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Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by luuvbuuh(f): 3:43pm On Aug 31, 2007
Hey pips! i remeber while growing up that i loved to write short  poems and short stories this was one of my first poems:
No one else  looks or acts like u do
No one talks like u
No one else smiles and walks like u do
No one feels for for you
No one else who tries can be
'cos none but you can be you!


, Duhh! rite? well i was really proud of it back then. Share yours with us, please no matter how silly it seems, but short poems please!
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 10:03am On Nov 22, 2008
now girl there are more poems forum on nairaland and not even Amateur type
they are really lovely threads portraying lovly poems
so we will see if your attracts them cool





why am i even telling you this
it is more than a year now
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by protocol(m): 4:05pm On Nov 28, 2008
I TITLED MINE MATRICULATION, IT GOES THUS


MATRICULATION! MATRICULATION!!
A GREAT INITIATION.
AS A DUCK LONGS FOR A FLOWING STREEM
SO CRAVE MY SOUL FOR THEE.
MY SOUL THIRST FOR THEE
FOR MANY YEARS NOW MY PRAYER HAS BEEN
WHEN SHALL I COME TO BEHOLD THY FACE
I REMEMBER,YES I REMENBER
FRIENDS ALSO SAID TO ME
WHEN SHALL YOU BE INITIATED
WEAC AND JAMB WHER NOT FRIENDLY AT ALL
ALL THIS I REMEMBER
AS I POUR OUT MY SPIRIT, MY GREAT SOUL,
AND LEAD THEM IN PROCESSION
INTO THE HALL OF MATRICULATION.
WITH GREAT SHOUTS AND SONGS OF THANKSGIVING
I WILL WALK TO THE ALTER,
SAYING TO MY PEOPLE
REJOICE AND SING THE SONGS OF ZION
FOR A JAMBITE U ARE NO MORE.
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 4:25pm On Nov 28, 2008
thats lovely sha smiley
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by randombee: 12:36pm On Dec 12, 2008
Here is mine:

You were born a princess
and you are meant to lead
a life worthy of a goddess
who only came into this world
as an adventuress.
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 1:45pm On Dec 12, 2008
short nd nice
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 2:16pm On Dec 12, 2008
this is mine,
i hope its short as can be

judging by the way she walks
you'd think she's the mistress of the gods
or a force no one can stop
the indispensable puzzle to the odds

you wouldnt know she's lost a son
and wanders alone come rain or come sun
and her people have left her to run
mad, hopeless, deviod of all fun,

she bears her brunt so perfectly well
you wouldnt know her lot
nothing is there for you to tell
since facial smile conceals her hurt.

but get a little closer
not stand afar and judge
you'd sense a crashing world close by
whoo needs everyone support embarassed
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by protocol(m): 2:36pm On Dec 12, 2008
heyaaaa! from the plot of ur poem, she really needs greatest surport. can i give mine? nice poem jari
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 2:48pm On Dec 12, 2008
its the little thing that matters, show some love this christmas wink
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by Tgirl4real(f): 3:50pm On Dec 12, 2008
Nice one princesa wink

What happened to ur rants naa undecided undecided
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 4:09pm On Dec 13, 2008
i just dint have who or what to rant about
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by Cayon(f): 11:43pm On Dec 13, 2008
i'm walking to the rhythm of my own slow song.
dancing to the beat and feeling so strong.
like hearing it for the first time, but that's all wrong,
cause my melody has been playing all along.
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by protocol(m): 8:03am On Dec 15, 2008
dats j.p clearks pattern of writing grin
i like the ryme
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 4:04pm On Dec 15, 2008
Cayon:

i'm walking to the rhythm of my own slow song.
dancing to the beat and feeling so strong.
like am hearing it for the first time, but that's all wrong,
cause my melody has been playing all along.
did you forget to add that,
cos if you did, it woulda made much sense to me undecided


overall, it's nice sha wink
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by damjop: 4:33pm On Dec 15, 2008
Just for the asking, would the peoms be copyright protected? I need to know before i post my poems. Thanks.
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 4:43pm On Dec 15, 2008
are you afraid someone might steal your amateur poems undecided
i don't think anyone has that intention
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by damjop: 4:49pm On Dec 15, 2008
Amateur as it may seem, it's my MASTERPIECE. wink
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 5:02pm On Dec 15, 2008
thats what YOU think,
let others peruse it and tell you what they think, if it gets high commendation then its a masterpiece so stop being the way you are and post some good/bad poems undecided wink
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by Cayon(f): 6:52pm On Dec 15, 2008
princesa:

did you forget to add that, (am)
because if you did, it woulda made much sense to me undecided
overall, it's nice sha wink
its obvious that I am talking about myself if you read the first sentence (i'm)
By putting (am) sounds redundant to me
But then again, my French is better than my English so maybe you are correct.

Peace
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 12:34pm On Dec 16, 2008
peace cool
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by damjop: 2:05pm On Dec 16, 2008
thats what YOU think,
let others peruse it and tell you what they think, if it gets high commendation then its a masterpiece so stop being the way you are and post some good/bad poems



i think i could do a poepm on you, my princess (are u one?)
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 2:50pm On Dec 16, 2008
my username say am a princess cool and i am
just post the poem am waiting cool

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