqqyYOLO:

I agree with you. But don't you think karma is not always around? Sometimes, evil prevails. But I'll start a sequel soon anyway.

pls when you start remember to mention me.

Phew.... The story is realistic, it's sad to know how far people will go to defend their interests. Thanks OP.

Kinzyewriter, here I am.

Just came about this masterpiece and it was so fascinating and interesting....But there must be justice for Edwin... thanks for these Mrs writer. Expecting the sequel though

silverlinen:
Just came about this masterpiece and it was so fascinating and interesting....But there must be justice for Edwin... thanks for these Mrs writer. Expecting the sequel though

Thanks, you reminded me of this story.