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Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by koolx213(m): 11:43am On Jun 24, 2007 |
[color=#000099][/color] You smiled and told me you'l never leave You coddled me and i deemed what i'v seen Later you abridged and said you'l always remember The cordiel feelings we shared together And you'l never try shatter Treasury memories we've gathered Cos on a journey u're embarking To find means for our daily living As a young village boy I knew times will be pretty demanding you left i knew a part of me was gone And each night, |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by koolx213(m): 11:59am On Jun 24, 2007 |
[color=#000099][/color] And each night i'l always sing a song To stand in for the moment i've lost I believe you'll always do the same Cos the feelings you showered were so unfeighned i got your letter and i was happy In it you reassured me some promises The ones i seem to be 4getting It rekindles the flame when i keep reading Not long,you ceased sending mails i found you an excuse And concluded you were working for the better, |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by koolx213(m): 12:39pm On Jun 24, 2007 |
So i pulled myself together and convalesce But i was always haunted by the shadows Of sweet promises you'v swallowed And the love we shareed you poked with arrow My relish for you got replaced by revolt I prayed one day i'l get my revenge Soon,i truckled to my loneliness I'ld drink till i become unconscious Of memories you torn to shreds I'ld hooze all night til i'm jiggered i stil wasn't cured so i became sober And each minute i'l cower until, |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by SMC(f): 1:24pm On Jun 24, 2007 |
What the hell is the matter with you? Why are you littering the literature section with your damn poem under different threads, when they can all be brought under one thread. Moreover, they all belong in the poems section. I'm sure Seun will soon move them (at least I hope he does). |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by koolx213(m): 11:36pm On Jun 24, 2007 |
first thanks seun for moving my pages together,im grateful.U sms,smc or whateva u're called.if u'v for gotten,u gat a glass jaw dont let me break it with my words.is dat wat u do;discourage and bring people down,wel u av 2 be down 2bring peps down but sorry ur words are like thrash 2me.know what?dos are my words,@least u knew its a poem.i'm new here,joined earlier 2day,dont really know much about postin so blame me not.i stil av a page left seun |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by SMC(f): 6:25pm On Jun 25, 2007 |
koolx213: ROFLMFAO. Keep stumbling in the dark mate. Maybe one day you'll find your way |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by koolx213(m): 6:14am On Jun 29, 2007 |
smc,its not maybe,its certain i will find my way.moreover i dont think ure good enough to know a beautiful stuff lik mine.kunle |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by SMC(f): 6:28pm On Jun 29, 2007 |
If you say so mate. |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by koolx213(m): 12:22am On Jul 01, 2007 |
smc;are we mates?i doubt it.Dont worry,when i get up there,i'l mention u as one critic while i was rising;-) |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by SMC(f): 2:57pm On Jul 01, 2007 |
Like I said before, If you say so MATE. And just for the record, I am not in some dispute with you over anything. I just expressed my displeasure at you scattering one poem all over the place and if that offended you, too bad. PS I have not criticised your poem nor have I read it for that matter, so your acknowledgment will be unfounded. |
Re: Betrayed? He Found A Refuge,dont Worry You'll Find Solace. by SMC(f): 3:14pm On Jul 01, 2007 |
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