arck1:
well-done ...i have never comment on this 'cause I'm reading in silence you are very good

This update is dope and you just describe how it felt the last time he left perfectly, though he isn't back yet but I know he sure will. This last update is like its for me Rosemary. it's so perfect like you are rewinding everything for me and are you sure you are not writing my story? .

More wisdom babe

Oh my I don't know what to say, thank you so much

ukaface:
Rose, can you just allow chike die, and make Liz pregnant of twins, and help reverse ebube back to Nigeria. Thank you.
Thanks for the update

hahahhaaaa... You really have it all figured out Lol

bizza45:
I was waiting for u 2 describe d nacking wella, c as u fall my hand

hey Lawd

kingBenedict:
Still episode 19...na wa oooh...

calm down first na

Adesina12:

Na today Have u not spoiled finished I beg enjoy sweet popcorn with me jhoor.

how can I spoil, hope say milk dey d popcorn

My first comment here
Ya good aunty rosy

Can chike just fall and die or motorcycle should hit him biko.
As for "our Lady", I can feel the baby's heartbeat already

No matter how hard Chike tried he will not succeed.

It will take Bube years but he will surely come back, though his friend may die there.

And for Lizzy she is pregnant.

FortunateB:
No matter how hard Chike tried he will not succeed.

It will take Bube years but he will surely come back, though his friend may die there.

And for Lizzy she is pregnant.

nah.... I think chicken will have his way n Lizzy will be pregnant for him... Bube was sent to Somalia cos the saboteurs thinks he knows too much and will investigate...but I wish he will come back alive and well



first comment ever in NL literature....God bless the writer.u captured wit this story cos I'm on d big side n once dated a soldier

Thanks for the update

I will say chances of Chike having his way is 50-50.
But the aspect of Lizzy been pregnant for him is not accepted cause she is already pregnant for Bube.
The sabotage will be investigated by the Admiral and he will know that his Superior was behind it and also the reason Bube was sent to Somalia.

Immarocks:


nah.... I think chicken will have his way n Lizzy will be pregnant for him... Bube was sent to Somalia cos the saboteurs thinks he knows too much and will investigate...but I wish he will come back alive and well



first comment ever in NL literature....God bless the writer.u captured wit this story cos I'm on d big side n once dated a soldier

Emmzy201:
My first comment here
Ya good aunty rosy

Aww thank you for commenting, I appreciate you so much

Immarocks:


nah.... I think chicken will have his way n Lizzy will be pregnant for him... Bube was sent to Somalia cos the saboteurs thinks he knows too much and will investigate...but I wish he will come back alive and well



first comment ever in NL literature....God bless the writer.u captured wit this story cos I'm on d big side n once dated a soldier

Yeepiii!!! i am honored

EPISODE 20

“I have sinned…I don’t deserve to be called a married woman”

“Oh sister Ada, what are you talking about? It can’t be that bad” Her pastor’s wife folded her hands piously, lean her chest on her massive well-polished office table and looked at her church member of eight months

“Terrible ma…what I did was terrible” Ada was sorrowful

“Oh sister Ada…” Pastor Mrs. Boma held Ada’s hands, “Whatever it is, the blood of Jesus has wiped it clean…”

Ada shook her head and withdrew her hands from Pastor Boma “No ma…this is different, he caused it…I swear he made me do it”

“Who caused what? what are you talking about Ada?”

It was so difficult for her to say, the words were too heavy for her mouth “I…I ehm…” she swallowed hard “I cheated on my husband…” she rushed the words like they were hot in her mouth

“What? how…why…with whom…” Pastor Boma was surprised. Ada broke down in tears, guilt eat her up like fire would lick up oil “Oh come on, it’s okay…take your time, pour your heart to the lord…” Her words made Ada to cry more, she felt like the eyes of the Lord were everywhere in that office, looking at her with disdain

“I tried ma…I tried to hold on, to be a virtues woman, I waited for him to change, to realize that I am his wife and that I have sexual needs but…he ignored me…Chike did not make love to me for over two months…”

“What?”

“He still haven’t”

“This is terrible…did you have a fight with him? Or you have not been taking care of yourself so well…you know…I mean…”

“He wasn’t like this before and he has never complained about anything…until one day he came back from ‘God knows where’ and things were never the same again”

“So…who is this guy, the guy you slept with?” Pastor Boma asked

Ada shook her head with tears on her face, she sniffed the mucus that has blocked her nostrils “Not a man ma…”

“A woman? You indulged in Lesbianism?” the pastor’s wife pulled herself off her chair

“No!...no ma…”

“Then what?”

“Masturbation ma” she was ashamed “I masturbated and I am ashamed to say that I couldn’t stop even when the spirit was telling to stop…not until I climaxed did it dawn on me that the devil has succeeded in dividing my home” she cried

“Ahm…ehm…I don’t know what to say Ada, Masturbation is a terrible sin, the sin of the flesh…as long as I am concerned it is as good as you committed adultery!” The pastor’s wife stuttered, she knew she wasn’t so certain what to tell this woman who thought she was supposed to have answers to every problems

To Ada, pastor Boma’s words made her feel worse, she felt like a sinner already going to hell “I am so sorry…I don’t know what to do” she held her pastor’s wife “Pray for me ma, pray that I don’t fall for this again, I get the urge every time and my husband is not there to help me out, I have tried to seduce him but it didn’t work, I fight the demon in my head telling me to touch myself again, I don’t know if I could resist the temptation anymore”

“God forbid!” the pastor’s wife cut in “The devil is a liar…you are not going to fall for his tricks in Jesus name! this is the devil trying to possess you so you can destroy your home by yourself…but he has failed”

“Amen! Please Jesus save me!”

“Let me pray for you sister Ada”

Pastor Boma had a pang of jealousy, guilt and self-pity, she couldn’t remember the last time she had Orgasm, that would be many years ago, the first few years of their marriage before her husband became a district pastor and everything became a sin for him.

Boma felt she could have the same nerve to find satisfaction elsewhere like Ada, even if it means doing it herself. But guilt and statues would not permit her, the last time she stumbled on a pornographic clip, she has shouted “Jesus!” and shut the site down. Her husband was on a one-week minister’s conference and she was lonely, she had gone back to the site and had watched crazy men and women screwing their brains out, moaning like howling dogs.

She had lived with that guilt for a very long time, to make her guilt worse, she had secretly desired to be treated like the loosed girls she saw on the screen.

*

That night, Ada was dressed so beautifully sexy, a lady in waiting for her man, the house was clean, dinner was perfectly made and was already set and she sat on the sofa waiting. When he came back and sat on his favorite armchair, she sat opposite him, daring him with her alluring eyes, batting her eye-lids heavy with mascara, and seductively opening her legs for him to have a good view of her pink garden.
If he noticed her efforts he didn’t show it, he stood up from the chair, walked straight into the room and didn’t come out again.

The devil came visiting, she didn’t resist, she gave him the dining table rather. As she tore her flimsy night ware in rage, she ran to the guest room naked, put two pillows together and humped till hot creamy liquid gushed out of her and hot tears wet her face.

*

“Babe I am on my way to a night vigil at OPM, it is their ‘coconut Friday night’ and I got some coconut for my assignment…” Amaka chatted immediately Elizabeth opened the door

“…I got two coconuts in case you want to come with me” She brought out two medium size coconuts and dropped them on the fine wooden table “This nigh is the night, it is either the chains of single-hood will be broken or I am not coming back” she stopped when she noticed that she was the only one talking, the silence from Elizabeth deafened her. She turned and saw Elizabeth looking at her, yet not seeing her, she was leaned on the door “Lizzy…Lizzy…Elizabeth!”

“He is gone” Elizabeth said in a lost tone

“What are you talking about? Who is gone?” Amaka came close

“Him…Ebube, my soldier love…he is gone”

Amaka was shocked “What do you mean gone? Gone to where?”

“To see death, they have taken him away from me”

“Is he dead?”

“What is worse than being sent to Somalia for a peace keeping mission with no hope of coming back?” she gazed directly at Amaka

“Oh God…come here” Amaka gathered her friend in her arms and allow her cry on her shoulders

“He left me worse than he met me,” she sobbed “he made me fall in love with him…he…he…made me loose myself to him” Amaka placed her palm on her friends back and console her “the last night we spent together was the most beautiful night I have ever had…he made sweet love to me” she cried more

“Come on girl…you love him and I know he loves you too”

“now I don’t know what to do, he left me hanging, with a letter and an engagement ring that I don’t even know if I will even wear”

Some minutes later, they would be reading the letter, laughing and crying at the words in it and at the stories Elizabeth had to tell her friend.

*

“What are you doing here alone Aminu”

Ebube sat on the field, closed to the junior officer. He had been on call with his woman, and had wanted to take a walk before he sighted Aminu, seated alone with his head bent.

“I am scared Boss, we may die out there” Aminu had fear written all over him “I heard what happened to the last troop that was sent there, only three returned out of the three hundred that went” he wiped the perspiration that gathered on his forehead “it’s a death trap, a suicide boss!”

“Aminu! Get hold of yourself!” Ebube heard those storied too, every member of the new troop sang it as a song since they arrived “Aminu, we are going to come back believe me”

“How? How sir?”

“We are soldiers, we are fucking Nigerian Soldiers and survival is what we know how to do”

“Sir I am afraid, I have a young wife and a set of twins, I don’t want to die yet, I want to return to them”

“You will not die Aminu, I will not let you to die boy” He held aminu by the shoulder, both of us a coming back, and I will go with you to see your beautiful set of twins.

This made Aminu to smile

“Come on Boy, let’s take a work, I want to tell you about the love that wells my heart”

The troop would be departing the next morning

Phewww!!!! Thank God u updateed your story i was about calling sars for u ahswear

thanks for the update
keep it up

This chike sef what is his problem.

nice one rosy

If you love Choke, warn him and don't let me swear for him, don't lemme curse him. Is he m*d ni or what? what's this nonsense self?

Ebube love, we are waiting for you, you are ours forever

queenitee:
If you love Choke, warn him and don't let me swear for him, don't lemme curse him. Is he m*d ni or what? what's this nonsense self?

Ebube love, we are waiting for you, you are ours forever

Don't mind that yeye Chike
We are already preparing a letter Bomb for him to be delivered by Rosemary33
He dare not touch our anointed BBB lady of EbULIZZY damsel
How are u doing my NL lady everywhere I go...
Milked Sweet popcorn for you dear

nice 1

Adesina12:


Don't mind that yeye Chike
We are already preparing a letter Bomb for him to be delivered by Rosemary33
He dare not touch our anointed BBB lady of EbULIZZY damsel
How are u doing my NL lady everywhere I go...
Milked Sweet popcorn for you dear

I'm fine o and you? Ramadan Kareem

queenitee:
If you love Choke, warn him and don't let me swear for him, don't lemme curse him. Is he m*d ni or what? what's this nonsense self?

Ebube love, we are waiting for you, you are ours forever

So you're here already abi....mama d'mama

Rosemary33, thanks for the update hun

Thanks for the update ma'am

queenitee:
If you love Choke, warn him and don't let me swear for him, don't lemme curse him. Is he m*d ni or what? what's this nonsense self?

Ebube love, we are waiting for you, you are ours forever

.
I hope u are okay? U are talking to a nonliving (story) thing oh.

Smithwilliams826:


.
I hope u are okay? U are talking to a nonliving (story) thing oh.

I'm fine. The fun of reading or writing a story is to give the characters life., I'm not mad, lol. Relate with your characters like they are human and living and that's actually when you can understand what each character is all about

Thank you for caring tho

dimssy:


So you're here already abi....mama d'mama

Rosemary33, thanks for the update hun

I've been here since ages

EPISODE 21

“When will you come to see us? My son said so much about you”

She stood by her car, the car booth was opened and laborers where loading feeds inside

“Soon ma, I will visit soon. How is Omalicha?” she held the phone to her left ear with her shoulder, and searched her bag for her invoice

“She is fine, only missing her father…do you want to speak to her?”

“Oh!” the question came as a shock, she didn’t know what to say to a three-year-old child “Okay…” she heard when the Older woman called on the little girl to come speak with her daddy’s friend, she braced herself. It was funny to her that speaking to a child could be so nervous

“Heyo..”

She heard the little birdy voice of the child “Hi Angel”

The child chuckled “Daddy calls me Anchul (Angel), he sait (said) that I am was sent fwom (from) heafun (Heaven) to him”

“And you like the name?” She changed her tone to sound like that of a child

“Yech (Yes)”

“So you know, you are my Angel too, hope you will like to be my Angel?” she noticed that the Laborers where done with the job and was waiting for her to pay them, she held the phone again with her shoulder and searched her bag for a five-hundred-naira note

“Yech!(Yes) I will watch ovu you when you shieep (over you when you sleep) and fight all the Mostitos (Mosquitoes)” the child was as thrilled as Elizabeth

“Aww…that will be so lovely my Angel”

“Are you daddy’s girlfriend?” the child asked innocently

She stuttered for some seconds, she wasn’t expecting that question “Ehm…I…”

“Daddy said that you are going to mawy (marry) him and you are going to make more babies toketo (Together). Will it be a baby bwota (Brother) or a sister?” the child didn’t wait for Elizabeth to answer “I want a baby bwota (Brother) I will put him in my scooy bak (School bag) and show my fuwens (Friends)”

Elizabeth laughed irrespective of herself “My Angel…I don’t know what to say…”

“Will you take me with you to Potaicut (Port Harcourt)?...peese (Please)?”

“Sure” Elizabeth swallowed the lump that hung in her throat “I will take you with me darling”

“yippee…” the girl shouted and gloated at her grandmother “Mama…Daddy’s girl fwend will take me to Potaicut!” the child was back on the phone with her “I will catch a fluterby (Butterfly) for you when you come, we will twavel with it you hear?”

“That’s alright my Angel, I will equally show you my fishes”

The girl gasped “You have fisies?...gwanma…she has fisies!”

The old woman took the phone from the child “It’s enough now Oma, go and have your bath” to Elizabeth she said “we love you already, my son couldn’t stop talking about you”

Elizabeth sat in her car and shut the door, “Thank you mama…”

“I hope my daughter didn’t bore you with her chatters? She talks too much”

“She is a lovely little Angel” Elizabeth paused “Mama, Bube said I should take care of you and Oma…” she heard the Old woman groan, she felt her sorrow “please call me whenever you need anything, let me take care of you mama”

The woman sighed “All I want is for my son to come back to me”

“He will come back Mama, he said he will and I believe him”

“I believe you my daughter, though I cannot help but worry, what will happen to me if he doesn’t come back? What of Omalicha? And you my child, will you be able to wait no matter how long it takes?”

Those where questions she had no answers to, as she drove back to her farm, she reminisced on the gentle but serious questions, ‘What if he doesn’t come back?’

She drove absent minded till she got to her gate and Okon Opened the gate,

“Okon abeg Open the booth and bring out the feeds”

“Okay Madam”

“No pack them that place wey you pack the last one o, make rain no spoil my feeds them” she was engrossed in her thoughts and didn’t notice the man that has been standing with his back on her, and had followed her as soon as she walked down to her little office

“Hello Lizzy” the strong cold voice said behind her

She froze and turned sharply “Chike!”

“Did you miss me my darling?” he said with a smirk on his lips

“What are you doing here? How did you get in here?” she looked around but her boy was busy with the unloading of the bags of feed

He followed her gaze and laughed “Hmm…it was so easy to get myself in, especially when you have an idiot as a sales boy” he touched her braids and she cringed

“I don’t know how you get in here or why you are here, but I want you to leave this place this minute!” she ordered

He feigned being scare, then busted out in a hysteric laughter “My babe, when will you learn that I can’t be dismissed easily…” he touched her face “I leave whenever I want, and I don’t want to leave because our little adventure is about to begin”

She slapped him hard on the face “Get out! Now!” she barked and walked fast towards her office

He held his cheek out of surprise and painful pleasure, that was what he wanted, to get her scared and aggressive, it heightened his desire, he hurried towards her and caught up with her before she opened the door, he pulled her by her long braids and she grimaced.

“How dare you walk away from me!” he said in clenched teeth. He looked around to be sure that the boy was out of sight before he wrapped her braids round his palm and pulled her closer to himself, with her buttocks touching his crotch and her head pulled backward that his mouth was positioned on her ears “You don’t walk away from me bitch! I am the one that call the shot here, I tell you when to walk and when not to, this game is mine not you do you understand?” She whimpered.

He made a snake like hiss, ran his tongue on her ear while holding her neck in a tight grip “Chike you are hurting me!” she coughed

“I like to hurt you, I will keep hurting you if you keep rejecting me, I will like to know what it feels like to Bleep you while you cry…” he looked around again, he was satisfied when he saw no one in sight. He slapped her buttocks and gave it a tight squeeze

“Chike please don’t do this to me…I am not your who*e; I belong to another man now…”

“But you are my who*e…and you belong to me, me alone Bitch” he gave another squeeze.

She has never been that scared in her life, ‘I should have told Ebube about this’ she thought she panted heavily and her thought raced like a fast train. She needed to get herself loose from the mad man, she needed to get away from him as soon as possible.

Without thinking, she sank her elbow on his ribs, she felt air escaped his mouth as he groaned in pains, she ran as fast as she could out of the gate and disappeared in the street

*

“Madam he has not been to work for some days now”

“Are you sure? He leaves the house every morning and tells me he is coming to work, or is there any other assignment the company sent him on?” Ada couldn’t understand why her husband’s secretary would call her to ask of her husband, “I don’t know what to say, have you tried calling him?”

“Yes, but he has not been picking my calls for the past three days, we have external auditors coming in tomorrow and he has lots of files on his table to handle before the auditors arrive” the secretary sounded worried

“Please my sister, don’t you know any one you can ask in the office? Maybe a friend who knows his way about?” Ada knew she sounded stupid, she was his wife and was supposed to know her husband’s way about.

“Madam, your husband doesn’t have any close friend here, he hardly even chat with anyone, you are the only person who should know his way about, I would have suggested that you should alert the police but you said he comes home every night”

“Yes…yes, in fact he left the house this morning and still told me that he was going to the office”

“Ma I don’t know what to do again, he needed to be here today so we can prepare the files…please ma, if he comes back this night, tell him that I called, he has to be in the office or our jobs may be at stake”

Ada was short of words, she knew something was wrong with Chike her husband, but didn’t know that has degenerated to the point of lying to her about going to work and not getting there for three days, “Okay, I will let him know”

She held her phone and paced the sitting room, ‘what is going on, what is happening to you Chike?’ what game was her husband playing?

Something struck her; could it be that he has decided to gradually move in with his mistress, maybe he has gotten another job and wouldn’t want to let her know until he would move out finally.

She would not sink without a fight, she must unravel the mystery woman that has succeeded in taking her husband, she was his wife, she must not give her husband up for another woman.

What can I say...

queenitee:

I've been here since ages

And you dinor mention me abi

dimssy:


And you dinor mention me abi

I'm sorry

Chike is mad

Thanks for the update

Satan just punish Chike cause he has ruined his chances of sleeping with Lizzy. I know he will never succeed.

Rosy thanks for the update