Debbylicious:
Wow Silver
you're doing well

Thanks

What a great story.
Well done Silver

Dead was way too good for Samuel

silver have murder us with this wonderful piece

Samuel didn't suffer at all o, pls keep Susan safe o, I am scared already.

Thanks for the update

I expected Samuel to be jailed, beaten and ill-treated until he have no other choice but commit suicide

Why did Samuel have to die so easily, after the kind of torture he subjects his victims to before killing them

Silver, i thought you'll make him suffer so much that death would be his last hope/option

very beautiful story, can't wait for the final episode. But pls keep anita and susan safe o, they've suffered enough

Thanks Silver, God bless you

Thanks for the update. The confession of Samuel will also help to vindicate Susan.

Thanks for the update

Chai i saw this story last year, but i was thinking maybe its just a complaint now i gotta start from page 1 don't know how i missed it.

silver u don spoil show abeg
why samuel go die jus lyk dat
na slow nd painful death u suppose give an
I dey vex fr u lyk dis

So Samuel just die easy like that.

Abeg nothing should happen to Susan o, she has suffered too much.

Best story ever..can't wait for the finale

Thanks for the update

Mr Silver, why are u starving us with the finale

Oga silver, I don't know why I'm just reading this story now since last year that you started it.
What an interesting story! Kudos to you and God bless your hand work.
Thank you.

PLAGIARIZED
STORY FINALE







Taking a shower after her workouts is one of the pleasures of her day, the hot water is like meditation of sorts combined with a boost for her senses...... , Soaking in that heated water, feeling it hug every inch of her skin so gently, breathing in the aroma of the bubble bath... it was her heaven... her mini-vacation... a place to breathe deeply and let her inner peace return.......

She stepped out of the shower, grab a towel and dried her body before she walked into the room..., she glance over to her ringing phone as she apply cream to her body.., dropping the lotion, she streched her hand towards her phone and pick it up, she sigh when she saw the caller.., it was George., she smiled remembering she just got off the phone with him just 30mins ago..., curious on why he's calling again.., she answered the call...

"Missing me already..."She said over the phone as she pick up the lotion again...

"You're not going to be believe this.."George said from the other end..

Theresa dropped the lotion..., curious, she stood up from the bed...
"What's going on..?"Theresa asked curiously..

"An order just came in.."George stated from the other end.."They're extraditing Amilo to the capital..."

"What..!"Theresa exclaimed..."They can't do that.."

"Well somehow he made a deal with the government...., he demanded his sister to be released...."

"In return for what..?"Theresa asked..

"He's going to tell the government the names and locations of every drug dealer down to the kingpin....."

"The government couldn't have just agreed to his demands.., he's a criminal for fùvk sake.., he's definitely not in the position to make any damn demands..."

There was silence before George's voice came again..."Well we suspect something is going on...., the government are trying to cover something.., that's why they agreed so quickly to Amilo's demand..., and the fact that they aren't making it public is even more suspecting..."

Theresa sigh, she didn't do everything she did just for the government to take Amilo.., she wanted to see him rotting in jail for the rest of his miserable life..."When is the extradition..?"

There was silence before George voice came again...."Right now.."

"What, right now..."She heaved a deep breathe..."I'm on my way.."..







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"Five minutes.."The officer stated as he open the door for Susan....

Susan manage a deep breathe, earlier when she was told she was going see her brother..., she was happy, ..but now that she's here, knowing fully well the only thing that separates her and her brother is just a door...., but the thought of her brother going to jail made anxiety run her imagination motor, the fear centre of her brain getting more interconnected, more adrenaline and cortisol flood her to the very brim.....

She didn't bother looking at the officer twice before she entered the room.., she shudder when the door slam noisily behind her....., she glance back but only for a second, when she turn her gaze forward.., she saw her brother on the other side of the only table in the room, his hands were handcuffed as he place them on the table.., a tear force it's way down Susan's eyes.., although she's glad her brother didn't fall by Samuel's hands but the thought of not seeing her brother for a long time saddens her...

Breathe renting, she hurried over to him and sat across him...., she saw a little bruise below his eyes and it made her wonder who did it to him.., Samuel or the police.....

"Are you okay...?"Amilo ask, his voice rumbling low than she anticipated...

For seconds, Susan didn't say a word, she just sat down lost in the thoughts of what is to come...., what will become of her and her brother......

"Are you okay..?"She asked instead as she hold his hands...

"Lorenzo..."Amilo mutter.

"He's fine..."Susan cut in....."I asked him to leave..."

When Amilo didn't say a word in reply, Susan knew he wasn't happy with the decision she made, if only he could understand it was the right call at that moment.......

"Look..."Amilo said taking her hands into his..."They're letting you go okay..."

"What about you..?"Susan asked

"I have things to finish..."

"Are you going to jail..?"She asked anxiously

Amilo scoffs...."Maybe..., that doesn't matter now, what matters is you're safe.."

"I need you with me.."Susan said crisply as another drop of tear fell from her eyes..

"I'll always be with you.., I may not be there with you but I'll be watching from a distance..., I need you to be strong Peppa...., no matter what the world throws at you, show it you're ten times better than bullshit..."

Susan sniffle and more tears rolled down her cheek, some escaping into her mouth...

"Don't cry.."Amilo stated tightening his grip on her......"No matter what happened to me, always know I love you okay..."

Susan's breathe fell and rose shallowly and just when she was about to talk, the door open choking her words right in her mouth....

"I hate to break this session.."The officer said...."But it's time Amilo..., they're here to take you.."

"It's time for what...?"Susan ask anxiously..."Where are they taking you..?"

"Just give me a minute..."Amilo said to the officer...

"No minute.."The officer retorts and quickly pave way for two special agents officers...

"Stay out of trouble...."Amilo said to Susan before they dragged him from the chair and drag him outside....

Susan tried to run after him but the officer stopped her..

"Go home girl..."The officer said to her.."Your brother is done for..."









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Theresa zipped up her jacket and carried her helmet in her hand before she turn around to follow Agent Ron and Tex as they haul Amilo into the back of the transport van...

"If anything happens to my sister, I'll kill all of you..."Amilo threatened..

"You won't do shìt.."Agent Ron retorts before he slammed the door on Amilo's face...

"Are you ready for this..?"George asked Theresa...

"Well let's pray there are no hurdles on the way..."Theresa replied..

George chuckle before they proceeded to enter the police vehicle in front of the Van...., it didn't take long before the cars tyres drove out of the establishment into the road with a convoy echoing sirens behind them.....

"I wonder how we missed his men..."Theresa said as the driver of their car took the tyres into the country lone road..

"You mean Lorenzo and the rest of them...?"George ask

"Yes.."Theresa said with a nod..

"We'll find them..."George said..."Let's focus on getting Amilo first..."

Theresa sigh, the memories of her fiance came flooding her head..., reminding her of the pain she had once suffered....

"What's going on..?"George ask as the driver kick on the brakes...."Why are there barricades on the road...?"

Theresa looked around her, there was no one in sight yet the road was blocked, something isn't right....., she watched as their driver and few other agents who were driving behind them came down from the car and walk towards the barricades...

"You think something is fishy....?"George ask as the other agents began to observe the area...

In reply, Theresa pull out the pistol she had carried along, nodded at George and came down from the car....

"And who's the stupid idiot that blocked the road.."Agent Tex stated angrily....

Theresa watched as two agents walked over to the barricade to remove them from the road..., she looked at her sides, beside the thick bushes that stood on each side of the road, she saw nothing..., she was almost at the verge of agreeing it was dumb skull that could have block the road but then she saw something been thrown from the bush.., she watch till it landed a few pace from where they were standing....., her eyes enlarged with shock as another of the agents screamed......

"GRENADE..."

The agents ran as far as their legs could carry them before the grenade exploded shattering to pieces everything in it's part...., smoke engulfed the air, it's toxic smell sneak into everyone's nose...

"Are you okay.. "George ask Theresa as they tried to get up..

Theresa cough and just when she tried to get up, she heard gunshot, there she realise they've been attacked.

"It's an ambushed..."She heard one of the special agent screamed..., Theresa manage to raise her head, there she saw her people falling to bullets from masked face men with heavy boots...

Breathing heavily, Amilo began to kick on the door of the truck....

"Get me out of here..."Amilo screamed as he kick on the door.....

After much struggle, he heard the door creaked, then it opened....

"Hello Amilo..."Jadan said to him

Rage built inside Amilo but the urge to reason with them came beating on him..

"I have a message from Carlos.."Jadan said and face Amilo with the gun...

"Tell Carlos I........

Jadan didn't let him finish the words before he pulled the trigger.., the bullet flew out the chamber and went straight for Amilo's head.., blood spill out in great force from the back of Amilo head before Amilo body dropped dead....

Satisfied, Jadan turn to walk away and that was when a bullet hit one of his men.., he spun round only to see Theresa, he wanted to shoot back but other special agents began to reach for their guns.., he shot one round not minding if his bullet hit anything or not..., the special agents shoot back..., but Jadan wasted no time before him and his surviving crew escaped into the bush....

"Shìt..."Agent Ron shouted noticing Amilo has been shot dead....."They killed him.., they fùcking killed him.."

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"How did this happen..?"Mr Carter, CEO of the mako company hollered as he slammed his hands on the table furiously..

The board members look at each other, each wondering what to say except Mr Smith.....

"None of us knew he stole that story..."Mr Smith said..

"Stole..!"Mr Carter reiterates....."Didn't you see the news..., that good for nothing boy practically made that girl mad and killed her family..., people are beginning to file complaints towards this company.., this is a stain on everything we stand for..."

"I'll handle this publicity boss.."Mr Smith said..

"Handle..!"Mr Jeremy, another of the board member chimes in..."We've heard things Smith.., people say you encouraged that boy on every decision he took.., some even say you recommended the doctor that made Anita mad.."

"I'll not condole to such nonsense.."Mr Smith reiterates...

"Well we've seen you and that dead boy on many occasions .."Mr Jeremy said..

"Do you have proofs of your accusation...?"Mr Smith queried....

When Mr Jeremy reclined on the chair and kept mute, Mr Smith continued...."Then shut up.."

"You're fired Smith..."Mr Carter stated..

"What..!"Mr Smith mutter, shock rovering around him...

"All this is your fault.., I told you to investigate if his story was plagiarised or not.., you said everything was okay...., you have brought shame and disgrace to this company..., so you're fired.."

"You cannot fire me like that...., not after everything I've done for this company..."

"Security.."Mr Carter groaned..

It didn't take long before securities came answering the call..

"Escort Smith out.."Mr Carter said..."His services are no longer needed here and make sure he doesn't take home company property..."

Rage built like wildfire inside Mr Smith..., before the securities could hold him, he dropped the files he was holding and walked out of the boardroom with the securities following his every move....

"We need to compensate Anita for everything she went through..."Mr Carter said.."I hate to say this, but I think we had a role to play in her suffering...., and this is why I've decided to reward her triple of what we gave Samuel...."

"Sir..., that's almost a hundred million...."One of the board members said.

"It's nothing compare to what she's Been through.., atleast this way people will know we aren't partial and there's still some good in us..."







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There was tension in the air, there was no sound in the house, yet everyone is moving, moving and not talking...., The air is so brittle it could snap, and if it doesn't, Theresa might. No one was speaking yet, what is there to say? Platitudes won't cut it right now, just a week ago they had lost Amilo to a gun fight, and now they have no connect to Carlos.., Carlos must be somewhere celebrating his victory....

After much stares and silence, Major Lafera decided to break the silence....."The Government is dissolving the team..."

"What...?"Agent Tex shouted first..

Theresa wasn't all surprise.., three days ago she had suspected something like this was going to happen.., they filed for Amilo to be extradited.., he got killed and now......

"They blame us for Amilo's dead...."Major Lafera cut into Theresa's thought..

"Typical..."Agent Ron chimes in crisply..

"Since this is our last meeting..., I'm here to say to everyone I'm grateful for the work we've done so far...., for years we've stick together...., fought together and even if we're been dispersed back to our various units..., i can boldy say, it's been a whole bumby jumpy pleasure working with all of you..."

"So they're just going to dissolve our team.., just like that..."George chimes in..

Major Lafera shrugged...."It's a decision from above.., we ought to respect it..."

"And Carlos.."Theresa interjects..."He's just going to walk free like that...., he's a notorious drug lord for Christ's sake.."

Major Lafera sigh and took step from where he's standing...."So far nothing has been said about Carlos.."

"So he's walking free..?"Theresa ask shapily.....

When Major Lafera didn't reply, Theresa realise it was going to be a dead case....yet again another murderer has been let off the rails......








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"This is bullshit..."George groaned as he open the car door to sit on the driver's seat..

"That bastard killed my fiance..."Theresa said with a cringe at George...."And now he's walking free.."

George sigh, though it's been long her fiance died, so many times he has tried to get that thought off her head but nothing he does seems to go through.., he likes her and he hates it when she's sad....

"What do you want to do...?"George ask

Theresa look at him then she turn away without a word to him, what would she do..., the government have decided to abandon the case.., another lost case in their list.., once again she brood over that painful moment, the smile on Carlos face when he shot a bullet to her fiance head.., he probably left her alive so she could suffer, so she relief the moment of her fiance dead over and over again......, perhaps if her fiance hasn't agreed to go undercover to apprehend Carlos.., he would still be alive, he worked for the stupid Government and when it was time to come in for him, they abandoned him and now they've abandoned her..., fùck the government, it's up to her now to do this herself...she'll chase Carlos to the end of the world.....








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Life isn't fair, Anita know that now.., even if the company rewarded her for everything she lost.., even if she's reunited with her friends, Susan and Henry.., she still felt the puzzle of her life can never be complete without her family.., indeed, Samuel destroyed her.., she was an innocent girl who wished for nothing but happiness for herself and everyone around her.., she didn't even get to decide the best part of her life before the devil snatched it away..., her brother's body was never found and she wonder if he was dead or not.....

Once again she wipe off the tear from her eyes, it's been a year since Samuel's death and it still feels as if it was only yesterday, she could feel the terrors of his fingers moving on her skin.., if only she could turn back time, if only she had not made that video.., if only she had not found nairaland...would things be different....?..

She wipe the tears off her eyes and look up to face Susan as she came out from the changing room...

"Check this out girl...."Susan said spuning around to show her the stylish wedding gown...

"It's lovely.."Anita said moving closer to her to touch the dress....."I can't believe after everything.., you're still going to say I do to Henry....AKA Agama..."

Susan giggled before they both rumbled with laughter...
Susan's phone ring and she quickly excused herself to take the call..

"Hey Big man.."She said over the phone..

"How are you..?"Lorenzo's voice sounded from the other end..

"Hope you aren't going to miss my wedding...."Susan said before the thoughts of her brother found way to her head again..., the day she has long prayed for was about coming and her brother isn't here.., she remenber her brother's words, she needs to be strong, though when he died, she felt depressed, for weeks she starved herself, she could have probably died if Henry and Anita hasn't been by her side....."I just want to remind you soldier..."Susan continue...."You're walking me down the aisle..."

"It will be my greatest pleasure..."Lorenzo said from the other end..

"How's the business....?"Susan asked..."You've been off these few days.."

"I did as you suggested.."Lorenzo said..."I paid everyone off..., I hope to start a legit business with my share..."

A smile surrounds Susan's cheeks.."Thank you for listening to me..."

"I'll see you tomorrow.."Lorenzo said

"See you tomorrow.."Susan replied before the call ended....

"Have you heard.."Anita said..."Doctor Bright woke up from his coma.."

"Wow.., that's good news..."







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As the driver tried to slow down the speed of the vehicle.., the car tyres joggle on the potholes..., the driver fused his gaze on the burning car just a little distance from him.., wondering who could have set a fire on the car, he began to look around with pounding heart..., just then she remenber what is in his car truck.., chief will be angry at him if he doesn't deliver the casket to the right destination at the right time..., breathing heavily, he move his hand to increase the car speed but he was a minute too late.., he heard a gunshot before he could do anything.., fear seize the very breathe from him, heart pounding with added adrenaline, he quickly realise it was his tyre that was shot..., once again he tried to move the car but quickly realise how futile it was to drive when his hands began to shake....

He froze to the spot when the front seat windscreen broke into pieces, he quickly shift his gaze to the broken side windscreen only to see a man pointing a gun at him....

"Get out of the car...."The man ordered......

Stricken with fear, the man crawl out of the vehicle and lay on the floor...

"Stand up.."The man commanded and pull him up.., then he push the driver towards the truck...

"Open it..?"He ordered..

The driver did as he was told with fear lingering on every part of him....

"Open the casket..."

With shaking hands, the driver did as he was told.., the man wasted no time before he pushed the driver aside and carried the casket from the truck..., he groaned when he saw the bundles of money in the casket..

"Where are you taking this money to...?"The man asked..

"I was supposed to deliver it to an address.."

"Who sent you..?"He growled at the driver..

"It's the chief..., Chief Austin.., please don't kill me, I've told you everything that I know.."

"I'm not going to kill you but I want you to deliver this message to the chief...., tell him he's been marked and will be going down soon.."

"But...., but who are you..?"The driver ask anxiously....

The man took a step back as he remenbered his story.., a year and few months ago, he was desperate to get revenge on the one guy that has destroyed everything he holds dear.., after been denied the opportunity of shooting him with a gun.., he walked hopeless on that night when someone hit his head from behind.., a day later he woke up on a boat sailing to God knows where..., he didn't understood who the people that had abducted him where..., many times he tried to escape after they got to their destination....., but he later realise the people that had taken him were fighting a good cause and were just recruiting people..., he was given a choice to join or leave and that was when he decided to stay..., there is no justice from the government, the government are bunch of greedy thieves who'll do anything to save thier own skin......

"My name is Matthew...."Matthew said in reply to the driver's question.., and I'm one of the rebels..., tell your chief.., the rebels are coming for him.....because we'll always stand for justice, for the poor and the oppressed.....

The driver wasted no time before he entered the car and zoomed off....

Matthew sigh and lower his gaze to the casket of money..., he was about closing the casket when he heard his name.., he recognise the voice nd quickly spun around....

"Wow.."Dennis, his friend fighting for the same cause said....."Is that money..?"

"These greedy men will never stop.., they're moving money with caskets now..."Matthew said

"I have good news man.."Dennis said..."We found your sister. ."

"Anita.."

"Yes, we found Anita..."

"How is she...?"

"She's fine.."Dennis said..."Her friend is getting married and she's the maid of honour.., you're not going to believe this but she's flowing in money now..., I heard the mako company rewarded her with lots of money...., I couldn't go close to her so I slipped a letter in her house...., if she reads it, she'll know you're still alive and doing okay...."

Matthew inhale deeply before words came out from his mouth..."Thank you..."








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3 YEARS LATER



BANJUL, THE REPUBLIC OF GAMBIA






"Come out girl, you're keeping daddy waiting..."Carlos said as he stroke his erect penis......

It wasn't long before she stepped out of the bathroom with her hands behind her...

Carlos shudder when he saw her..., his eyes enlarged with shock when he quickly noticed she isn't the girl he's been with..., prostration swept across his face before he tried to reach for his gun...

Theresa shot where his gun is making Carlos quickly withdrew his hands...

"How did you get in here" Carlos groaned..."Where is Cassandra..?"

"I'm Cassandra..."Theresa said pulling off the remaining piece of the skin she wore on her face...."The same girl you've been drooling over.."

"You wore a skin...."Carlos said and chuckle..."How could i not have noticed.. ?"

"You were too drunk to..."Theresa said pointing the gun at him..

"What are you going to do, kill me.., you won't get out of here alive.. "

"All your men are drunk.., no one is coming for you...."

"Do you know how many people have tried to kill me for money..?"Carlos ask

"This isn't about money...."Theresa growled.."This is revenge..., you killed my fiance, he was an undercover agent and you killed him..."

"Oh fùck shit, I've killed so many undercover agents just the....

Once again that painful moment invaded Theresa's head...., it angered her and that was when she pulled the trigger that silent Carlos.....

Carlos dropped dead on the bed as the bullet connected with his head..., blood spill out from his brain and splashed on the white sheets.....

Tears flow earnestly from Theresa's face as she walk out of the room with the gun in her hand leaving Carlos dead body, leaving his blood soaked the white bed sheets.....Good riddance to bad rubbish.........







PLAGIARIZED...........THE END


Thank you all for reading......, I love you guys



Signing out...................

Until next time nairalanders.................

Mantee:
What a great story.
Well done Silver

Tnks man

purity23:
Samuel didn't suffer at all o, pls keep Susan safe o, I am scared already.

Thanks for the update

u welcome dear

sheba222:
silver have murder us with this wonderful piece

Tnks dear

Debbylicious:
Why did Samuel have to die so easily, after the kind of torture he subjects his victims to before killing them

Silver, i thought you'll make him suffer so much that death would be his last hope/option

very beautiful story, can't wait for the final episode. But pls keep anita and susan safe o, they've suffered enough

Thanks Silver, God bless you

Amen....

shakibell:
silver u don spoil show abeg

why samuel go die jus lyk dat

na slow nd painful death u suppose give an

I dey vex fr u lyk dis

Nor vex abeg

Mavikolo2020:
Best story ever..can't wait for the finale

Thanks man

Mavikolo2020:
Mr Silver, why are u starving us with the finale

Sorry

Demurray:
Oga silver, I don't know why I'm just reading this story now since last year that you started it.
What an interesting story! Kudos to you and God bless your hand work.
Thank you.

You welcome man..hope you enjoyed the story....?

So Mr. Smith escaped punishment for Nurse Titi's death.

Anyway nice one as usual Silver1996. At least people didn't die as expected

genius43:
So Mr. Smith escaped punishment for Nurse Titi's death.

Anyway nice one as usual Silver1996. At least people didn't die as expected

You welcome

Thanks man. Jah bless. Pls find something do mr smith, even if na small punishment. Dont deny the feminine nature of karma because karma is always a bi.tch

Wow Mr Smith is a badass, after all the atrocities he committed, he's actually the one walking free.

I don't blame him though, there was no evidence to tie him to Nurse Titi's death.

Silver thanks alot for this great story...

finally the end
what a wonderful piece
I hope you are getting ready another interesting story for us
please mention me oo

Tanks so much Silver