Did I hear someone say 8:00 pm?

kate is jst confuse...nice story cbella,n i love d way u update.....waiting 4 more

waliyarh01:
Thanks for the update Sweetheart and make sure you take care of yourself. Dah Kate ehn her matter no be for here.

I just sent you a dm.

Pearl05:
Did I hear someone say 8:00 pm?

Eeiii This woman, 8 oclock, Ghana man time, i always forget to add that

nice update very long and superb am waiting for more but one thing am suspecting Kate foster mum.I don't think she is a saint as she claimed to be

cbella:




Eeiii This woman, 8 oclock, Ghana man time, i always forget to add that

NGN and GHN time is just 1hr differences , and by my clock it says 9:00 pm Ghana time.


Please serve us more.

You still need to work on distinguishing each speaker and actions performed by them.

Maybe you should consider starting each character's speech/action on a new line.

cbella 8 is gone so as 9 very soon it will be 11 let it not reach 1am as u did yesterday

oly0511:
cbella 8 is gone so as 9 very soon it will be 11 let it not reach 1am as u did yesterday

Lolzxx.... am working on a short one

Pearl05:



NGN and GHN time is just 1hr differences , and by my clock it says 9:00 pm Ghana time.


Please serve us more.

You still need to work on distinguishing each speaker and actions performed by them.

Maybe you should consider starting each character's speech/action on a new line.

Aww thank you, eei no be say i no dey work on the latter ooo, i dey try shaa .... ohk my pidgin is finished.

Frankly speaking it's just not coming, and i dont want to force it, i do better with dialogues than narratives i guess ! kindly bear with me please

cbella:
I woke up this morning and mischief is already breeding in my mind, like bugs in my bed


Then I heard a small voice "Don't Do It" . You don't want to give Pinkfeet, Pearl05, purples25 and her crew another heart break.

I better listen to that voice rather than KATE'S rantings

lolz

just do the right thing, that will make the story to be interesting

Pinkfeet:


lolz

just do the right thing, that will make the story to be interesting

lol.... Yes yellowfeet

EPISODE 54

Kate felt nectars wet lips on hers, and slowly gave in and vice versa. For close to two minutes, he was everywhere.

His emotions were out of place and he was making headway with the pleasures they both needed by touching the right places, when a knock came on the door. He jumped to his feet like a cheating husband caught by his wife.

“Who is there, Katie are you okay in there. Matts asked concerned.”

“Matilda go away. I heard nectar shout and interrupted. “

“Saint I need Katie now with something urgent.”


What is that? Nectar asked. Katie I have a lead on that mail we talked about the last time. Matts shouted to me.


Nectar shoved me an eye. Please can we continue this later, Kate asked nectar who just nodded his head. Kate quickly rushed herself downstairs.


Meet my Confidential Informant. Matts introduced!


Okay! Tell me the anonymous person behind the username LITDEVIL5. Kate asked rather in a hurry to go back upstairs.


You will not believe this. I think you need to sit down for this. Kate forgot she was standing all along.


“Talk Matts, what is it. “ Kate asked curiously.


Drake set you up. Huh! No way.


Yes way Katie! He did everything electronically and hired Bradley who initially was just in for the money but well you know how that story ended.

When he realized he was getting so close to liking you, he had to get him off the way that was when the murder and rape story of the girl came about.


No, I refuse to believe this. Why would he do that? Kate just lost appetite for whatever she was in a hurry to go back to. Let me call him, She said in a rush.


No you will do no such thing, we have to thread carefully. Allow me handle this mess, while you have all the time to fix your marriage. Matts offered.


“Thank you Matts we shook hands with the C.I and he walked out.”

Kate how is that going up there with you two. Matts asked pointing to the direction to which I was headed earlier before she stopped me.


Matts let me gist you later, Kate replied grinning.

Okay but I hope you are not planning to tell him anything yet. Matts asked.


Of course, Yes, I have to. I can’t start this new journey on secrets and lies. Kate said shaking her head to agree she has made the right decision.


What was that all about? Nectar asked when Kate entered her matrimonial room.


I didn’t see the need to answer him right at that moment when all I was thinking about was the kiss earlier, but yes, I have to start giving him the benefits of the doubt.

“I think you might not believe me, but then you ask Matts.” Kate said having second thoughts.

Kate I think I can trust you, so talk. If you are not ready to then fine. Nectar said honestly.


Sleeping on the other side of the bed, he came in smelling like fresh water. That earlier was about Mandy, Kate examined the look on nectars face.


It’s not what you think please. Kate said politely. I will tell you about it on one condition.


“Which is? Nectar asked curiously. “

Tell me about Keisha, I have the right to know if she has done anything to bring about those episodes. Kate demanded.


Nectar became sad all of a sudden. Heaved a loud and painful sigh and made to talk. How much exactly did Matts tell you? He asked.


“Just about the marriage to how you tried saving Keisha and failed, that is all.”


I think that is it then. Nectar tried to hide the fact that he was not comfortable with talking about his past.


No what happened. Nectar I am trying here to open up, that’s a good thing. Kate said rather shyly.


How am I so comfortable for the past one hour with him? Kate thought!


Keisha and I had a little argument over leaving the Hamptons back home. She wanted to stay but I insisted we go because I had to resume work soon, which I needed to handle some few things beforehand.


Some other words followed and she was angry I already packed up her things, I was wondering why she was taking long to come out of the washroom and when I realized she slipped and was in her own pool of blood. Just a stupid argument, why couldnt i put her need first. I was just stupid then.


And i dont want to make that mistake with you, the reason i paid no attention to your rudeness. Because i might just commit another murder if i do.

“Nectar finally said with tears strolling down his cheeks.”


Am not sure if I should be holding him in my arms but he quickly said now your turn Kate. I want to hear it all.


After what looks like an hour, I realized I just told him everything about my dad, down to Drake the last fool in love with me.


Thank you for trusting me with this let me know what I can do to help. Nectar finally found his voice and said.


Kate then realized nectar is just an ordinary man who had a bitter experience and may never recover. She kept thinking to herself and longing for that kiss from earlier.


Can we continue what we started earlier? Nectar finally asked! What did we start earlier? Kate pretended not to know.


You sure want me to say it right! Kate feigned a smile at Nectar’s sarcastic question.


I want to kiss you again. Just a Kiss Nectar said grinning.


No gentle man! Am not ready, I don’t want to disappoint you again moaning someone else’s name.


“Over excitement took over Kate’s lips as she cursed herself that instant for refusing that golden opportunity.”


I don’t care Kate; you can even mention Matt’s name that is not a big thing.


To be continued


Pearl05, you can sleep now please

But this drake is a goat how will you set someone you claim to love up.thanks for the update

Cballa, I kept refreshing my page until I slept off. Thanks for updating darling.

I'm not sure if Drake is the only one interested in Kate's life and fortune. DRAKE most likely have an insider in Kate's family.

There is the Andy and step sister of Kate's angle who is also after Kate's life and fortune probably due to neglect from the father. This other daughter might decide to go after a harmless Kate since she perceived her as the reason why the father abandoned her.

I love the way Nectar and Kate made up, and would like to see Nectar pampering his good stubborn wife that the care will melt away every single bone of stubbornness in her.

I have adjusted my seat in readiness to watch the unfolding of more secrets.

Thanks for the update

Thanks for the update, i'v been refreshing over and over again LOL
Guess because it's captivating, you'll won yourself a fan

This story is good enough for a series or movie. A good producer would make it great

Wow i love dz, more love should fall on them.
Drake ehn ur own mata no b 4 here o. Which kind yeye love u get 4 Katie.
Special thanks to matt 4 revealing the secret bh dr are still more secrets to b revealed sha.
Cbella i just dey refresh page yesternyt wheda d kiss go land or not. Well i just overslept in d thread and woke up in it ni o. Thanks 4 d update bh awaiting more.

Cbella you sure do know how to hold us at ransom. Please give us morning tonic, I hope to see them waking up in each other arms having spent the night well.

More please. I'm thirsty for more. I'm sure am not the only one that keeps refreshing her page every now and then.

Let's meet this half sister of Kate. Guys don't be surprise to find her in Kate's office. Lolz

Bella well done

kaite and nectar i like the way u guys, u ave settle the misunderstanding between u .

Drake u dey crazy hoooo.

so u are the one behind the rapist , so u are the one behind manndy or Bradley prison .

is it because u love Kate or u are doing it on a purpose

pweetygiftofGod:
Thanks for the update, i'v been refreshing over and over again LOL
Guess because it's captivating, you'll won yourself a fan

i am also sitting somewhere refreshing my mind.... i seem to forget the characters already, help me out eeeehhh


Thank you, you are a gift from God

Pinkfeet:
Bella well done

kaite and nectar i like the way u guys, u ave settle the misunderstanding between u .

Drake u dey crazy hoooo.

so u are the one behind the rapist , so u are the one behind manndy or Bradley prison .

is it because u love Kate or u are doing it on a purpose

Love is strong, but definitrly not enough, understanding that love is more than enough to pull through every kind of
'ship"

Pearl05:
Cbella you sure do know how to hold us at ransom. Please give us morning tonic, I hope to see them waking up in each other arms having spent the night well.

More please. I'm thirsty for more. I'm sure am not the only one that keeps refreshing her page every now and then.

Let's meet this half sister of Kate. Guys don't be surprise to find her in Kate's office. Lolz

Abeg, you didnt hear kate saying she doesnt want the Kiss , so nothing happened

i refresh myself too every second. Dont worry it will come...... I want to sleep small so i can dream about the rest

cbella:


Abeg, you didnt hear kate saying she doesnt want the Kiss , so nothing happened

i refresh myself too every second. Dont worry it will come...... I want to sleep small so i can dream about the rest

Which kind she no wan the kiss? While her body and heart is saying another thing. She must want it by force.


Lolz.

EPISODE 55

How can you make a joke right now when I am serious? Kate said still not sure of her feelings. As she thought about it for a minute she feels it’s a good idea not to jump the fence yet, as she had no idea what to expect.


Sorry, I just…. Nectar was about to say when she held her middle finger on his lips and told him to give her time.


I can hold you in my arms right. Says, who? We giggled and drifted to sleep.


*******************

Why did you ask me here Matts? Has something happened to Kate?
After learning drake did all that? Matts arranged a meeting with him, though she has her own personal agenda to push around.


“I must admit I admire his stature, which am lusting over right, now sitting in front of him. Matts thought.”


Matts, are you just going to stare at me? Drake asked wondering what was going on with her.


Emmm pardon my stare. Matts came out of her reverie stammering.


Why did you bring me here Matts? Drake asked again, confused why Matts kept staring and swallowing saliva as if she was thirsty.

Waiter, please kindly give the lady here some juice. Pineapple preferably because she hasn’t touched the coffee in front of her, Drake ordered.


I was suddenly dumb. I could not explain my feelings towards this dude now. It’s not as if he is my type but the feeling is just intense. Maybe I just want to sleep with him Matts thought.

By the time, I realized I saw him dropping money on the table, probably for the coffee I ordered but had not touched yet.


Matts quickly stood up and blocked his way, am sorry Drake. Don’t go Kate’s life depends on it. He looked back into matts eyes and she feigned a smile.


Okay make it snappy, I have somewhere else to be. Drake said without reading meaning into what matts said earlier, or he just doesn’t care anymore.


Who is LITDEVIL5? Matts asked and saw the look on Drake’s face. He was surprised, that tells her he knew what she was talking about now. He was silent for an extra two minutes, Matts kept looking into his eyes and each time he made to talk nothing comes out.


Drake, you did this to someone you claim you love? Common to think I came here hoping you would actually prove me wrong. Matts said just hoping that somehow she was wrong in accusing Drake.


Look Matts, who else knows about this. Drake finally found his voice.


“Wow so it is true. Matts said losing all hope.”

He held my hands firmly, which I slapped on the table earlier. The spark I could not control but I need to focus on his answers. Matts get over yourself now, Matts murmured to her inner being.


“I asked a question and I need an answer.” Matts said annoyingly now. See I can explain but only to Kate. He said calmly.

She doesn’t want to see you. What point of that don’t you get Drake. Matts said trying to control her anger and emotions.

That is my username on escort.com but I sold it out after I found Kate again. He said opening up with honesty in his eyes.


What do you mean by again? You two know each other before you met again. Matts asked inquisitively.


I need to talk to Kate she alone will understand me. I hope nothing happened with what I started. He asked worried.


Matts told him from the beginning to the end, somehow she was so happy he had nothing to do with all this mess, but she still need not to make it obvious.


“They were about to leave when Drake asked if she believed him.” Of course, I can see through your beautiful eyes. Matts said rather aloud.


Drake jerked his neck back and looked at her. Well I mean I like your blue eyes, Matts stammered.


Thank you, Drake said with a serious face, while he drove alongside Matts.

*******

Stacy! Kate called up to her assistance who was looking around the living room while Kate was yet to attend to the reason she came by.

Kate walked down the stairs, while nectar followed.


Hello Miss, I brought the documents as you asked. But the investors want a meeting with you soon or they pull out, Stacy stated while avoiding nectar’s gaze which was on her since he came down.

Don’t I know you from somewhere? Nectar asked, distracting their conversation. Kate shoved him an eye.


Nectar of course you know her, Stacy my assistance. Now can you please let us have this meeting? Kate but am sure I know her from somewhere else.

Nectar, leave us alone. Remember I am in the house because you asked me to, i think I should go to work now. Kate said standing up.


No, Kate! I give up, but lets talk about this when you are done. Nectar said, took a second look at Stacy whose heartbeat from afar you can detect and her confused gaze all over the room.


So Stacy, I will be at work next week. Send them an invite, then we see how best we will handle that. Thank you Miss, I have to get going now. Stacy said rather in a hurry.


Why don’t you wait for lunch, i am sure my husband wont mind. You are avoiding him for some reason he tried to state earlier. Do you know him, because you usually wait for lunch at my mums when you come over. Kate said.


No Miss, I just have many reports I need to handle. Stacy said struggling with her voice. But i am the Boss, the reports can hang on for now. Kate said smiling. But Miss, the truth is I have a date, I need to prepare for.

Ohh I see! Good luck then, Kate said and walked her to the door.

*******

Nectar, what was that all about earlier, you scared the poor girl. I have been trying for years to get through to her but she keeps to herself.


Sorry Kate, her face struck someone I know! Nectar said still trying to remember. Someone like the many girls you took advantage of. Kate spilled that trash out before coming to her senses.


Wow! Is someone jealous? Nectar couldn’t stop smiling but managed to ask. You wish. Kate said smiling. Well if you happen to remember then you let me know because I know she knows you too because I saw her earlier staring at your image on the wall.


Nectar jerked up and wondered why Stacy was interested in his mere image. Are you sure Kate?


Yes, but it’s not a big deal. Besides, she could just be admiring you that’s all. Kate said now smiling. If you say so, but be careful around her. Nectar advised. All right Bishop Glover. They both laughed.

********

Mom am not sure I can continue this anymore, everytiime I get the opportunity to take revenge for how I was abandoned like a chicken; she just makes me feel welcomed.


Shouldn’t I be going after her Dad rather? No if you do, you might not get enough money. If Kate is out of the way, there you can get everything.


Mom is that necessary, I mean I could just ask. Am sure she wouldn’t hesitate. My daughter you wouldn’t understand, the humiliation I had to face when your dad denied you, just because of that Slut Kate.


But she is not a slut mom. Open your eyes, and don’t screw this up for me again Stacy. I want to get Wilson where it hurts most.


Stacy’s mom on the other side of the phone said to her when she left the Glover premises earlier on one of her missions.

********
What is happening here? Katie asked coming down the stairs, and staring at Drake and Matts sitting watching each other weirdly.


Relax dear he has answers. Matts tried to defend. I miss my friend but I have to be tough on him. Kate thought!


“Kate! Look at me! After all these years, I was wondering if my face hasn’t strike your memory yet.” Drake said with difficulty.


What are you talking about now? Kate said frowning her face.


Grade 5. The sluggish dude who always had a crush on you but you were always withdrawn and reserved back then. I looked for you after you changed school. I heard you went to Beacon Hills. I never forgot your face after I turned twenty-one.


During one of our reunions, I met your desk mate Sansa, the British girl. She told me about George Town. When I arrived here, I stalked you for a while, there were times I followed you and Mandy to your secret places. It breaks my heart to see him treat you like trash but you seem to love him.


“I was on my stalking sphere that sad afternoon that was when you bumped into me.”


Look, all this drama, I just don’t remember you Drake. To me whatever you feel for me is absurd. Kill it now. Am back with my husband now, I may not exactly say I love him but at least he wouldn’t be stalking me like a fool. Kate said bluntly to matts detest.


“Drake was near to tears, but pushed it back.”


Who has the username now? Don’t worry Matts texted me with the details before you came. Kate said after she saw the surprise look on Drakes face when she popped the question.


With that site, you don’t meet with whom you are selling your account. He said calmly.


You know what fix it. You made me vulnerable to a vulture out there, who could swallow me soon. Kate said getting angry within herself.


Okay I will find a way. He said with sorrow, whiles matts watched on.


Now you can get out. Kate threw out with emotions and was returning upstairs when he called out. Kate am sorry for the mean words I used on you the last time. Please forgive me. Drake announced apologetically.


Katie listen to him. You can’t lose your best friend. Matts said without jealousy this time.


Is he God that I can’t lose? Okay fine on two conditions! She reconsidered.


Name anything possible! Drake said cheerfully.


“Look for the one responsible and second try and kill whatever you feel for me.”


Kate that is not possible. You of all people should understand, drake tried to reason with Kate. How do I do that? I don’t care, do that and you have my forgiveness. Kate said seriously now.


“Maybe you could just sleep with Matts here that would break the love charm. She is good at breaking charms and hearts.” Kate said without thinking.


Katie! Matts yelled! You are a sellout. Matts said and grinned with anger towards Katie and Drake she couldn’t figure it out.


I saw Drake leaving when nectar walked in. Hey, they greeted each other. “I stood on the stairs watching Matts running her hands through her hair.”


Hey Sis, how is it. Then he walked to where I was standing. “Hi Kate. Hope you are fine. I replied with a Yes “. He passed by to the room tapping my shoulder briefly.


Am I missing something here, Katie? Matts asked surprising me.

What? I pretended not to know what Matts was referring to. You just answered nectar in a smooth manner. Has he slept with you again? Matts said with a loud tone.


I rushed to her, calm down, I said with my hands covering Matts mouth and dragged her to her room.


You want him to hear you. Tell me or I go out there and shout. Matts threatened. Matts nothing happened. You ruined our Kiss with that knock.


Wow, you are a slut Katie. I threw her pillow at her. You called me a slut right. And you are a brat Matts.


Seriously, between the two of us, who sleeps around most? Katie asked. You Katie, matts replied covering her face with the pillow thrown earlier.


Matts i sleep with my boyfriend’s not random hairy dudes. Matts gave me slap on the back and we all laughed.


You need to get a man soon Matts. At least one to sleep with better than sleeping with everything in trousers. Kate advised Matts who was looking on sternly.


I know right, matts replied. I know you don’t like the marriage stuffs but a personal booty call will do no harm Matts, Kate tried not to sound offensive.


Thanks mom, matts teased. Silly you. I need to see nectar I will be back. Do not rub it in my face, Matts said while Kate smiled back.

To be continued

Thank you sis

Weldone sis

Wow, it's becoming more spicy. Keep it coming.




Why didn't they involve the police in this whole thing?

Sorry guyz, i slept off. So you wouldnt keep on refreshing the thread every seconds, i will post very late at night two long episodes.



i know i have dissapointed lately, Please forgive me.

THANKS FOR D UPDATE

Appreciate your efforts , thanks.

Why does Stacy refer to Kate as "Miss"? If they are not on first name basis she she refer to her as "Ma'am" or Mrs Glover.

Thanks for the updates.

I love the storyline.

Please should I wait for the next update or is it going to be for the night watchers.