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The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal / Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. / DAYO'S ANGEL( Love, Lust And Betrayal) (2) (3) (4)

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Re: United In Betrayal by obivictor(m): 11:29pm On Jul 07, 2017
I really feel for Michael
He's made a very big mistake he'll regret forever...
Re: United In Betrayal by kelvinhilton(m): 11:30pm On Jul 07, 2017
Mayreeyam:
PamelB kudos to u.May God increase ur wisdom(amen).Let's b realistic if ds is not a story,will u all advice Claire to leave her hubby.Ds is wat sm marriages r going trio,u CNT ask her to live d home she has built 4 two yes n start anoda just lyk dat cos she doesn't no wat might happen were she is going.
I beg to differ, AM NOT AN ADVOCAT OF DIVORCE. But I think if Claire should remain in that marriage void of happiness she may be emotionally and phycologically and physically damaged.. Sometimes holding on does more damage than letting go. My thoughts tho.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 11:38pm On Jul 07, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Omo! See numba of pple viewing. Y'all'd berra comment oo. Nice one sweetie, u're killin it.
I stil dont like Claire
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You don't like Claire?
Re: United In Betrayal by Sylva2147: 12:51am On Jul 08, 2017
kelvinhilton:

I beg to differ, AM NOT AN ADVOCAT OF DIVORCE. But I think if Claire should remain in that marriage void of happiness she may be emotionally and phycologically and physically damaged.. Sometimes holding on does more damage than letting go. My thoughts tho.
I agree with you on this let her just follow the young barrister who will make her happy and forget about that lunatic called Michael.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Destiny4fame(m): 1:10am On Jul 08, 2017
Morning
We are waiting for you ooooo
Re: United In Betrayal by Destiny4fame(m): 1:19am On Jul 08, 2017
Nice job PamelB. In as much as I don't support the things Michael is doing, I still don't want them to divorce. I know you can do this, whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. I am very sure Mike has learnt his lesson. This Michael once signed his properties to Claire, definitely, there was love among between them. This sweet and loving Phil can become a thorn in her flesh also. Please, PamelB, Mike should suffer for all he made Claire go through, but let them live "happily ever after". Please
I submit
#teammichlaire#

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Re: United In Betrayal by olatunyemi(m): 1:37am On Jul 08, 2017
no more ghost mode if the pop corn is ready
Re: United In Betrayal by Nkysuccess(f): 3:41am On Jul 08, 2017
Destiny4fame:
Nice job PamelB. In as much as I don't support the things Michael is doing, I still don't want them to divorce. I know you can do this, whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. I am very sure Mike has learnt his lesson. This Michael once signed his properties to Claire, definitely, there was love among between them. This sweet and loving Phil can become a thorn in her flesh also. Please, PamelB, Mike should suffer for all he made Claire go through, but let them live "happily ever after". Please
I submit
#teammichlaire#
Abeg how will they live happily ever after with all the pregnancies Michael has gathered and remember that Claire does have any child for him yet; she suffered miscarriage in his hands. Abeg let's allow Karma to take of Micheal.
PamelaB you indeed a talent pls keep it up.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Zupremo13: 6:13am On Jul 08, 2017
*Ghost mode deactivited* PAMELB, you are a genius. This story is so captivating. To all those supporting Claire to follow Phil, what make you think Phil is an angel? Remember, even Kelvin at a point confessed that Mike was never a player; even when he was single. Claire shuld just stay put and fight for her marriage; marriage is for 'better' for 'worse' and she is in the worse phase... let her keep to the vow.
Re: United In Betrayal by Ogoizuu: 6:29am On Jul 08, 2017
PamelB, great job,kudos to u... so captivating . U r sure a great writer..thumps up
Re: United In Betrayal by ericsmith: 7:08am On Jul 08, 2017
obivictor:
I really feel for Michael
He's made a very big mistake he'll regret forever...


men can b flirty,,cassanova,some called c.ronaldo cos they dribble lik messi,,afterall maradona is a man.... but no man shuld b micheal,sorry b a fool,,a man wus nt in charge we b ruined on a 4G lite.
micheal fr once neva tried to confirm is suspicions,,,u get a call ur wife is cheatin d nex tin is to grab any woman available fr deuces.. advance jealousy grin
#Dnnt feel fr a fool cos dey we neva learn frm there mistakes ...as a man dnnt b a fool,dnnt b heartless rather b principled,..cos if u dnnt stand fr sumtin yu fall fr anytin.




#so i can preach like this land they waste grin mummy G.O apply

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Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 7:32am On Jul 08, 2017
queenitee:
I'm confused, a part of me feel sorry for Micheal, it wants Micheal and Claire back, yet the other part hates him, that part wish he would die.

Lemme settle for the former, I want Micheal and Claire back.
*Run out of thread before team #Philandclaire comes for my head*
Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 7:33am On Jul 08, 2017
queenitee:
I'm confused, a part of me feel sorry for Micheal, it wants Micheal and Claire back, yet the other part hates him, that part wish he would die.

Lemme settle for the former, I want Micheal and Claire back.
*Run out of thread before team #Philandclaire comes for my head*
beta run very fast,dnt let me catch u,even if they make up that scare will still be there wheneva mike see amara, dnt u tink?

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Re: United In Betrayal by nerd51(f): 8:23am On Jul 08, 2017
great story, aunt pamel. I feel for micheal, he made a really big mistake, well he made his bed and he shall lay on it
Re: United In Betrayal by cyndylove64(f): 8:25am On Jul 08, 2017
I must say pamelaB u are the bomb,have been following from day 1 but right now i have to comment.i don't belong to any team,back to the story,claire and michael will be back together like she said earlier it was a phase,yes michael messed up but how are we sure phil won't do the same,the thing michael should go for therapy,he needs help to fight the urges,if claire can still accept him after knowing about his sex escapedes then she should pour out her pains,let it go.Michael messed up,am not pitying him but we have married men that has done worst than him.about the divorce is a no to me,now to ebere and amara,Ebere is a fool,she can't claim mike raped her because she wanted to take claire home to from her.Amara is a bigger fool,she forgot her roots all because of wealth.Michael is a dog that need to be caged and he should go for therapy,claire should fix her home,if she thinks going to phil will help she is wasting her time and keeping the pains inside is a waste she also need therapy,now like my sis Chumzypinky said she don't like claire,same as me Claire claire claire should stand for her home, my best character is Chika(my name sake) so smart as insignifcant as she is.Drop my pen
Re: United In Betrayal by queenitee(f): 8:52am On Jul 08, 2017
Kimkardashain:

beta run very fast,dnt let me catch u,even if they make up that scare will still be there wheneva mike see amara, dnt u tink?
Don't beat me at home o.
The scare would still be there, that's true o
Re: United In Betrayal by girlhaley(f): 9:14am On Jul 08, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Omo! See numba of pple viewing. Y'all'd berra comment oo. Nice one sweetie, u're killin it.
I stil dont like Claire


Your own comment always get K leg o cheesy grin grin ehn... I just tire for you sisterly




I'm just speechless...i love my new claire


Karma is a b¡tch


PamelB is the Bomb...ride on sis
Re: United In Betrayal by ALAYORMII: 10:14am On Jul 08, 2017
bummybummy:
Amara u just started ur own pain, one Yoruba adage says pasan tafi na iyale o wa in ori aja fun iyawo, my pple wey kno english more dan should help m to translate it o. Nonsense Micheal

What goes around comes around

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Re: United In Betrayal by EvaJael(f): 10:28am On Jul 08, 2017
Amara's brain is just full of salt water

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Re: United In Betrayal by vakjay08(m): 10:41am On Jul 08, 2017
Pamel i love u. U knw why? I'll tell u:first,u are a gr8 writer and second,u dont starve us on update. Pls keep it up.
Re: United In Betrayal by CecyAdrian(f): 10:49am On Jul 08, 2017
cyndylove64:
I must say pamelaB u are the bomb,have been following from day 1 but right now i have to comment.i don't belong to any team,back to the story,claire and michael will be back together like she said earlier it was a phase,yes michael messed up but how are we sure phil won't do the same,the thing michael should go for therapy,he needs help to fight the urges,if claire can still accept him after knowing about his sex escapedes then she should pour out her pains,let it go.Michael messed up,am not pitying him but we have married men that has done worst than him.about the divorce is a no to me,now to ebere and amara,Ebere is a fool,she can't claim mike raped her because she wanted to take claire home to from her.Amara is a bigger fool,she forgot her roots all because of wealth.Michael is a dog that need to be caged and he should go for therapy,claire should fix her home,if she thinks going to phil will help she is wasting her time and keeping the pains inside is a waste she also need therapy,now like my sis Chumzypinky said she don't like claire,same as me Claire claire claire should stand for her home, my best character is Chika(my name sake) so smart as insignifcant as she is.Drop my pen

If you have followed this story closely and taken note of the situations that happened, then you would not be saying such. Forgive me to say this but it's women like you that give men the power to hurt women time and time again because they know they are the man and in marriage society will always give them a fair and less punishment, just imagine if Claire was the one who committed all these evil deeds against her husband. I think you are forgetting that Claire has defiled the law of nature on several times and gone back to that goat of husband all in the name of love and trust which is one sided. Micheal doesn't love Claire one bit! I hope you took note of where it was revealed that after Amara left the house, he made her home a second place despite putting up a loving and changed attitude to Claire at home.

You think Claire doesn't deserve happiness or to be free because she made the mistake of marrying a fool, Marriage is not for better for worse, forget all that vow taking, there are lies and only favours the man because only the man can break any of the vows and still get a pat on the back. Let's face it from the bits of information the writer has given us about their past, it's safe to say that Micheal married Claire because he saw her as the perfect trophy wife, she was a virgin, she was homely, she is pretty with hot body and she knows how to dress to his appeal which was the reason why immediately he married her, he tried caging her at home (who does that) never letting her go out in public for sake of she being seen by other men, that's obsession and power to possess and not love. Claire and some of you readers thought it was all love. Micheal never loved Claire, reason why he showed his hidden animalistic tendencies immediately Claire defaulted from the factory settings he Micheal programmed into her.

I mean, your wife whom you claim to love, says she is not feeling to well, which is the reason she has not cooked for you, you also see the signs, but because she suddenly started looking different and not appealing to you anymore, just a week (don't know if am right with that number) and you run to the arms of your secretary and beat her up making her loose her baby in the process.

She overlooks and goes back, but because he has allowed that which is his true form (a form he has been hiding) to rear it's head, he continues. See y'all, Micheal will never change, he is a natural womanizer and violent man who never loved Claire.

I don't know about Phill, but even if Phill hurts Claire, that would be her life lesson but I don't see Phill doing that to Claire. He too got caught up by Claire's beauty and body shape, but he still stayed by her despite knowing all about her. He might be obsessed too with Claire, but he's obsession has a love undertone

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Re: United In Betrayal by Omotayelolu(f): 10:57am On Jul 08, 2017
CecyAdrian:


If you have followed this story closely and taken note of the situations that happened, then you would not be saying such. Forgive me to say this but it's women like you that give me the power to hurt women time and time again because they know they are the man and in marriage society will always give them a fair and less punishment, just imagine if Claire was the one who committed all these evil deeds against her husband. I think you are forgotten that Claire has defiled the law of nature on several times and gone back to that goat of husband all in the name of love and trust which is one sided. Micheal doesn't love Claire one bit! I hope you took note of where it was revealed that after Amara left the house, he made her home a second place despite putting up a loving and changed attitude to Claire at home.

You think Claire doesn't deserve happiness because or to be free because she made the mistake of marrying a fool. Let's face it from the bits of information the writer has given us about their past, it's safe to say that Micheal married Claire because he saw her as the perfect trophy wife, she was a virgin, she was homely, she is pretty with hot body and she knows how to dress to his appeal which was the reason why immediately he married her, he tried caging her at home (who does that) never letting her go out in public for sake of she being seen by other men, that's obsession and power to possess and not love Claire and some of you readers thought it was all love. Micheal never loved Claire, reason why he showed his hidden animalistic tendencies immediately Claire defaulted from the factory settings he Micheal programmed into her.

I mean, your wife whom you claim to love, says she is not feeling to well, which is the reason she has not cooked for you, you also see the signs, but because she suddenly started looking different and not appealing to you anymore, just a week (don't know if am right with that number) and you run to the arms of your secretary and beat her up making her loose her baby in the process.

She overlooks and goes back, but because he has allowed that which is his true form (a form he has been hiding) to rear it's head, he continues. See y'all, Micheal will never change, he is a natural womanizer and violent man who never loved Claire.

I don't know about Phill, but even if Phill hurts Claire, that would be her life lesson but I don't see Phill doing that to Claire. He too got caught up by Claire's beauty and body shape, but he still stayed by her despite knowing all about her. He might be obsessed too with Claire, but he's obsession has a love undertone

You've said it all jare. Miss PamelaB, you are really good. Love your story
Re: United In Betrayal by CecyAdrian(f): 10:57am On Jul 08, 2017
Destiny4fame:
Nice job PamelB. In as much as I don't support the things Michael is doing, I still don't want them to divorce. I know you can do this, whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. I am very sure Mike has learnt his lesson. This Michael once signed his properties to Claire, definitely, there was love among between them. This sweet and loving Phil can become a thorn in her flesh also. Please, PamelB, Mike should suffer for all he made Claire go through, but let them live "happily ever after". Please
I submit
#teammichlaire#

Learnt his lessons you say? Lol! Y'all forgrt too soon every incident that has happened in this story, if Micheal has learnt his lessons, he would not keep Amara in that house, his family house in his matrimonial bed! He signed his properties to Claire because he found a trophy wife who was everything in one, you don't see Claire's kind everyday. He didn't even tell her, he did it to boost his hold on her, and if Claire had not found those papers, she would have been a goner since, he is behaving this way because of what he stands to loose, give Micheal those properties back and watch his next action towards Claire

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nkysuccess(f): 11:19am On Jul 08, 2017
CecyAdrian:


Learnt his lessons you say? Lol! Y'all forgrt too soon every incident that has happened in this story, if Micheal has learnt his lessons, he would not keep Amara in that house, his family house in his matrimonial bed! He signed his properties to Claire because he found a trophy wife who was everything in one, you don't see Claire's kind everyday. He didn't even tell her, he did it to boost his hold on her, and if Claire had not found those papers, she would have been a goner since, he is behaving this way because of what he stands to loose, give Micheal those properties back and watch his next action towards Claire
Abi o, thank you jaree. You are very correct. As a matter of fact Claire is even being soft on both of them and also on Ebere. I guess if it were to be Amara she would av done worst things to them
Re: United In Betrayal by Nkysuccess(f): 11:22am On Jul 08, 2017
Good people are always trampled upon in our society

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Re: United In Betrayal by richardoz(m): 11:31am On Jul 08, 2017
Michael is an unfortunate opportunist! He has called the band so he has to dance to the music!
Re: United In Betrayal by vickyviolet(f): 11:40am On Jul 08, 2017
I doff my hat 4 u pamelaIB
God bless u waiting 4 d next episode
Re: United In Betrayal by mofy1(f): 11:40am On Jul 08, 2017
What a irony of life. So many of u are begging the writer to make what is not possible possible here. And I can bet that u will not tolerate half of what Claire tolerated from Mike nor neither allow ur sis go through such. How is that even possible, sleeping in same room he defiled or even if they should relocate how will she feel whenever they are in the other room being bang by same man who slept with ur sister(same blood) and ur 2 house maid.
Re: United In Betrayal by cyndylove64(f): 11:46am On Jul 08, 2017
My dear am not taking offence am saying michael needs therapy we have men who has done worst than michael,but i don't like mike or claire the two are boring.they should go for counselling abeg
CecyAdrian:


Learnt his lessons you say? Lol! Y'all forgrt too soon every incident that has happened in this story, if Micheal has learnt his lessons, he would not keep Amara in that house, his family house in his matrimonial bed! He signed his properties to Claire because he found a trophy wife who was everything in one, you don't see Claire's kind everyday. He didn't even tell her, he did it to boost his hold on her, and if Claire had not found those papers, she would have been a goner since, he is behaving this way because of what he stands to loose, give Micheal those properties back and watch his next action towards Claire
Re: United In Betrayal by CecyAdrian(f): 12:26pm On Jul 08, 2017
cyndylove64:
My dear am not taking offence am saying michael needs therapy we have men who has done worst than michael,but i don't like mike or claire the two are boring.they should go for counselling abeg

He will go through therapy alone.

Men have done worse and will continue to do so because a woman out there will always give the man a shoulder to rest on should his wife refuse to and society will be fast to cast stones on the wife not bothering to find out what actually happened or who was at fault.

Micheal and Claire have passed the stage of counseling. Counseling them to do what exactly?? Claire deserves to be happy and that will come when she lives very far away from anything that will remind her of Micheal and his ways.

Just imagine (God forbid though) Claire and Micheal were to be back together, do you think Claire will ever have peace of mind or be happy when everywhere she turns to, she will b reminded of her husbands evil past, if she meets her sister, she will get reminded of Micheal's unfair treatment towards her in her or her child should the writer decide to kill Amara. She visits Kelvin and gets reminded of Micheal's evil deeds towards Kelvin's fiancées or wife (should they get married). Claire will not trust Micheal again and that would make her not to have a house help in the future.

Abeg, it's better, they go their separate ways and each start afresh with different people who will love and trust them truly. Funny enough, Amara no even love Micheal,she is only out to hurt her sister and for the money.


PamelB, where are thou, come and quench my taste please. I must really commend you, you have gotten me engage in a story on Nairaland, that's a first, if I remember well, I'm usually a ghost reader who breaks the ghost mode once in a blue moon just to blast writers who try to take we, the readers for granted with their lazy attitudes or behavior towards a story. You are consistent and true.

You have a very good writing skill which is everything. Please let me know should you need data, and I will be glad to send across to you, that's the least I can do to appreciate your skill and show how much I love this story.

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Re: United In Betrayal by mamindy(f): 12:28pm On Jul 08, 2017
stainless239:
i hope Claire is not pregnant o




*panicking*
..bae cool down. if she's pregnant, we will abort it for her

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