thiolhuwar09:
This is so beautiful Penshalom, thanks for sharing

Thanks for reading, Jah bless

AryEmber:
Thank you and thank you for this wonderful piece! I am glad for Fe, she put her shattered spirit together and fortunately for her, jordan came back to claim his responsibility! If only the guys that got girls into situation like that would copy jordan, those girls would feel less shame and their parents would not have to shoulder all the work. God bless you, Penshalom

Amen
Thanks

SomGifty:
@Penshalom I'm happier dear, I can relate to the main character, at a point I wanted to deviate to prove a point to my dad that being too strict isnt the way that I could still do anything I wanted but thank God I got a grip at myself and just didnt walk into destruction.

Strict parents palava
Can relate to you too o
Thanks dear

pweetymhi:
we all have a second chance in dz world bh it depends on how best u use it.
Human makes mistakes and we are all given a chance to right our wrongs,do not let go,do not see urself as a failure for just a mistake,brace ursef up do not look back at the past bh focus on d future.
penshalom dear u rock,thanks for this beautiful piece,expecting more stories.

Thank you [quote]

pwittycindy:
Ooohkay!! I must say that I've bin a ghost reader ever since I knew Nairaland existed. Neva made comments abt any story I've read on dis platform...but den Penshalom's story #CHANCES# ghat me so high n inspired I had no choice dan to say....Thank yhu 4 dis wondaful story. God bless yhu.

Amen
I appreciate this hon
Thanks Love

HORLADSTAR:
Penshalom u are really trying on this piece of urs.I am loving the way u are blending in some nice and sensational music into it,Keep it up mehn.
#horladstar on this one.

Thank you dear

vickyluvspices:
thanks 4 using dis wonderful piece as an inspiration,it has in some kind of way liven my hope again...chances are when u feel u ve lost it all dere is a friend 2 turn to GOD.

Yeah, you are right
Thanks dear

Gloryejims:
Cbella
Pearl05
Cyber5
Tiffanyj
Rachealfst
Ollgentle
If you haven't read this piece, you're missing a lot...
This story got my attention from beginning to the end... Wow you're really a wonderful writer... Can believe I missed it before... The way it was portrayed was excellent and exceptional... Thumbs up to you penshalom... More inspiration to your thoughts and ink to ur pen...
#standingovation

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Sis no vex, can't believe that you are just seeing it. It's a great piece. Penshalom don't just tell story but she is a societal crusader.

Gloryejims:
Cbella
Pearl05
Cyber5
Tiffanyj
Rachealfst
Ollgentle
If you haven't read this piece, you're missing a lot...
This story got my attention from beginning to the end... Wow you're really a wonderful writer... Can believe I missed it before... The way it was portrayed was excellent and exceptional... Thumbs up to you penshalom... More inspiration to your thoughts and ink to ur pen...
#standingovation

writers are on fire this year

Nice work penshalom. I had to stay focused till I got to the end. Mote ink the your pen hon.

Gloryejims:
Cbella
Pearl
Cyber
Tiffany
Rachealfst
Ollgentl
If you haven't read this piece, you're missing a lot...
This story got my attention from beginning to the end... Wow you're really a wonderful writer... Can believe I missed it before... The way it was portrayed was excellent and exceptional... Thumbs up to you penshalom... More inspiration to your thoughts and ink to ur pen...
#standingovation

Thanks for inviting me. Ever since I got your mention, I promised myself to find time to read the story and it eventually turned out great. Powerful lessons, once God is not through with us then men's opinions don't count in the affairs of our lives.
God bless you Penshallom for sharing this wonderful story. I believed we all learnt one thing on the other.

rachealfst:
Thanks for inviting me. Ever since I got your mention, I promised myself to find time to read the story and it eventually turned out great. Powerful lessons, once God is not through with us then men's opinions don't count in the affairs of our lives.
God bless you Penshallom for sharing this wonderful story. I believed we all learnt one thing on the other.

Thanks for reading dear

Kheriee:
Nice work penshalom. I had to stay focused till I got to the end. Mote ink the your pen hon.

Amen, thanks dear

[quote author=OlufemiWhit post=63486817]keep it up[/quote
Thanks dearp

[quote author=OlufemiWhit post=63486817]keep it up[/quote
Thanks dear

Penshalom:

Thank you

you are most welcome
thanks for the mention too

Hello
New story up on my profile, check it out.
Drop your comments and likes.
Thanks