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In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 12:49pm On Oct 11, 2017
The purpose of this story is encouragement. It might seem complicated at first blush but when you read with an open mind you are sure to understand and appreciate it.
I'll enjoy criticism from every angle and I'll reply as best as I can. This was written in less than 15minutes .



In OUR PRIME
I went in knowing my fate. Reality and imagination being the reason for this foreshadowing. I remember correctly how young i was when I first had the need to know that particular future, I was a little less than fourteen years. I was not at all proud but something within of me knew this gift of the future was not to make me smile all the time.
I had gone in there at that time not knowing what to expect, not knowing the future but when I came out the need dawned on me that the future sometimes needs to be predicted. It didn't turn out pleasantly but it triggered a lot in me. The next time after then I was to go in, I knew what was to happen since I already had the future predicted. I went in and came out smiling not because it was painless but because the future had been predicted and it was done correctly.
Years after, the predictions brings out all sort of things like blood, pain and joy. This spirit, can it not solve the issues? I have often found myself asking about the prediction spirit. I remember the first day I took a drive test, I was happy I had made it. Not sure why I was happy though since I had been driving since I was very young. But this test meant one day I was going to transport myself to go in to see a divinator.
I had called papa on phone asking him which of his projects I could use to the divinator's. Papa was always very paranoid about his official projects but he let me take it because of the results of the test.
When I got to the divinator's he looked at me and asked me to UnCloth. I was not very comfortable about it but since mama told me what to expect, I did what the divinator had instructed.
Mama is also a divinator but she does her divinations far from home, since i was in too much pain and blood from the last prediction, I had to go see a divinator close to the house. As I undressed, I looked at the place of divination, they all look the same but something about this one told me it was different. At that time I was still not able to determine the difference. Years later I found out he was not very experienced. After the divinator checked me he said I needed to be treated for this was great. I asked what the cause was for and he refused stating that an adult must be present. Immediately i became disturbed. I told him since I was here alone, I think it's because I'm an adult enough. I showed him papa's official project keys which had papa's office inscription on it. This means I had brought it . Not until all these did he tell me I was in serious trouble. As I wore my clothes I thought of what the divinator had called it and how long it sounded. Although I know these divinators to always exaggerate things and make them look more than they seemed. I left the divinator's place with all the ceremonial objects given to me. That was the beginning of my visit to different divinators until I met the "one eyed one", a very weird little man he was.
He seemed very familiar with me And mama although I did not remember him. Mama greeted him with so much respect. I didn't think it came from him being elderly but from him being highly experienced in divinations.
He asked me to UnCloth, I was already used it. This was different. Mama was there. I looked at him and at Mama. Mama told me to hurry up that she was going for other things asides my divination. As I started to UnCloth, mama went out to make a call and by the time she was back, the one eyed one was done with his divination. He told mama to get me some ceremonial objects that if I used them and did not feel better, it means my fate was already determined. That I was going to do the big "DO" Mama became very worried.
I had not seen mama this worried since the day papa came home from work well past midnight. When he came he was very sad and at the point of tears. He said out loud "Tony is dead."
I did everything the one eyed man said and I felt relieved but I wasn't healed. After the divinator's predictions I didn't want to do the big DO so I told mama all was well.
Now that I was in I remembered all of these and knew that the need has come to do the Do. I went in and called mama while I was in and told her. Mama's words were very comforting"all will be well" she said.


This short thing is dedicated to all those with lower gastrointestinal bleeding. Although incomplete, it's supposed to let them know that they are not alone. One who chooses the path of the operation must always be mentally and physically prepared.
Once again the storm is in the air. Stormyweather.

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Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 4:14pm On Oct 11, 2017
Modified. FTC grin
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by lawsbanks: 7:40am On Oct 15, 2017
abeg who get the summary for hand
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by salemdv(m): 8:09am On Oct 15, 2017
ok
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Totino: 8:16am On Oct 15, 2017
Stormyweather:
be booking space there o

U nko??

Nice write up OP

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Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Namzy(m): 8:17am On Oct 15, 2017
It was a bold step to keep us in suspense but I believe in the end it made me confused and impatient. The suspense should have taken one paragraph. I believe the symptoms and disease explanation and progression is paramount here and would have made this a more personal story, instead all I see is someone trying so hard to appear like a literary genius but ultimately failing...... It was an ok effort

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Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by kayceerilyn(f): 8:36am On Oct 15, 2017
I read it all.... But didn't truthfully understand the plot

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Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by olumose001(m): 8:54am On Oct 15, 2017
I get, d divinators are doctors, your mom is also one... DO is surgery!!

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Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by thedondada(m): 9:01am On Oct 15, 2017
Explain please.

Is this about menstrual cycles and pregnancy?
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 9:09am On Oct 15, 2017
lawsbanks:
abeg who get the summary for hand
lol, it's short na
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 9:09am On Oct 15, 2017
Totino:
T
stop booking space
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 9:12am On Oct 15, 2017
Namzy:
It was a bold step to keep us in suspense but I believe in the end it made me confused and impatient. The suspense should have taken one paragraph. I believe the symptoms and disease explanation and progression is paramount here and would have made this a more personal story, instead all I see is someone trying so hard to appear like a literary genius but ultimately failing...... It was an ok effort
hmmmmm. If you read it well you'll know that there were some symptoms outlined. That's why at the end of the story I told what the sickness was
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 9:13am On Oct 15, 2017
kayceerilyn:
I read it all.... But didn't truthfully understand the plot
lol, the only complications I see are the replacement of words and their real life representations. Take your time to read it and understand
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 9:13am On Oct 15, 2017
olumose001:
I get, d divinators are doctors, your mom is also one... DO is surgery!!
exactly! Someone got this

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Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 9:15am On Oct 15, 2017
thedondada:
Explain please.

Is this about menstrual cycles and pregnancy?
no it's not. At the end of the story I said what it's called. It's gastrointestinal bleeding
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 9:16am On Oct 15, 2017
Thanks for all the comments. The story is a path of discovery of gastrointestinal bleeding. This is a painful feeling accompanied by bleeding. The big do is operation, the project is a car, and the divinator is a doctor
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by judemmesoma(m): 9:25am On Oct 15, 2017
Doctors of Osteopathic Medicine, or DOs, are fully licensed physicians who practice in all areas of medicine.

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Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 9:31am On Oct 15, 2017
Who are the mods in charge of literature section? Help push it to FP so I can get more opinions
cc lalasticlala
Cc divepen1
Cc et all
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Oysdam(m): 10:41am On Oct 15, 2017
Its a nice story, enlightening too

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Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Saheed9: 10:48am On Oct 15, 2017
ok
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 11:01am On Oct 15, 2017
Oysdam:
Its a nice story, enlightening too
thanks
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 11:01am On Oct 15, 2017
Saheed9:
ok
be booking space there o
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Divepen1(m): 11:31am On Oct 15, 2017
Stormyweather:
Who are the mods in charge of literature section? Help push it to FP so I can get more opinions
cc lalasticlala
Cc divepen1
Cc et all
You got all the replies because it was on Fp
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 11:31am On Oct 15, 2017
Divepen1:
You got all the replies because it was on Fp
modified.
Seen thanks
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by BlackNigerian: 11:35am On Oct 15, 2017
I lost my favorite aunt to gastroenteritis in 2011..so gastrointestinal health is a very personal topic to me....
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 11:46am On Oct 15, 2017
BlackNigerian:
I lost my favorite aunt to gastroenteritis in 2011..so gastrointestinal health is a very personal topic to me....
sorry bro. As much as people think it as not so serious, it's very serious. Although it's somewhat different but they are all same gastro issues
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by augster(m): 12:21pm On Oct 15, 2017
Stormyweather:
Modified. FTC grin
for your own thread �
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 12:22pm On Oct 15, 2017
augster:
for your own thread �
lol, leave am o Bros. Is like you don't know the struggle is real even more real than HIV grin
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Saheed9: 2:14pm On Oct 15, 2017
Stormyweather:
be booking space there o
is it your space?
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by mykh01(m): 2:57pm On Oct 15, 2017
Nice write up bro
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 3:01pm On Oct 15, 2017
mykh01:
Nice write up bro
thanks a lot
Re: In Our Prime. A Very Short Medical Story by Stormyweather(m): 3:02pm On Oct 15, 2017
Saheed9:
is it your space?
space bookers go soon de collect ban o cheesy

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