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Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 12:04am On Sep 07, 2010
Those tears you saw me with

tear me down

because she left me down
Done with you was what she said to me
sad indeed I became.

She came to my world with lots of love
but left without love left in her heart for me,

For me,that is the greatest shock I ever received

deceived by deceit!

Sit down please I would explain

she is right for leaving me
but she is wrong for not trusting me

Maybe tomorrow shall tell her that
she shouldnt have left me
for the reason everyone would approve
for that reason no one would believe
except the heart truely dipped deep in love

OH!I CRIED
For I did it for her love to last
last thing anyman would do for love
sacrificing in pains, battling the temptations all alone
not to eat any of these forbiding fruits hanging down on my shoulders

drenched I was but the energy to stay strong
her love provided me with
Although distance we were for years

Yes I stayed for nine years yearning for this year to come
only to hear that it has come to a dead end
for a plotted crime committed 5years back

I stuck my flesh into another for the first time not even before with her
This apple I ate I told her
was the reason for leaving me today

This I did for her love
when the pressure was much on me
'the she's' was weaker to have hold on me
so I put her apple in my mouth for the others whose apples I truely want to stay away from me
although she was far away from me
but I would never give my heart away
so I plotted a crime
it worked!
It sends them away
but she went away with them

not trusting my artistic damn scheme
So damn the scheme that caused me the tear
damn the inarticulate words of mine
that carry no conviction of truth
For deep down my heart I did it for her love
Tell her I'm crying
carrying my cross alone.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Dyt(f): 4:32am On Sep 10, 2010
She heard it
she saw it
she knew it
n she did more dan u did,u neva gave er d room 2 trust u,it wz u all along,she loved u dat she neva wanna share u wit anoda,u were er hrtbt bt c where u left er n u think she did it all 2 u,it wz u all along,it wz u
Re: Tell Her I Cried by ladman(m): 5:14pm On Sep 12, 2010
He cries.
listen , dear daughter of Eve.
pity a poor son of Adam.
Let your love SAieve into his heart again.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by ladman(m): 5:18pm On Sep 12, 2010
He cries.
listen , dear daughter of Eve.
pity a poor son of Adam.
Let your love sieve into his heart again.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 9:26am On Sep 14, 2010
Thanks Dyt and Ladman, not all the stories of love that end with happy end…that’s the reality of life different from the literature that strives to satisfy the audience.

The persona of the poem is truly in love and he had been faithful all year long but life experience is more complex than life itself. If only the heroine could understand that when we are truly in love we should trust in love because temptation would always come to put our love to test its only the trust that could see them through.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 10:03am On Sep 14, 2010
I won't tell her you cried

that wud mean i too lied

i wont because you never did

she is not a kid

u neva provd to be a lover and friend

u wanted her flower so u pretend

pretend to care, to share in her tear

but ur schemes were way crystal clear

she is gone for good

coz u neva proved to be a honest dude

i wont tell her you shedded a tear

that wud cause her more dispair

she now needs the shoulder of a true friend

so to win her, my whole body i would lend.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 12:37pm On Sep 15, 2010
cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry
Re: Tell Her I Cried by QueenQueen: 2:20am On Oct 07, 2010
Wooooww!! Beautiful!!! smiley
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 3:06pm On Oct 07, 2010
It flows like an ocean
it wouldnt just stop

it
drops
like
the rain
Heavily oozes down my
cheeks,
like a well
dug deep.
My love
my hope
my life
wont go down the drain
of this down -pour of tears.
Burnin me so hot
hurting me so bad
deadneing me so cold.
OH! LORD of love
give me the strength
wipe off my tears
let me be strong
not to cry anymore
For if she truely loves me
she wont walk away
without looking back
TELL HER I CRY
but
learning to hide my tears!
for I fear she is not truly mine.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by cbase: 11:39am On Oct 09, 2010
oh! I'll tell her you cried,
cried i doubt the tears eva dried,
leaves me wondering, your cry,
pondering when she left, if she said bye,
I'll tell her,
If I'll see her.

Joecool, Mr. Good,
A real honest dude  (laughs)
True friend my foot,
you deserve a boot. Lol
Or doesn't the same worm wriggle in your loins,
When you've burrowed deep n often, u'll sell her for coins.

Oh! The taste for & of apples
Many men had toppled.
Love bites,
Pitiable sights,
For When U've tasted & gone,
Tis all energy wasted & borne.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 12:10pm On Oct 12, 2010
So crappy z ur thought cbase
u stil leave in life's primordial phase
u fink everyone z like you
dat has got myopic view
gosh, u finkin so low
u've got to upgrade n grow
lettin her into my arm
doesn't min i wana cause ha harm
i only meant to soothe ha wit my balm
sing ha a lil psalm
and asure wit me dat evryfin z calm
it doesn't hurt me to b carin
so why z ur jealousy rarin
rarin its ugly head
i'm nt lik u dat takes evry lady to bed
i know u neva xpected this
so d next u wana fire me try nt to miss
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 10:26pm On Oct 13, 2010
Oh my friend, my friend discounts

it aint possible for tears to move d mounts

for so long u have been in dis wildernes

pourin ur heart to no one but lonliness

Why not please let the sleepin dog lie

i know how much u love her but shez said gudbye

without even a tear in her eye

so tel me why, why, why u stil chuz to cry

my friend i aint suggestin, u move on

i'm sayin just dont be the guy dat lovelorn

i'm askin u to quench d flame of love u burn

i'm sayin its best you realise that she is gone

she never thought it wise to stil stay

just as u said she did walk away

so bro, it aint no use tellin her you cried

u already said it a squillion times and she never replied.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 2:03pm On Oct 18, 2010
Joecoollorenzo,
the other time I chose not to say a word
because we are in a different world

‘‘Ta ba n sunkun a maa riran’’
tears won’t shroud the eye from seeing,
I saw liquor disgorging out of your lung
because you had too much of it for long
so your words weren’t taken serious
coming from a dude pissing off words
as a drunk in the world of liquor

but now that you are out of stupor
and say things of wisdom like C-base
or even woo beautiful! at least like Queen-Queen
I would take advice from you
and walk on with grace
for she would spit on my grave
If I die of this grieve.

Tell her I cried,
picking up the pieces of my life.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 6:38pm On Oct 22, 2010
Hmmm, discounts, discounts discounts

dnt use ur mouth and destroy ur founts

its good u finally choose to b wise

to let her go, to stop telling her lies

lies that there was alwaz tears in ur eyes

just to get back into her paradise

nice decision you took

to lets ur poor soul off ur stranglin hook

now talkin of ur cee base

with em i have never keep pace

i'v bin alwaz ahead

the trail of wisdom i'v alwaz lead

i'd rather be diagonised of being stupid

than tastin cbase wisdom of lipid

my wisdom 2u might not be tight

bt wateva, i stil got boastin right

wel, dat u ever cried

meant 4rm d onset u lied

thank gawd u movin on

i fink u deserv a bit of fun
Re: Tell Her I Cried by cbase: 2:40pm On Oct 23, 2010
THÏSCOUNTS
you've broken quite a few heartz,
your heartz been broken too, you've been there,
you've walked the road,
you are betta than u were yesterday,
cos u've learnt 2 rise when you fall.
that makes You a man.
so i wont tell her u cried, again,
I'll tell her you've risen
and about the things she's missin'.

Pickin up the pieces,
for the waist was ne'er easy,
speak not of grieves,
nor of graves,
when the garden's full
full of riped fruits,
fruits of diverse colors, shapes & sizes,
shapes & sizes, so irresistible,
so irresistible, you just want to go in,
go ye in then, and make ur choice,
make ur choice with enough effizzy, shakara & poise.

Joe, dont be silly,
from Base, wher's the jealousy you Cee,
David, a man after God's heart, was a psalmist too,
yet he fell & messed up with Uriah's boo,
and before God made himself a fool,
Who art thou then Joecool?

Oh I know, (laughs), ur not like me,
and you wont in any way be.
lol
I take every lady 2 bed,
who's willing 2 go with me,
I dont have 2 act & lie,
act & lie, just 2 get laid.
True I never expected that,
You are 2 wide a target,
if I ever have 2 fire,
I swear, I wont take aim,
Bang!!! You know I wont miss,
This is no diss
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 1:15am On Oct 26, 2010
@ceebase:
aint no diss

wen u termd mi $tupid

wel, i'd just smile n hiss

waste of time rantin wif a millipede

yah david did poo

i aint him, hop u got dat too

God deals wif people uniquely

so 4my sins, he had treat em diferently

hahahaha, on me u wudn't mis a bullet

lol, i'm bullet proofed u get

u can have her if u want to

i'm beta of going solo

she/he already tot u wiser

so fop, u beta b a gud defender

i didn't chickened out 4rm d raw

just dat she made herself nt worth fightn for
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 9:40am On Oct 26, 2010
Holier than Pope
I wont claim
but breaking hearts I would claim innocent
because I'm not that guy next door
My thinking I got it right
My kind of loving u wont find it dull
My schemes are pretty good

If she left me heart broken
she isnt right
if you condernm me you got it wrong

If I move on with my life
I get it right
because what wont kill
makes one stronger

The tears I dropped are toxic waste I have to,
to give me a clean heart
a clean soul to move on
to give me a clear sight to see without being blind in love

To see who to call a friend
To see whom to share my feelings with
Not with you
who says things
without weighing its effect
without being wise to say things right

I was with a gun to end it all
but now it's not going to be useful to me any more
but to you two I would give to go to war

Then you would know
that easier said than done.

Tears I wouldnt want to shed
of two friends aiming at each other's head.
So make peace between you two
and speak in one accord
to get my girls back on her feet
begging me that I'm all she has ever wanted
that she's learnt her lesson
that I'm right all this while
that I never betray her love

So I want her tears of love
to wipe off my tears of grieve.

Tell I cried.
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 4:52pm On Jan 25, 2011
It cud have taken ages to reply

but dat wudn't mak me tel her u did cry

dat a lie z bin in office for 20 years

doesn't mean truthful undalayers

u cud have ur base of lov unda d sea

but my unflinchn lov wasn't hard to see

urs was hidden miles below volcanoes

bt mine lyk twinkle star glows

dat i loved her was clearly shown

bt lyk a devil in angels clone

her heart was already sold

to a rusty metal man coated in plate of gold

by oxidation we shal see there tru value

by then it wudn't hav bin late too

forgive me for racin in ur hrt too laud

and i'd 4gv u 4nt noticin, i already bowed
Re: Tell Her I Cried by cbase: 2:21pm On Jan 31, 2011
Well if you still wish me to
I'll tell her you did
cried but now consoled
consoled and fit now.

though anoda claims her
professes his ocean of love
and unflinching tides of passion
whether she's said yes,
i still can't tell

talks about love hidden unda volcanoes
and love in the sky glowing
reminds me of my younger days
when i was a boy about his ways
Gosh! those days were fun
looking at my aged body, ragged and worn
i wonder, and whistle, how time has gone.

Hey! don't get me wrong,
lol, don't think am sprung,
am still a sexy old thing
my sexy old wife tells me so.
ha ha ha ha
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 1:05pm On Feb 09, 2011
How funny dat an old man cries

cried coz he was denied sour br, east pies

how funny an old man acting young

with worn out thighs n p.enis nt strong

how funny an old man not proud of hz gray

dat he cries like a baby every day

how funny u fink ur raggy frail skin z sexy

lol, an old wiselessly stingy man feelin foxy

where z ur wisdom for the old

where z ur xperience, i gues already sold

hence u wet ur tired singlets wit tears

cryin 4d dead, wat wasted years

u sure define a weak man

dat cryin for gone love dats al he can

nope nope nope u shudn't b shown pity

ur tears z a shame to man city

u have chosen d path of effeminacy

to b revalidated by an old bikini intimacy
Re: Tell Her I Cried by enix2dmix: 11:21pm On Feb 10, 2011
discont nd joecool i gat 2 say dis is COOOOOOOL

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