sosa993:




Lol, really. Youre beating Téllà? Nice one. Thanks for checking it out.

Yes oo

Hmmmm,sosa993, come and say more about the concluding part.

Wow, Sosa993 I must say you did a good job here, things went down as I expected. Tella was from Iyemo and to reverse the curse, she had to be returned. The raum and Tella's life are intertwined, like the raun is her life force. Although it is sad that she won't be with her family again, but it is for the best.

Nice one Esosa, it is not easy writing talk more of creating such a story. More strenght to you.

Fazemood:
Wow, Sosa993 I must say you did a good job here, things went down as I expected. Tella was from Iyemo and to reverse the curse, she had to be returned. The raum and Tella's life are intertwined, like the raun is her life force. Although it is sad that she won't be with her family again, but it is for the best.

Nice one Esosa, it is not easy writing talk more of creating such a story. More strenght to you.

Aww thanks a lot. You've really made my day. You can check my novel out. See If you'll like it: A girl called Fib and the Axe of fury.

I have some other short stories too....

The portal of Faili

The Ant queen

The house of tiny people. Thanks again for your comment.

dimssy:
Hmmmm,sosa993, come and say more about the concluding part.

Lol.... That's the concluding part. You can also check my other stories. Especially my ingoing novel A girl called Fib & the axe of fury

sosa993:




Aww thanks a lot. You've really made my day. You can check my novel out. See If you'll like it: A girl called Fib and the Axe of fury.

I have some other short stories too....

The portal of Faili

The Ant queen

The house of tiny people. Thanks again for your comment.

I am a follower of 'A Girl called Fib and the Axe of Fury' on Ebonystory, I prefer reading it there, and encouraging you too. You should guess who I am by now

Sure, Bieng on it

sosa993:





Lol.... That's the concluding part. You can also check my other stories. Especially my ingoing novel A girl called Fib & the axe of fury

I hope that like others, this author will not stop updating and go MIA. The story is well thought of and well penned. Madam take it from me, your potential and ability to capture your readers is very massive. It's usually difficult for me to start reading a new story but if I can go through the first chapter effortlessly and still crave more, then know that you have done a good job. I just finished with the updates on the first page but decided to put down a comment before I continue. The story is very immersive. Sth else I noticed are a few grammatical errors but then those can be overlooked as I'm sure we all know it isn't easy to write edit and proofread properly all in a bid to quickly post for readers who read as you write. I correct the very few errors in my head as I read as should every other reader. It's not easy being this good.

Fazemood:

I am a follower of 'A Girl called Fib and the Axe of Fury' on Ebonystory, I prefer reading it there, and encouraging you too. You should guess who I am by now

Fabian

INDUSTRIALFAN:
I hope that like others, this author will not stop updating and go MIA. The story is well thought of and well penned. Madam take it from me, your potential and ability to capture your readers is very massive. It's usually difficult for me to start reading a new story but if I can go through the first chapter effortlessly and still crave more, then know that you have done a good job. I just finished with the updates on the first page but decided to put down a comment before I continue. The story is very immersive. Sth else I noticed are a few grammatical errors but then those can be overlooked as I'm sure we all know it isn't easy to write edit and proofread properly all in a bid to quickly post for readers who read as you write. I correct the very few errors in my head as I read as should every other reader. It's not easy being this good.

Thanks a lot for the encouraging words. A Girl called Fib will never stop abruptly. Its already a complete story so I just try to edit per update because its riddled with some errors. Lol. Thanks once again.

sosa993:



Fabian

Daz me

sosa993:





Thanks a lot for the encouraging words. A Girl called Fib will never stop abruptly. Its already a complete story so I just try to edit per update because its riddled with some errors. Lol. Thanks once again.

Oh... Sorry..must've mixed up this comment with my other story. Téllà is already a complete project.

OMG, Tella died like that??

This was scary but interesting.
Nice and beautiful work here, Sosa993

I'm a new fan❤

Pinkberry5:
OMG, Tella died like that??

This was scary but interesting.
Nice and beautiful work here, Sosa993

I'm a new fan❤

Lol . I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have another story titled A girl called Fib. Check my bio. Its a novel.