Content: poem
title: Childhood


Starring at my old black and white portrait,
with beams of smile on my face,
i became nostalgic about my childhood.

A look which gluts of innocence,
and a mind filled with ignorance.
A brain rammed with untampered vision,
and void of bewilderment.

Playground became my encompassed abode,
Toys became my asset,
while playing became a thrilling task.
After a dutiful play,
an uncompromising and compulsive sleep follows.

Every folks around me depicts friendliness
and loveliness.
smiles and lovely words were my presents,
always amused and joyed at their sight.

When everything and anything seems free,
some were given without being asked for,
while some were at my disposal when needed.

Oh! how sweet were the memories of
my childhood.
Though now things of the past,
they are still fresh in my head.

Copyright : PHILIP LUCKY 2019
My fellow writers please comment on this poem. your advice and critics are important. . thanks

This is brilliant. What a nostalgic feeling reading this piece has brought.
Keep it up

Very interesting poem.
It'd make more sense to those born in the 80's when Nigeria was serene and habitable.

Nice piece

The best part of human life is their childhood, free of masturbation and bills for the guys.


Free of boobs and menstrual circle for the ladies.

What I missed most about it is picking my nose and eating it now it seems abnormal.
Aki and Pawpaw are just blessed.

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nice one, still have 300poems no one has ever set their eyes on except me

megafaraday:
This is brilliant. What a nostalgic feeling read this piece has brought.
Keep it up

Please correct your sentence.

"What a nostalgic feeling read this has brought"

It doesn't make sense.

iCauseTrouble:
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I can do that, but not free though.

I'm serious.

iCauseTrouble:
Who can help me compose a makeup poem for my ex? I need her back badly.

I can

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iCauseTrouble:
Who can help me compose a makeup poem for my ex? I need her back badly.

Offpoint:
The best part of human life is their childhood, free of masturbation and bills for the guys.


Free of boobs and menstrual circle for the ladies.

What I missed most about it is picking my nose and eating it now it seems abnormal.
Aki and Pawpaw are just blessed.

u can do that at d corner of ur room, pick ur nose and do the needful....

Hmmm
Life sha

dancok:
u can do that at d corner of ur room, pick ur nose and do the needful....

There's no fun doing in the corner, it taste better in public.

iCauseTrouble:
Who can help me compose a makeup poem for my ex? I need her back badly.

How much will you pay?

I must commend you,,,u such a brillant fellow and i love your peom is much interesting!!
Keep going---jah bless your hustle

...and this made FP! Divepen1 no try at all.

This is cool

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Please correct your sentence.

"What a nostalgic feeling read this has brought"

It doesn't make sense.[/quote

Thanks, error spotted, regretted and corrected.

nice one.

logan2:
nice one, still have 300poems no one has ever set their eyes on except me

That is Nigeria for you,I have close 1000 poems but Niger system sef no help. Poverty sef block our youth eyes to read to understanding. Bro,keep writing jaree

I wanna say a big thank you For your comments. it encourages me to keep writing more. wow! I made FP! I want to thank the Mods for pushing my post to the front-page. am grateful. anticipate for more of my works. thanks

megafaraday:
This is brilliant. What a nostalgic feeling reading this piece has brought.
Keep it up

thanks bro. I appreciate your comment

Avedonn:
Very interesting poem.
It'd make more sense to those born in the 80's when Nigeria was serene and habitable.

thanks very much. yeah Childhood memories of those born in the 80's and early 90's are mind blowing

Boyooosa:
Nice piece

thanks dear

Offpoint:
The best part of human life is their childhood, free of masturbation and bills for the guys.


Free of boobs and menstrual circle for the ladies.

What I missed most about it is picking my nose and eating it now it seems abnormal.
Aki and Pawpaw are just blessed.

thanks very much.. Childhood memories are incomparable