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Lyricist /rappers... Please Rate These Lines by davidica(m): 6:12pm On May 31, 2018
I wish I could cry out so loud
I wish I could shed the tears
not the tears of pain, agony and sorrow
but the tears of joy

my life is full of ups and down
and I wish there will be a miraculous turn around
I look ahead towards the future and see it shinning bright
but unfortunately the future's taking long to shine its light
I walk different paths every day
maybe one will lead to the way of success
I detest that nigga
who prophesy saying I will be great
he said I will be famous than the devil himself
he made me had my hope up
made me held my chin up
I pray anytime he picks the mic up
he will choke on his words
or he should just wake up in the morning, picks the knife up and stab himself
I will just sit and laugh at him
cus he didn't have the chance to prophesy
against himself
he didn't see it coming
that he will one day kill himself


I remember my nigga - - Don samscope
he said dreams sometimes console
I wanna ask him, Dawg what about the wet one's
because these days I sleep with my pillow wet
soaked with tears and sweats
like life's hard even when you sleep
even when you dream
my pity to the new comers
who think life is sweet like chocolates, vanilla and cream
future is taking so long to come

it makes my hope decreases and my fears increases
my fear that the future is here, yet am still talking bout the future
still spitting what I wanna be in the future
it's scare me
I never have enough to give my children when I have em
my greatest fear is the feeling of hate emanating from my kids towards me
that I failed em
that I didn't have enough to give em
like am too broke to support em
it's eats me deep inside
it kills me inside and out
that's why am here seeking you out
ooh tears of joy, where are thou
I wanna shed thee

this is for the youths out there

the kings and queens of this era

life is not all about cigarettes, codeine and weed
not about drinking, partying and back home to sleep
life is more serious than what we think it is
it may look beautiful, but unfortunately it is the
opposite of paradise

it house pain, agony and sorrow

misfortune, sadness and bitterness

I want you to be wise enough to skip through it

I want you to know life's a slut and karma is a bitch
life's tough and wicked

it wants you to eat it sour pussy

and taste its bitterness before you taste its sweetness
after going through all that
karma will come knocking on your door
reminding you of your mistakes
using your own words to taunt and hurt you
that's why you need to tread careful
that's why we all need to be prayerful to that nigga up there
so we can all shed the tears of joy

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Re: Lyricist /rappers... Please Rate These Lines by EKLE: 9:57pm On Jun 02, 2018
[/quote]that's why we all need to be prayerful to that nigga up there so we can all shed the tears of joy

did u refer to Almighty God as "that nigga"? the lyrics is cool but u spoilt everything by disrespecting The Maker

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Re: Lyricist /rappers... Please Rate These Lines by flexyrule(m): 11:21pm On Jun 22, 2018
Okay. This sounds like some suicide note.
Where is your motivation coming from?

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Re: Lyricist /rappers... Please Rate These Lines by Nobody: 4:36pm On Jun 23, 2018
"Dreams sometimes console"

Nice lines. Could get u on the paroll of some consulate

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Re: Lyricist /rappers... Please Rate These Lines by davidica(m): 10:10pm On Jul 10, 2018
EKLE:

that's why we all need to be prayerful to that nigga up there
so we can all shed the tears of joy


did u refer to Almighty God as "that nigga"?
the lyrics is cool but u spoilt everything by disrespecting The Maker
We are too religious in this country.. I didn't mean to insult God, I'm only saying we need to be prayerful to that 'nigga'(man)... Literally nigga means a black man... And actually we don't even know what God's like... Maybe he is black or white... But me as a black man believed he created me in his own image
Re: Lyricist /rappers... Please Rate These Lines by Wadewaltz(m): 11:18am On Feb 08, 2019
DavidLoves:
"Dreams sometimes console"

Nice lines. Could get u on the paroll of some consulate
D only tin dat wasnt ordinary in d entire epistle.Davidica and davidlove=alternate twin akant=sad

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