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| My First Poem. by Oludrex(m): 9:32pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
If this is not just a creation of mine, will it be good enough? imaginative, yet a piece of my heart. will it be good be enough? Short and concise, will it be good enough? stanza after stanza, my head i put to rest. will it be good enough? whatever it is about, will it be good enough? Deity, blue sky,love ,money will it be good enough? Effortlessly,my eyes closed, buttock sat, pen wrote. Regardless, a poem i called it My Poem- First of its kind. pls sincere review and comment needed.thanks 2 Likes |
| Re: My First Poem. by Epositive(m): 9:37pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
nice theme  no spacing : so congesting  zero rhymes (still ok) no new words: haba mana my brother rule out your lines ojere, it'll beautify your poem #teamshakespear #positivevibes 1 Like |
| Re: My First Poem. by Oludrex(m): 9:39pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
Epositive:zero ryhmes because it was a free verse |
| Re: My First Poem. by Oludrex(m): 9:40pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
Epositive:zero ryhmes because it was a free verse... thanks alot... i dont understand , am i supposed to invent new words |
| Re: My First Poem. by Nobody: 9:45pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
Epositive:No rhyme ke......most popular, very good poems don't rhyme, most poetry organisations prefer non-rhyming poems to that of the rhyming ones, Na so them dey space them Na, he just wrote one stanza |
| Re: My First Poem. by Epositive(m): 9:48pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
Oludrex: for where? all i'm saying is that there are some words you hardly come across, they are not commonly used, find them, use them... dictionary, therasus amongst others would be of great help. |
| Re: My First Poem. by Epositive(m): 9:49pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
Tadeknkeepcalm: yes boss  |
| Re: My First Poem. by Oludrex(m): 9:56pm On Mar 25, 2017 |
Tadeknkeepcalm:bro pls ur opinion on the poem is needed |
| Re: My First Poem. by gracile(f): 3:04pm On Mar 27, 2017 |
Very beautiful poem! I love the rhetorics and the repetitive emphasis Go back to it and insert question marks at the appropriate places though Keep writing.. You write well 1 Like |
| Re: My First Poem. by Oludrex(m): 1:41pm On Mar 28, 2017 |
gracile:Thanks a lot. Please I won't mind you checking the others out too |
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