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Lost Forever by Nobody: 1:02pm On Nov 21, 2018 |
Lost forever We were always one Playing with everyone Until your father said am black Which cause a ruckus among us Making you pitch your tent away We were always one Pass through the same hole Except my cloth that tore a bit And our drunk little house That make you cover your nose whenever am around. We were always one Landed on the same feet Before ism's comes to play So my heart fell for one But, you go with the other The last I saw your face We were always one Born with no allegiance To those of higher being But your mother has vow To bow to one and leave the other My papa never agree Which make you turn your back Today, we never face We were always one With dance under the tree And a play under the moon But we couldn't shake again Since your return from the west A riffraff in tour sight Then we ware lost forever ATAd 1 Like |
Re: Lost Forever by solutionmi: 1:19pm On Nov 21, 2018 |
nice work of Art |
Re: Lost Forever by Pusyiter(m): 4:58pm On Dec 06, 2018 |
Unique style Good stanza Poor rhyme and rhythm Good message Easy to analyse thematically Well done 1 Like |
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