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In Love 08/03/2018 by selfwife(f): 6:09am On Nov 23, 2018
I knew nothing I know love
I knew war Yet know love
Filled with anger yet know love
Hunger lingered Yet know love
Hormones fluctuate Yet know love
I knew not what love is Yet know love
In nothing, in war,in anger, in Hunger, in poor health, in ecstasy, in all I know love
To all that flopped or stuck You defined love
I may run slow, run poorly, run off, run out I will forever know love within me
UNCONDITIONAL LOVE.

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Re: In Love 08/03/2018 by don4real18(m): 8:25am On Dec 24, 2018
selfwife:
I knew nothing
I know love

I knew war
Yet know love

Filled with anger
yet know love

Hunger lingered
Yet know love

Hormones fluctuate
Yet know love

I knew not what love is
Yet know love

In nothing, in war,in anger, in Hunger, in poor health, in ecstasy, in all
I know love

To all that flopped or stuck
You defined love

I may run slow, run poorly, run off, run out
I will forever know love within me

UNCONDITIONAL LOVE.
You need to make proper use of punctuations and words. Look at your first line- Knew & know... That's wrong
Re: In Love 08/03/2018 by selfwife(f): 11:05am On Dec 24, 2018
don4real18:

You need to make proper use of punctuations and words. Look at your first line- Knew & know... That's wrong
ok thank you. I really won't mind if you teach me.
Re: In Love 08/03/2018 by don4real18(m): 12:09pm On Dec 24, 2018
selfwife:
ok thank you. I really won't mind if you teach me.
Okay! I will help you out

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