naijasexy:


Wow. Good job Roland!
We should get poems from you on NL more often. Your poem got me smiling.
I felt like you were addressing me Just kidding oooh.! 
(Applauds Roland)

Thank you very much, am happy it made u happy

Kgdavid:

O.P brilliant piece mate, today i lay on my bed with exactly the same thoughts

Once in a while we are all lost in thoughts about the inevitable future.

[s]you wont thank me too ehn , i posted na[/s]

just messing with you sha

mukina2:

[s]you wont thank me too ehn , i posted na[/s]

just messing with you sha

How on earth did i miss ur post, am very sorry, a big big thank u to u

nice poem =)
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this is beutiful ive loved poetry ever since high school i had a crush on my drama teacher, he was a poet

you should share more of these!

daria70:

you should share more of these!

I promise to do more, i got a huge collection of poem and personal articles, thanks for the compliment.

Op abeg wake up.

it is well:

Op abeg wake up.

You need some sleep

This is niceee . . . i like that it recognizes that she may not be perfect. Im sure we all dream about that special sumbodi hopefully its not some1 that will come to break our hearts at a later time. wishing lalaland could be reality . . . but then again i think our world may be a lil boring that way . . . mehh

Great piece.

Hey guys my own no sweet o, bt if u ar a maths lover mayb u wil enjoy it; here it comes



admirable number pi:three point one four one.All the following digits are also initial,five nine two because it never ends.It can't be comprehended six five three five at a glance.eight nine by calculation, seven nine or imagination,not even three two three eight by wit, that is, by comparisonfour six to anything elsetwo six four three in the world.The longest snake on earth calls it quits at about forty feet.

@roland, This is nice

To every1 out there searching for love, do not burden your mind with worry and sorrow.

Listen to the cries of the warning sparrow    A
A troubled mind is like a wheel-barrow      A
All it carries is nothing but sorrow
It weighs you down when you seek to travel solo    A
Like quick-sand, the more you panic the more it swallows    A

A troubled mind has no marrow       A
All the worries have made it hollow      A
Painful mysteries line up its tomorrow      A
Sharp pains from its most poisoned arrow     A
Like the fear of a woman who walks the gallows     A

A troubled mind is like a dragon’s kiss    B
So much fire waiting to release        B
With one breath it can all go amiss      B
Not a chance to ever find peace        B
Tread softly or damage the Golden Fleece      B  
 
For when life brings you sorrow     A
The waters ahead look dirty and shallow      A
And the road looks crooked and narrow      A
Alas there’s no need to wallow       A
For Dawn approaches with a charming fellow    A
To bring good news of good times that follow      A
To rescue you like Moses from a Pharaoh      A

I pray to God that you all may never tire      C
Like the piercing notes of his church’s choir      C
he will bless and take you higher      C
Faith and trust is all He requires       C
Even if it goes down to the wire       C

Cool, the end rhyme for each stanza is cool and lovely. keep it up!


Gbammmm over and out

@ROLAND 17: awesome poetry.

@all
I feel so honored and happy to read genuine commendations and critics from everyone.

@ Roland, lovely piece btw. forgot to compliment u earlier

thanks every1, that was an abridged version of a piece i wrote for my girl when she was going thru rough times. i modified it

nice,
great

nice

Nice.

nice write and you took good advantage of poetic tools like similes, metaphor, and imagery in particular but rhyme scheme was misplaced. Good one all the same.