A young lady passed away sometimes ago and this had me thinking hard about my mortality, it was at that point I realized how irrelevant I was and this makes me sad as the days passby. Coming to this life and going without any impact on humanity, probably it's only my mum that will feel it. so sad, life of an introvert with unsuccessful attempt at making music. So my question is am I the only one that thinks of this and again do you have anything humanity can remember you for when you are gone





You can still listen to my music here
https://audiomack.com/dbullofficial/song/dbull-complain

Your beat is okay. You have cool rhymes too. But you need to improve greatly on your lyrics. Avoid repetition as much as possible.

You also need to infuse ranges of melody in your songs. Its too monotonous and makes it sounds boring.

And work on your chorus verses. It should stand out.

Lastly you can be pathing your songs to make it sounds pleasing to the ear.

Raydans:
Your beat is okay. You have cool rhymes too. But you need to improve greatly on your lyrics. Avoid repetition as much as possible.

You also need to infuse ranges of melody in your songs. Its too monotonous and makes it sounds boring.

And work on your chorus verses. It should stand out.

Lastly you can be pathing your songs to make it sounds pleasing to the ear.

I really appreciate this bro thanks alot

Raydans:
Your beat is okay. You have cool rhymes too. But you need to improve greatly on your lyrics. Avoid repetition as much as possible.

You also need to infuse ranges of melody in your songs. Its too monotonous and makes it sounds boring.

And work on your chorus verses. It should stand out.

Lastly you can be pathing your songs to make it sounds pleasing to the ear.

You really sound like you Kno alot about music , are you into music production?