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Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 12:04am On Sep 07, 2010 |
Those tears you saw me with tear me down because she left me down Done with you was what she said to me sad indeed I became. She came to my world with lots of love but left without love left in her heart for me, For me,that is the greatest shock I ever received deceived by deceit! Sit down please I would explain she is right for leaving me but she is wrong for not trusting me Maybe tomorrow shall tell her that she shouldnt have left me for the reason everyone would approve for that reason no one would believe except the heart truely dipped deep in love OH!I CRIED For I did it for her love to last last thing anyman would do for love sacrificing in pains, battling the temptations all alone not to eat any of these forbiding fruits hanging down on my shoulders drenched I was but the energy to stay strong her love provided me with Although distance we were for years Yes I stayed for nine years yearning for this year to come only to hear that it has come to a dead end for a plotted crime committed 5years back I stuck my flesh into another for the first time not even before with her This apple I ate I told her was the reason for leaving me today This I did for her love when the pressure was much on me 'the she's' was weaker to have hold on me so I put her apple in my mouth for the others whose apples I truely want to stay away from me although she was far away from me but I would never give my heart away so I plotted a crime it worked! It sends them away but she went away with them not trusting my artistic damn scheme So damn the scheme that caused me the tear damn the inarticulate words of mine that carry no conviction of truth For deep down my heart I did it for her love Tell her I'm crying carrying my cross alone. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Dyt(f): 4:32am On Sep 10, 2010 |
She heard it she saw it she knew it n she did more dan u did,u neva gave er d room 2 trust u,it wz u all along,she loved u dat she neva wanna share u wit anoda,u were er hrtbt bt c where u left er n u think she did it all 2 u,it wz u all along,it wz u |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by ladman(m): 5:14pm On Sep 12, 2010 |
He cries. listen , dear daughter of Eve. pity a poor son of Adam. Let your love SAieve into his heart again. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by ladman(m): 5:18pm On Sep 12, 2010 |
He cries. listen , dear daughter of Eve. pity a poor son of Adam. Let your love sieve into his heart again. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 9:26am On Sep 14, 2010 |
Thanks Dyt and Ladman, not all the stories of love that end with happy end…that’s the reality of life different from the literature that strives to satisfy the audience. The persona of the poem is truly in love and he had been faithful all year long but life experience is more complex than life itself. If only the heroine could understand that when we are truly in love we should trust in love because temptation would always come to put our love to test its only the trust that could see them through. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 10:03am On Sep 14, 2010 |
I won't tell her you cried that wud mean i too lied i wont because you never did she is not a kid u neva provd to be a lover and friend u wanted her flower so u pretend pretend to care, to share in her tear but ur schemes were way crystal clear she is gone for good coz u neva proved to be a honest dude i wont tell her you shedded a tear that wud cause her more dispair she now needs the shoulder of a true friend so to win her, my whole body i would lend. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 12:37pm On Sep 15, 2010 |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by QueenQueen: 2:20am On Oct 07, 2010 |
Wooooww!! Beautiful!!! |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 3:06pm On Oct 07, 2010 |
It flows like an ocean it wouldnt just stop it drops like the rain Heavily oozes down my cheeks, like a well dug deep. My love my hope my life wont go down the drain of this down -pour of tears. Burnin me so hot hurting me so bad deadneing me so cold. OH! LORD of love give me the strength wipe off my tears let me be strong not to cry anymore For if she truely loves me she wont walk away without looking back TELL HER I CRY but learning to hide my tears! for I fear she is not truly mine. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by cbase: 11:39am On Oct 09, 2010 |
oh! I'll tell her you cried, cried i doubt the tears eva dried, leaves me wondering, your cry, pondering when she left, if she said bye, I'll tell her, If I'll see her. Joecool, Mr. Good, A real honest dude (laughs) True friend my foot, you deserve a boot. Lol Or doesn't the same worm wriggle in your loins, When you've burrowed deep n often, u'll sell her for coins. Oh! The taste for & of apples Many men had toppled. Love bites, Pitiable sights, For When U've tasted & gone, Tis all energy wasted & borne. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 12:10pm On Oct 12, 2010 |
So crappy z ur thought cbase u stil leave in life's primordial phase u fink everyone z like you dat has got myopic view gosh, u finkin so low u've got to upgrade n grow lettin her into my arm doesn't min i wana cause ha harm i only meant to soothe ha wit my balm sing ha a lil psalm and asure wit me dat evryfin z calm it doesn't hurt me to b carin so why z ur jealousy rarin rarin its ugly head i'm nt lik u dat takes evry lady to bed i know u neva xpected this so d next u wana fire me try nt to miss |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 10:26pm On Oct 13, 2010 |
Oh my friend, my friend discounts it aint possible for tears to move d mounts for so long u have been in dis wildernes pourin ur heart to no one but lonliness Why not please let the sleepin dog lie i know how much u love her but shez said gudbye without even a tear in her eye so tel me why, why, why u stil chuz to cry my friend i aint suggestin, u move on i'm sayin just dont be the guy dat lovelorn i'm askin u to quench d flame of love u burn i'm sayin its best you realise that she is gone she never thought it wise to stil stay just as u said she did walk away so bro, it aint no use tellin her you cried u already said it a squillion times and she never replied. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 2:03pm On Oct 18, 2010 |
Joecoollorenzo, the other time I chose not to say a word because we are in a different world ‘‘Ta ba n sunkun a maa riran’’ tears won’t shroud the eye from seeing, I saw liquor disgorging out of your lung because you had too much of it for long so your words weren’t taken serious coming from a dude pissing off words as a drunk in the world of liquor but now that you are out of stupor and say things of wisdom like C-base or even woo beautiful! at least like Queen-Queen I would take advice from you and walk on with grace for she would spit on my grave If I die of this grieve. Tell her I cried, picking up the pieces of my life. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 6:38pm On Oct 22, 2010 |
Hmmm, discounts, discounts discounts dnt use ur mouth and destroy ur founts its good u finally choose to b wise to let her go, to stop telling her lies lies that there was alwaz tears in ur eyes just to get back into her paradise nice decision you took to lets ur poor soul off ur stranglin hook now talkin of ur cee base with em i have never keep pace i'v bin alwaz ahead the trail of wisdom i'v alwaz lead i'd rather be diagonised of being stupid than tastin cbase wisdom of lipid my wisdom 2u might not be tight bt wateva, i stil got boastin right wel, dat u ever cried meant 4rm d onset u lied thank gawd u movin on i fink u deserv a bit of fun |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by cbase: 2:40pm On Oct 23, 2010 |
THÏSCOUNTS you've broken quite a few heartz, your heartz been broken too, you've been there, you've walked the road, you are betta than u were yesterday, cos u've learnt 2 rise when you fall. that makes You a man. so i wont tell her u cried, again, I'll tell her you've risen and about the things she's missin'. Pickin up the pieces, for the waist was ne'er easy, speak not of grieves, nor of graves, when the garden's full full of riped fruits, fruits of diverse colors, shapes & sizes, shapes & sizes, so irresistible, so irresistible, you just want to go in, go ye in then, and make ur choice, make ur choice with enough effizzy, shakara & poise. Joe, dont be silly, from Base, wher's the jealousy you Cee, David, a man after God's heart, was a psalmist too, yet he fell & messed up with Uriah's boo, and before God made himself a fool, Who art thou then Joecool? Oh I know, (laughs), ur not like me, and you wont in any way be. lol I take every lady 2 bed, who's willing 2 go with me, I dont have 2 act & lie, act & lie, just 2 get laid. True I never expected that, You are 2 wide a target, if I ever have 2 fire, I swear, I wont take aim, Bang!!! You know I wont miss, This is no diss |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 1:15am On Oct 26, 2010 |
@ceebase: aint no diss wen u termd mi $tupid wel, i'd just smile n hiss waste of time rantin wif a millipede yah david did poo i aint him, hop u got dat too God deals wif people uniquely so 4my sins, he had treat em diferently hahahaha, on me u wudn't mis a bullet lol, i'm bullet proofed u get u can have her if u want to i'm beta of going solo she/he already tot u wiser so fop, u beta b a gud defender i didn't chickened out 4rm d raw just dat she made herself nt worth fightn for |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by thiscounts(m): 9:40am On Oct 26, 2010 |
Holier than Pope I wont claim but breaking hearts I would claim innocent because I'm not that guy next door My thinking I got it right My kind of loving u wont find it dull My schemes are pretty good If she left me heart broken she isnt right if you condernm me you got it wrong If I move on with my life I get it right because what wont kill makes one stronger The tears I dropped are toxic waste I have to, to give me a clean heart a clean soul to move on to give me a clear sight to see without being blind in love To see who to call a friend To see whom to share my feelings with Not with you who says things without weighing its effect without being wise to say things right I was with a gun to end it all but now it's not going to be useful to me any more but to you two I would give to go to war Then you would know that easier said than done. Tears I wouldnt want to shed of two friends aiming at each other's head. So make peace between you two and speak in one accord to get my girls back on her feet begging me that I'm all she has ever wanted that she's learnt her lesson that I'm right all this while that I never betray her love So I want her tears of love to wipe off my tears of grieve. Tell I cried. |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 4:52pm On Jan 25, 2011 |
It cud have taken ages to reply but dat wudn't mak me tel her u did cry dat a lie z bin in office for 20 years doesn't mean truthful undalayers u cud have ur base of lov unda d sea but my unflinchn lov wasn't hard to see urs was hidden miles below volcanoes bt mine lyk twinkle star glows dat i loved her was clearly shown bt lyk a devil in angels clone her heart was already sold to a rusty metal man coated in plate of gold by oxidation we shal see there tru value by then it wudn't hav bin late too forgive me for racin in ur hrt too laud and i'd 4gv u 4nt noticin, i already bowed |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by cbase: 2:21pm On Jan 31, 2011 |
Well if you still wish me to I'll tell her you did cried but now consoled consoled and fit now. though anoda claims her professes his ocean of love and unflinching tides of passion whether she's said yes, i still can't tell talks about love hidden unda volcanoes and love in the sky glowing reminds me of my younger days when i was a boy about his ways Gosh! those days were fun looking at my aged body, ragged and worn i wonder, and whistle, how time has gone. Hey! don't get me wrong, lol, don't think am sprung, am still a sexy old thing my sexy old wife tells me so. ha ha ha ha |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by Joecoollorenzo(m): 1:05pm On Feb 09, 2011 |
How funny dat an old man cries cried coz he was denied sour br, east pies how funny an old man acting young with worn out thighs n p.enis nt strong how funny an old man not proud of hz gray dat he cries like a baby every day how funny u fink ur raggy frail skin z sexy lol, an old wiselessly stingy man feelin foxy where z ur wisdom for the old where z ur xperience, i gues already sold hence u wet ur tired singlets wit tears cryin 4d dead, wat wasted years u sure define a weak man dat cryin for gone love dats al he can nope nope nope u shudn't b shown pity ur tears z a shame to man city u have chosen d path of effeminacy to b revalidated by an old bikini intimacy |
Re: Tell Her I Cried by enix2dmix: 11:21pm On Feb 10, 2011 |
discont nd joecool i gat 2 say dis is COOOOOOOL |
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