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Lost Forever by Nobody: 1:02pm On Nov 21, 2018
Lost forever


We were always one
Playing with everyone
Until your father said am black
Which cause a ruckus among us
Making you pitch your tent away


We were always one
Pass through the same hole
Except my cloth that tore a bit
And our drunk little house
That make you cover your nose
whenever am around.


We were always one
Landed on the same feet
Before ism's comes to play
So my heart fell for one
But, you go with the other
The last I saw your face


We were always one
Born with no allegiance
To those of higher being
But your mother has vow
To bow to one and leave the other
My papa never agree
Which make you turn your back
Today, we never face


We were always one
With dance under the tree
And a play under the moon
But we couldn't shake again
Since your return from the west
A riffraff in tour sight
Then we ware lost forever


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Re: Lost Forever by solutionmi: 1:19pm On Nov 21, 2018
nice work of Art
Re: Lost Forever by Pusyiter(m): 4:58pm On Dec 06, 2018
Unique style
Good stanza
Poor rhyme and rhythm
Good message
Easy to analyse thematically
Well done

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