@morzook Please keep it up and remember that some of us are waiting.

Nice piece
you said its a novel,what's the title and authors's name,i'll love to read it.

Based on ur summary above, thats some d.o.p.e GANGSTER Poo!!! omo write dey go!

Skipping all d comments,accolades Ñ blah blahs, I got to say U can do better. As ur Number 1 fan Ñ critic, I rly u sorta flatlined there. The puppeteer was better

@Writer this is one of the best beginnings of a story I hav read on NL. Also good writing skills n the story flows well. Thumbs up

alleviate2002us:

i wish u culd substantiate on the above since u were tutored by Soyinka......how can u say such nasty words wit out pointin out specifics wit suggested corrections!

All dez Nland I.T.K self, wen una go sabi somtin.....u even contradicted ur self sayin hez a good writer...SMH

@alleviate2002us I culdnt hv said it beta myself.

O.D.B.:
Dull, uninteresting and out right depressing.

You introduced your story fluently but it flat-linned almost immediately.

You story lacks content and substance. You know how to write but you have no creativity.

@O.D.B you obvious sound like you probably hv worked on 1 of dose f**ked up nollywood movies n u r lettin it get 2 ur head. You also sound like u don't knw notin abt writing. So if you don't hv ny constructive criticism 2 make shut d f**k up pls. I repeat shut d f**k up. Tank u

@Op pls continue

morzook: i will post more chapters but i can't post the story to the end cos it's a full length novel ....

crazy twist. Im not sure you should be posting the whole synopsis

Intresting piece.
Can't wait for the concluding part.

Nice one Morzook, but there is a Sheldon wit a similar storyline. It is titled 'Tell me your dreams'. I believe ur Novel is based on Multi Personality Disorders.

I tink u r very good, but u stil didn't touch lola.luv

O.D.B.:
Dull, uninteresting and out right depressing.

You introduced your story fluently but it flat-linned almost immediately.

You story lacks content and substance. You know how to write but you have no creativity.

O.D.B.:


You introduced your story fluently but it flat-linned almost immediately.

You story lacks content and substance. You know how to write but you have no creativity.

Now, O.D.B....Read his synopsis and eat your words..

Morzook...

Love this!...It starts by you giving us a sneak peak, and most would think they can predict the end like some nollywood crap. Well, I am sure loving even the sedate pace at which this part was narrated.
It treats multiple personality disorder just like 'Tell me your dreams', but it's unique because it is set in our very own place, and the characters are just like people we've known(well not the serial-killing part)....

You published yet?...I had like to read the full story...Well done...$ß.

Stil nufing?