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|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by yvonncute(f): 6:51pm On Sep 14, 2021|
Thanks for the update.
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 4:59am On Sep 15, 2021|
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by mhizv(f): 12:59pm On Sep 15, 2021|
Thanks for the update
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Adeola25(f): 1:27pm On Sep 15, 2021|
Thanks for the update
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 3:03pm On Sep 15, 2021|
Thanks bro keep it coming
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 11:19am On Sep 16, 2021|
John oya ooo we dea wait
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 12:30pm On Sep 16, 2021|
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 12:35pm On Sep 16, 2021|
Limbe Town was generally busy, filled with market women and men, school children scurrying here and there. The situation was almost synonymous to Lagos City.
Luke exchanged his sim port, it seems he already had a registered Cameron sim card.
He made a few calls and asked us to wait for a taxi.
We moved into an empty caravan filled with abandoned wares and waited.
I took my time to observe the small refrigerator. There was no way it could contain a full human cadaver as Willie claimed.
There was something fishy about the refrigerator.
Roy connected his headset to his phone and was blasting music, I decided to engage Luke in a conversation.
"Cameron isn't bad" I shrugged.
Luke nodded, "It's almost Nigeria-like".
" I have never seen a refrigerator this portable" I pointed out.
"It's solar...it's not up to fifteen in Nigeria and it cost half a million" Luke explained.
"What's inside?" I asked hoping to get a truthful reply.
"Organs for the black market..." He whispered to me.
I took some seconds to comprehend his reply, "black..."
"Shh..." He hushed me, we'll discuss about it when we leave this place.
Willie fabricated a cock and bull story about some cadaver shits. I got hurt owing to the fact that Willie lied to me.
Some minutes later, a pencil camry parked before us.
Luke signalled for us to move in.
We settled into the car and the driver took off.
The driver played some French music though I didn't understand the lyrics, I enjoyed the beats generally. I made a mental vow to learn French after this.
After crossing an intersection, we met a check point manned by men of the Cameroon quick response brigade(CQRA).
They converse with the driver in French and hailed us, Luke tipped each of them.
But one of them requested to search the car.
It seems the driver tried to discourage him but he wouldn't bulge.
He politely asked us to step down from the car.
Luke kept on trying to buy time to delay the inevitable using delay tactics but the man wouldn't bulge.
We all step down from the car and the man ordered his men to search the car.
"Wharis zis?" The officer pointed to the refrigerator in the boot.
Luke stepped forward, "it's a solar freezer".
" Wharris inet?"
"Nothing of importance" Luke shrugged, he tried to maintain a calm composure but I could tell deep down that he was scared.
The Officer tried to open it but couldn't. He glared at Luke, "Kam here, open it".
" The truth is, some laboratory items are in it. If I open it and air enters the ice might start melting...it's nothing illegal" Luke tried to explain.
"Hear me clar, I said open it!" The officer half screamed.
It seems the world revolved slowly, as Luke fondled nervously with the pass code panel.
"Officer..." I stepped in, "We have an emergency situation on our hand right now and if the person dies, I'll be sure to direct the family to the officers that delayed us on the road. We are foreigners and we didn't come in illegally. We showed you our pass ticket...we are doctors and we have an emergency surgery to carry out".
The officer studied me for a while and nodded.
He nodded and closed the boot.
" sorry for delays". He signalled his partners to clear the way.
We moved into the car and the driver ignited the engine.
"Mark Frost, you are a genius...you got hidden potentials...the pirate saw the vision and called you killer Frost" Luke hailed me.
I just nodded and wondered if truly I was a killer.
The journey lasted for six hours, luckily we never encountered any checkpoint as we dreaded the thought of it.
Roy was quiet and brooding during the journey.
The driver parked the car in front of a fenced Terrace house and hooted.
The gate was opened and we drove inside the compound.
Dusk was approaching.
A bald man emerged from one of the apartment limping with a staff for support.
"Good evening...your presence here is an answered prayer" The bald man smiled revealing his tobacco stained teeth.
"We've got the organs....complete in good condition" Luke wheeled the refrigerator to his direction. "221699 is the password".
The man smiled, " you guys have never disappointed".
He moved into his apartment and returned shortly with a travelling bag.
"Four million as agreed.." He threw the bag and Roy caught it. "Our clients would be booked for the surgery now that the organs are available".
Luke nodded and we entered into the car.
It seems the bag of money lifted Roy's spirit.
"Driver, know a good hotel?" Roy asked.
"I know..." The driver replied.
"The one filled with hotties...take us there. Tonight will be a blast!" Luke hollered.
The driver stopped at a club with a French inscription brightened by a gold chandelier.
Before reaching the club, the bag of money was locked in a safe house ran by a drug mogul. We couldn't risk carrying a bag containing four million around in a strange city.
The club was lit and in high spirits.
We secured a table and soon we were sipping our way through a bottle of wine and peppered suya.
I could swear that was the best suya I've ever tasted.
Three hot ladies were beckoned by Roy to our table.
One of them sat on Roy's laps and performed a lap dance.
"Oh mehn...dope shit!" Roy screamed, he was definitely wasted.
Another group of ladies came to our table on Roy's order making it six. A pair for each.
Oh Lawd Gawd, all my adult life I've always dreamt of a party.
The ladies were professionals as they made me cum in my trousers. The way they danced seductively maintaining body contact and eye contact was definitely out of this world.
One of them ministered a Mouth Action to Roy and dude's mouth was practically opened in pure bliss and sweet agony.
My libido level spiked up and I couldn't wait to get off pants and savor the pleasure of riding with French thick ladies.
I was practically dragged out of the club house to a guest room.
In the space of seconds, the two ladies were all over me.
The way they handled me almost made me curse my ancestors.
One of them sucked my nipples while the other sucked my phallus.
I shivered in pure ecstasy.
As an Akwaibom man, I decided to take charge.
It took me all my willpower to stop them.
I made one of them lay on the bed while I sucked her nipples skillfully.
My hands roamed her body expertly and brushed roughly against her sensitive region.
As a biologist, I perfectly understood the zones of the female body that was sensitive to touch.
I brought in my level of expertise in a space of minutes, the room was filled with French moans.
The two ladies almost brought down the roof with screams and groans.
I strapped up and slid dramatically into one of them, hitting the spongy vessel with a projectile force.
I didn't rush like a pig, I drilled her with pure grace and precision.
In the space of slow thrust, I implemented a rock fast kinetics.
I was fast approaching my climax but I delayed it using a mental trick.
All in all, I lasted fifteen minutes each on the two ladies.
This time around, the ladies took control.
I just laid on the bed as they took turn to ride me.
My hands never left their nipples.
I released up to seven times but the ladies were not done with me yet.
The pleasure soon turned to tears as I silently begged the ladies to stop.
The ladies too were in deep tears, crying and moaning in deep pleasure.
I cried in deep pains as the room
was practically spinning.
After an hour and thirty six minutes, I passed out.
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Adeola25(f): 1:44pm On Sep 16, 2021|
This Frost guy is sick, so French moan is different from others, and it end in severe pains. He should wake up and continue from where he stopped. Thanks for the update sir....
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 10:18pm On Sep 16, 2021|
Adeola25:Always looking forward to your comment...
Keep the analysis flowing..
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 2:10am On Sep 18, 2021|
The frost guy had some hidden potential....
Thanks Noble keep it coming
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 5:50am On Sep 18, 2021|
Kentuforchrist:Thanks Bro for being a backbone!!!
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 11:59pm On Sep 19, 2021|
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|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Holywizard(m): 7:08am On Sep 20, 2021|
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by lammy197(m): 8:59am On Sep 20, 2021|
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 9:15am On Sep 20, 2021|
John we are waiting
U must complete this story ooo if not we go fight....is not easy but at least try complete am.
Desire own still dea pain me
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 4:51am On Sep 21, 2021|
I woke up to see myself on the floor completely nude with a banging head.
My phallus laid limply on one side, I turned round but couldn't find the two ladies.
It took me all my strength to get up. After a few steps, I fell flat to the ground.
Cameroon hotties almost killed me.
I knew i needed food.
My prayers got answered as Luke knocked and opened my lodge.
He was surprised to find me nude.
"I need food.." I could barely hear my own voice.
He nodded with a smug smile across his face and went out.
I made an attempt to get up and I failed woefully.
That's when I knew my imminent death was lurking.
Luke returned with three cans of energy drink and a pack containing a plate of rice.
He noticed the deep mess of body fluids on the bed.
"Frost, we are checking in to a hotel this evening..I've booked our flights, we leave at dusk tomorrow" Luke said and dropped the pack before me.
I opened the can of the drink and emptied it down my throat.
My energy was revitalised.
I entered the bathroom while a cleaner stepped in to change the sheets.
Twenty eight minutes later, we checked into a bigger hotel.
We sat in the hotel bar cracking jokes and relishing our various experience with the ladies.
"The money for this job is four million, and it will be shared equally.
Frost, you'll take eight hundred thousand...Roy will take same..while I'll take eight-fifty. The rest goes into the purse of the ring" Luke explained.
We nodded, I decided to use this medium to get answers to my unanswered questions.
"Luke, what did we transport?" I asked.
"Human organs.." He replied.
I nodded, "Willie has been talking about the ring...what's this ring. Is it a secret cult?" I asked.
"You're not my apprentice, I'm not in position to answer your questions" Luke replied.
"Damn!" I banged the table hard with my fist almost spilling the drinks.
Luke and Roy stared at me in alarm.
"I've been kept in the dark for too long. I risked my life in that ship. I almost died in that ship...why do I have to wait for Willie to trust me before he tells me. If you refuse to tell me...i'm out!" I half screamed.
Luke examined me critically, "I understand what you're feeling. Believe me, the time for you to know the truth is upon us and you'll know it before your initiation". Luke rapped.
" what initiation?" I asked, feeling apprehensive.
"Frost, let's return to Nigeria first. I'll retire to my room to rest, I'll book our flights before it's evening".
Luke got up and staggered limply. It seemed he was a bit drunk.
Roy and I still stayed, drinking from our bottle of scotch.
I woke up on a Sunday morning with a banging headache.
I raised my head and checked the wall clock, it read some minutes past nine.
I muttered some words of prayers.
My device beeped and I checked the text.
My zenith bank account has been credited with eight hundred and ninety thousand.
My face lit up in smiles.
At least, the money provided succour, judging from what I passed through on the voyage to Cameroon.
I strolled towards the window and examined the streets.
Like a typical Sunday, the road was busy with people rushing here and there.
I felt a strong urge in my spirit to attend service.
I rushed into the bathroom and had a brief shower.
I just had a spare shirt and I quickly slipped into it.
I wore a sandals, l stepped out of the hotel room.
Luke and Roy's room were opposite mine.
I moved towards Luke's room and knocked.
After some seconds, a lady dressed in skimpy clothes opened the door.
She had an angry and frustrated look on her face. Maybe I interrupted her moment of passion.
" hi" She greeted with a straight face.
"Hi.." I reiterated.
"Baby, who is that? If it's room service, tell them to wait" Luke screamed from inside.
"Sorry for the interruption. I need to talk to the man inside" I pointed.
She examined me for a while and pushed the door open. I stepped in.
Luke was laying on the bed with his huge phallus dangling and pointing upwards.
When he saw me, he made an attempt to cover his dick and muttered some curses under his breath.
"I was in the middle of something" He grunted.
"Morning Luke..Sorry for the interruption. I saw the alert and it was more than what you proposed to share".
" Willie called at dawn. He asked me to send that amount for you...going somewhere?" He asked.
"Yea...to church!" I shrugged.
I could tell he tried to stifle his laughter, "You want to meet a priest to confess?"
"I'll be back before noon...continue your session" I left the room.
I met Roy with two ladies in the hotel bar.
Do these people never get tired??
Twenty-four minutes, I arrived a church with the name 'Rod Of Moses Ministry'.
I moved into the church and joined the session.
I felt refreshed as I listened to the choir ministration.
I danced with passion, I had every reason to thank God for his protection during the voyage.
After everything, a young man on robe mounted the pulpit and ministered.
Truth is, I wasn't interested in the exhortation because his accent was to deep. I found it hard to connect with some words.
I had nursed thoughts to leave when I heard my name.
"Whorris Mark Frost...kam aout hair to tde altar" The pastor called.
I literally froze on my seat.
"Mark Frost...the holy spirit has ministered. Kam aout".
I summon the courage and moved towards the altar while the congregation clapped.
The pastor decided to run a trust check on me.
"Brother Mark" He called.
I nodded in acknowledgement.
"Have we met?"
I nodded in negative.
"Usher, give him the Michael --okon" The pastor ordered.
A female usher rushed towards us and pointed the microphone to me.
"You kam from Akwibom in Negeria"
"Yes pastor..." I was tempted to correct his pronunciation of Akwaibom and Nigeria.
"I see you in a crew of men. I see you baffing in blad. Blad is being shredded.
If you value ya life and your family, leave that group".
I stared deeply at the pastor.
"Whorris William?" He asked.
"That should be Willie" I thought.
"He is a friend.." I replied.
"Separate from the group. To ya seat" The pastor ordered and the congregation clapped for the prophetic ministration.
Truth is, I wasn't a fan of prophecies. But what the pastor said echoed deeply in my subconscious.
Since I met Willie, my life has been punctuated by one trouble or the other.
I got troubled deep down and I had to leave.
The pastor words kept screaming in my head, "Separate...separate..."
I turned my head furiously to block the thoughts.
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Seunfunmi18(m): 9:55am On Sep 21, 2021|
This is getting more interesting.
God bless you bossman
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 11:10am On Sep 21, 2021|
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 11:14am On Sep 21, 2021|
23rd of this month is my birthday..
And as a birthday present to my fans, updates will drop everyday....
So, you guys should think of yours to me..
Thursday 23 is the date..
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Adeola25(f): 3:51pm On Sep 21, 2021|
Hmmm,Mark had better yield to the pastor's advice. Happy birthday in advance John. Post your account details.
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by akindele91(m): 7:52pm On Sep 21, 2021|
Adeola25:let me post mine too Ma... This administration is too hard on all of us... may we find mercy in God sight... Amen
...back to the story @ Noblejohn thanks so much for the update and happy birthday
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Adeolaeniola(m): 9:19pm On Sep 21, 2021|
Happy birthday in advance
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Glossystar(m): 7:49am On Sep 22, 2021|
Wow! Very interesting stories.
Happy birthday in advance, Noble.�
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 5:20pm On Sep 22, 2021|
All is in order
The trip from Cameroon to Nigeria was successful.
Although, it was punctuated by occasional hitches.
We took off at dusk from the Central capital airport at Yaounde and landed in Obafemi Owolowo Airport.
We had to lodge in the airport guest house till morning.
No place was sweet like home.
I stretched and yawned tiredly on the eighteen spring mattress.
I got up and mouthed some words of prayer.
Twenty minutes later, we were at the travelling lounge for our screening.
Eighteen minutes later, we were in the plane heading to Akwaibom state.
The plane landed smoothly and raced through the runway.
Twelve minutes later, we were out of the plane into a waiting taxi.
"Whoah!!! What a journey" Luke breathed.
"Ladies, my bones massage" Roy said.
I and Luke headed for Eket while Roy alighted at Uyo.
We said our goodbyes and continued our journey.
Luke alighted at the park, we said our goodbye and I ordered the cab man to take me to my home town 'Onna'.
It's been a while since I visited my old man and woman.
Twenty minutes into the journey, I stopped at a supermarket and I bought provisions and foodstuffs for over a hundred thousand.
A delivery van had to continue with me on the journey to dispatch my goods.
The cabman maintained the pathway as directed by me until we arrived a bungalow.
I sighted my father on the balcony, sitting on a bench made of bamboo.
As usual, he looked angry and trouble.
"How much is your bill?" I asked the cabman.
"Eight thousand!" He replied.
I wonder how the bill skyrocketed to such outrageous amount.
"I'll give you fifteen thousand, you'll need to wait here" I told him and alighted from the car.
My father's face gave room for smiles on sighting me.
I walked majestically, with measured strides.
I couldn't help the bossy feeling.
"Mummy...our son is back oo" My Dad called out to my mother.
"Good day Dad" I greeted him.
"Mark, you are a useless boy!" He reiterated.
"When was the last time you called your mother?"
I knew I was in for a long bashing.
My mother and sisters rushed from the backyard and gave me a warm hug.
Mother took her time to examine me.
I felt like a specimen under a microscope.
"Mark my son, you have grown so lean.." Mum noted.
"Why won't he be lean? When he's sleeping with all the girls in his area!" My dad slammed.
"Ah..my son isn't like that oo" Mother defended.
"So, if he's not like that, how is he like?" Dad held his waist.
I left them to continue with their endless banter, I got some boys in the neighbourhood to offload the groceries from the delivery truck.
"Mark, where did you steal all this from?"
That was my father again.
"I bought them sir for you and mummy.." I replied.
"So, I am now sir right? I am no more Daddy again right?"
What was really wrong with my Dad?
"Mark, do you want to open a supermarket?" My Mum asked with mouth open in awe.
I just chuckled like a boss..I was really enjoying the moment.
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 5:58pm On Sep 22, 2021|
Twenty eight minutes later, I was served a mouth watering local delicacy.
After the dish, I washed it down with a jug of fresh tapped palm wine.
"My son, I want to appreciate your efforts for finding time to visit us.." My Dad said, he was on his third jug of palm wine.
"It's okay Dad...it's my responsibility!"
"What is your responsibility?" He threw what seemed like a senseless question to me.
"To visit you people na" I replied.
He deadpanned, "Because you visited us today doesn't make it your responsibility".
" So, what is my responsibility then?" I asked.
"Hmmm.." He drained another jug of palm wine.
"You are my only child that have made me smile in days...look at what you brought. At least I wouldn't worry about food for the next six month. Your Elder Sister...Flora who claims she is married have never visited here with a cup of garri. Not as if I'm interested in it but at least...I told that girl not to marry that antelope headed.."
"Dad it's okay!" I chided. My Dad was always fond of changing sides immediately the situation favours or disfavours him.
I'm pretty sure if my sister should show up tomorrow with a plate of chicken, my dad will say his other children are good for nothing because they couldn't show up with same.
"Mark, do you know that your sister...Flora is a punching bag?" Dad asked.
"How?" I asked confused.
"You are very, very stupid for asking me how?"
"You mean if I die today, that means you won't be able to run this family.
See, it's not all about wearing chain and barbing okpoto haircut. It's simple sense of family running."
Dad was pissing me off, "last time I called her, she told me that everything is fine".
" And you believed, you see..on the scale of one to ninety, your stupidity is eighty six. Last time your sister visited, her mouth was like 1996 Peugeot fender".
"Dad, calm down...what do you mean?"
"What you mean is what I mean? That husband of your sister has been beating your sister. He has been using your sister's face to learn punching".
" Dad you mean your son in-law has been beat..."
"If you were not the son I like, I would have just forget the back of my hand on your teeth. Who are you calling my son-in-law? The only son in law I have is Udoka's male dog that impregnated my female dog."
My Father was truly loosing it.
"But Dad, have you tried to resolve the problem?"
"Why should I, am I a lawyer. That's why I sent you to school, but instead for you to go to school, you failed literature eight times in WAEC".
" Jesus! I wasn't an art student".
"What were you, commercial? By the way...the boy has been saying that my daughter isn't good on bed".
My mouth hung open.
" I have asked your mother and her daughters what it means but they don't have an idea. What does it mean to be bad on the bed?" He asked.
I wanted to feign ignorance but I decided to come out clean, "it means she isn't sexually active".
My Dad jumped up and spoke in tongues.
"Sexually active ko....sexually strong ni...you mean he wants my daughter to be a porn star. The daughter I trained, he wants my daughter to be throwing football stunt and he will be kapashing her every corner. He wants to spoil my daughter.."
Dad took it really personal.
"Koko.." My mum called from the backyard, "Allow my son to rest".
" Allow your son to rest? No one will rest until this battle is over...Lemme go and change up...we are going to that house now!".
I wonder what I've gotten myself into.
My cabman took us to my sister's residence at ikotabasi.
All through the ride, my Dad kept on shouting like a mentally deranged man.
When we arrived, he jumped out of the car and headed straight to the apartment.
Ready for a fight.
Without knocking, he barged in.
"Father inlaw.." My Sister's hubby called out.
He was eating on the dinner table.
"Father inlaw..." He called.
"It is your biological father that is your father in law! Elephant!!" Dad barked.
Adeola25 and thousands of fans out there,
Put smiles on the birthday boy's face...
Mfon John David..
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|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by nastynic(m): 11:37pm On Sep 22, 2021|
Father in-law no get joy at all
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 1:54am On Sep 23, 2021|
Happy Birthday to me..
Fans, put some smiles on your boy's face..
If you've been following my works here, show some appreciation!!!
Mfon John David..
Birthday updates will drop if the ginger is strong..
Once again, thanks for your support, comments and critics.
You all made me your favourite here!!!
Happy Birthday to me!!!
God's grace made me!!!
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 1:55am On Sep 23, 2021|
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by cassbeat(m): 7:42am On Sep 23, 2021|
Happy birthday eyeneka....
More life, more blessings...[color=#000099][/color]
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Nuel45(m): 10:27am On Sep 23, 2021|
Happy birthday bruh
Wish you long life and prosperity
|Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Adeola25(f): 10:52am On Sep 23, 2021|
Frost's Father is a funny man, calling his son in-law an elephant. Thanks for the update and happy a prosperous birthday llnp. Igba odun, odun kan ni oo.
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