When a poet Love's
Let me paint you with words
And hang the portrait on the cranny of the world.
Let me dissolve your beauty into lines
So the world could know you're mine.
Let me poem the words from my heart,
Because, my heart calls and for you it beats.
I will make words rain till it floods a million books,
Thousand eyes will see beyond your good looks.
Your name will be housed in libraries around the world.
Because you're stuck in my heart like a sword.
I will make pens dance for your sake
I will be beside you when you wake,
And Cuddle you to sleep with lullabies.
Because when a poet loves: the ink suffers.

poetictwenty:
When a poet Love's
Let me paint you with words
And hang the portrait on the cranny of the world.
Let me dissolve your beauty into lines
So the world could know you're mine.
Let me poem the words from my heart,
Because, my heart calls and for you it beats.
I will make words rain till it floods a million books,
Thousand eyes will see beyond your good looks.
Your name will be housed in libraries around the world.
Because you're stuck in my heart like a sword.
I will make pens dance for your sake
I will be beside you when you wake,
And Cuddle you to sleep with lullabies.
Because when a poet loves: the ink suffers.

Nicely written.

Some of the lines were really catchy.

Well done!

poetictwenty:
When a poet Love's
Let me paint you with words
And hang the portrait on the cranny of the world.
Let me dissolve your beauty into lines
So the world could know you're mine.
Let me poem the words from my heart,
Because, my heart calls and for you it beats.
I will make words rain till it floods a million books,
Thousand eyes will see beyond your good looks.
Your name will be housed in libraries around the world.
Because you're stuck in my heart like a sword.
I will make pens dance for your sake
I will be beside you when you wake,
And Cuddle you to sleep with lullabies.
Because when a poet loves: the ink suffers.

It's so awesome.

You could have spaced it though.

Good stuff, I enjoyed it.

poetictwenty:
When a poet Love's
Let me paint you with words
And hang the portrait on the cranny of the world.
Let me dissolve your beauty into lines
So the world could know you're mine.
Let me poem the words from my heart,
Because, my heart calls and for you it beats.
I will make words rain till it floods a million books,
Thousand eyes will see beyond your good looks.
Your name will be housed in libraries around the world.
Because you're stuck in my heart like a sword.
I will make pens dance for your sake
I will be beside you when you wake,
And Cuddle you to sleep with lullabies.
Because when a poet loves: the ink suffers.

Well written bro but let your poem be structured. We should understand how many stanzas your poem has and also know if there is any run on line.

You are blessed.
I also think you should make it into stanzas.