As Some Peeps here Know, Your Boi, Da-Whizkid is Running A freestyle Series Called FreestyleFortnight. . . Where I Drop a Link to My Newest Freestyle every 14days. poo has been Running for Six Weeks Now. If you've not been following, u've obviously missed 2 hot Freestyles.

This idea behind FreestyleFortnight is to create an Online Fanbase for Me and Also know how far I've Improved through feedbacks i get From U guys.

So I hereby Urge everybody to Download/Listen to this FreestyleFortnight Song and Tell me how far i've Come, Ideas on how I can Improve and Rating. . . Plz don't Mince Words. All Manner of Criticisms is Welcomed.

Download/Listen to the Song here http://www.4shared.com/audio/H1FCslzU/Crushes_Something_you_Forgot__.html or http://plunder.com/2ce30e5e3f

follow your Boi on Twitter @Juzt_Courage

better than the previous,,u keep growing big wit each song, keep writing, dont stop, am glad to see u grow from a youngboy to a man wit white hair on his prink keep spitting on dynamic beats. the streets see u .1

04kaa!! Mad Man

Review Coming

Album Material!!!!!

Ma guy you try well well. . . But. . . this your delivery. . it seems you're forcing it. . . Nice Track

Mobinga:

Album Material!!!!!

Ma guy you try well well. . . But. . . this your delivery. . it seems you're forcing it. . . Nice Track

Bros Thanks! but i no really get the meaning of the bolded part. . . . Bros U mind to Expantiate a little? Thanks

04kaa:

better than the previous,,u keep growing big wit each song, keep writing, dont stop, am glad to see u grow from a youngboy to a man wit white hair on his prink keep spitting on dynamic beats. the streets see u .1

Ahhhh! Bros, You are a Devil. I Swear! Thanks Anyways. More Reviews Plz

Mobinga:

Album Material!!!!!

Ma guy you try well well. . . But. . . this your delivery. . it seems you're forcing it. . . Nice Track

Contradiction

semid4lyfe:

Contradiction

Bros, Try expantiate na. . . . U knw how u dey do am b4 na,

I just Added a new 4shared link, 4 those who are finding it hard to get past d plunder's stupid Survey! Thanks. More Reviews.

oga the beat buried ur voice na. . . . howfar

tosinaded@:

oga the beat buried your voice na. . . . howfar

I believe! Thanks mahn, 4 checking it out. U 2 much.

and courage , u promised a song every friday until the mixtape drops, where is the one for last week and this week??

04kaa:

and courage , u promised a song every friday until the mixtape drops, where is the one for last week and this week??

Bros, na Every fortnight i talk na. . . No be every week 0! Next 2moro i go post a link to anoda fr3style. . . After that My Mixtape drops and FridayFreestyleFortnight continues.

da-whizkid:

Bros, na Every fortnight i talk na. . . No be every week 0! Next 2moro i go post a link to anoda fr3style. . . After that My Mixtape drops and FridayFreestyleFortnight continues.

oya do now. u too dey talk

Back to d top,,,, eeeezz

DaWhiz,

The way your track is produced is masking your abilities. Essentially, the levels between your vocals and back tracks are not hitting the right spot. The backing tracks seem to over shadow your main vocals.

Try the following: Increase your low end gain on the equalizer (eq). That is add a bit of bass boost to your main vocal.

Try and double your vocals (your main rap) and pan one to the left speaker a bit and the other double to the right a bit. You have a "treble rich" voice and this approach may give your voice that "punch" that you need.

If you can compress your main vocals, it will make it a bit loud too.


Nice one for using the telephone effect.


If you can tweak your vocals well, then your attempts at improving will be seen more. Don't get me wrong, while you have the ability in my opinion, the way you "produce" some of your stuff I don hear for here needs a bit of work.

freestyle fortnight, where is the next joint?

@Elrazur
Thanks Man. . . I'l most definitely show dis to the Studio Engineer.
@bros 04ka
FreestyleFortnight is 0n Christmas Break!

da-whizkid:


@bros 04ka
FreestyleFortnight is 0n Christmas Break!

alright man,i will be looking forward to it, at least by boxing day, u know am a chronic wizkid fan.

Am luving Crushes man.most exp ur accent.it kinda sounds different but then again,the beat sorta overshadow d vocalz.Big up man

@Da-Nitwit kid

I'm so dissapointed! what was that!

Da-whiz-sh, it

you've never passed any message across to me since you've been whining like a horse all this while. . . poor brat! there should be total screening of artiste in 2011 . . .

olayokun:

Am luving Crushes man.most exp your accent.it kinda sounds different but then again,the beat sorta overshadow d vocalz.Big up man

Thanks Mahn! And it's funny u liked wat most peeps dnt like about me. . . My accent! Anyways, 0ne man meat is anoda man geisha. Thanks 0nce again!

dyabman:

Da-whiz-sh, it

you've never passed any message across to me since you've been whining like a horse all this while. . . poor brat! there should be total screening of artiste in 2011 . . .

Bros bt we no quarrel b4 na. . . . Truth is i like Criticism, bt ur choice of words(like the bolded 0nes) makes it seem like u are hating. If you don't like it. . . I'd appreciate you tell me what n what u don't like about it, and possibly how i can improve em. . . That's the essence of the thread! Thanks 4 ur understanding mahn, Deuces!

Ok watch your lyrics,don't go about love songs all the time, Wats your favorite football club and let's meet at the football section.

da whizkid

Sorry mahn that I'm jus' doing this - I've been opportuned to listen to Flyer Than The Rest for now and I must say you got it going on . . . that's a good pedestal and you can def'ly improve mahn . . . I'll be back when I settle down to hear the rest.

Bamsyle.:

da whizkid

Sorry mahn that I'm jus' doing this - I've been opportuned to listen to Flyer Than The Rest for now and I must say you got it going on . . . that's a good pedestal and you can def'ly improve mahn . . . I'll be back when I settle down to hear the rest.

Thanks Mahn. . . I'm anticipating ur review mahn. Deuces

Hmm. . . I don download the song tey tey but I still never listen to am

I go try listen to am and post comment before the year run out as xmas gift

semid4lyfe:

Hmm. . . I don download the song tey tey but I still never listen to am

I go try listen to am and post comment before the year run out as xmas gift

No so you dey behave?

semid4lyfe:

Hmm. . . I don download the song tey tey but I still never listen to am

I go try listen to am and post comment before the year run out as xmas gift

I knw say U don download am since, and i knw say u no too gbadun am. Bt u no con tell me why u no gbadun am. . . Nor be so e suppose to be na. . . Merry Xmas!