Loved this story from start to finish good work great story

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One Christmas day i took a short cut through Olusosun, where the boy I was crushing on lived. He was cute and had a brown skin, it was like he escaped from the grips of albino but he came out with the scars. Anyway I liked him, brown skin, red hair and all. I was all decked out in my red and purple readymade gown and I was rocking my Aba made shoes. My jerry curls was also on point, that very morning I had covered my head with the toilet sponge after smearing globs of gel on my fried hair. The relaxer I used on my hair made it look like the hair of a chick which fell into water. I had to use the toilet sponge because I didn’t know where the one I used I for bathing was. So I took a little mirror and picked my hair out of the tiny holes in the sponge with a needle. I was doing it all for Nathan.


I saw Nathan and his group of smelling boxers friends at the far end of the street, they had bangers in their hands which they lit and threw at young girls passing by. They were having a good laugh out of it. I heard them arguing as I got closer to them.


“I get six sounds, na five sound you give me!” one big headed akpu eating boy said.


“Your father Yansh! What of the seven sounds I give you?”

My crush was dressed in a faded baggy jean with that two phase fifty cent singlet. The net singlet with two colors. Red and Navy blue. Nathan had worn the red phase all through November and he switched to wearing the Navy blue phase in December. He was busy dancing to Yahooze while his friends argued about the missing seven sounds knock out.

I brought out my two shades red and pink rubber eye glasses mom had bought for me, I wore it to compliment my dressing. My palm was sweaty, I was so nervous and the boys had gone quiet. They were giggling while covering their mouth with both hands. Nathan was laughing too. I looked behind me; there was no one behind me, were they laughing at me?

“Ayamataga Your shoe don remove” one of the boys called out.

Lo and behold! Both soles of my shoes were behind me on the ground. I almost died in shame; I picked up both soles and ran down through the valley which leads to my house. My mother was making Moi Moi in the kitchen when I entered the house.

“Tomi! See how dirty you are! Did you roll around on the ground?”


It was then that I noticed the ice cream stains on the gown but it was late for me to care. I flung the useless shoes into the dustbin.


“Don’t buy me these shoes anymore! Why do you keep buying shoes that I wear only once?”



“The sole of these one too removed? Nawa oo……awon Omo Nna are just ripping us off ni o”


“How do you expect them to last when they are just 400 hundred naira?”


“Who told you they are 400 hundred naira? I bought those shoes for N450 naira o! Oya go and remove it from the dustbin, I will gum it for you and you will use it to do New Year”


I walked into my room and banged the door shut. I fumed in my room until I was called for dinner and a crazy thing happened right after dinner.
“I am going to my room Tomi, please go and cover the pot of Moi Moi well, if not rat will eat it.” Mom said before heading to her room.
After watching the re-run of Lorenzo’s wife and sunset set beach I decided to call it a night, thank the good lord I remembered mummy’s words so I went into the kitchen.


I saw a big rat with scalded back trying to get into the moi moi pot, I stood back and watched it get into the pot before I hurriedly got a cover and covered the pot. I was still angry at what happened earlier so I felt I should pour out my anger on the rat. I got another big pot and placed it on the pot cover. The rat was struggling to escape so I got yet another pot which I placed on it .I stood back and watched the pot with satisfaction. Serves him right! The heat from the pot should kill him by morning and I went off to bed.


My mom’s shrieks woke me up the next morning. I jumped happily out of bed thinking the rat was dead if not why was mommy shouting? I also screamed in shock when I saw what the foolish rat had done! It ate all the Moi Moi and escaped. Ha! I don’t know what I was thinking! Who would believe anyone would still be that silly at fourteen?


this was epic! ! had to come comment quickly. had me holding my belly in laughter for real. Good job dear. Would comment again when I've read through the story.[b][quote author=bibijay123 post=48966051] *Continues*



One Christmas day i took a short cut through Olusosun, where the boy I was crushing on lived. He was cute and had a brown skin, it was like he escaped from the grips of albino but he came out with the scars. Anyway I liked him, brown skin, red hair and all. I was all decked out in my red and purple readymade gown and I was rocking my Aba made shoes. My jerry curls was also on point, that very morning I had covered my head with the toilet sponge after smearing globs of gel on my fried hair. The relaxer I used on my hair made it look like the hair of a chick which fell into water. I had to use the toilet sponge because I didn’t know where the one I used I for bathing was. So I took a little mirror and picked my hair out of the tiny holes in the sponge with a needle. I was doing it all for Nathan.


I saw Nathan and his group of smelling boxers friends at the far end of the street, they had bangers in their hands which they lit and threw at young girls passing by. They were having a good laugh out of it. I heard them arguing as I got closer to them.


“I get six sounds, na five sound you give me!” one big headed akpu eating boy said.


“Your father Yansh! What of the seven sounds I give you?”

My crush was dressed in a faded baggy jean with that two phase fifty cent singlet. The net singlet with two colors. Red and Navy blue. Nathan had worn the red phase all through November and he switched to wearing the Navy blue phase in December. He was busy dancing to Yahooze while his friends argued about the missing seven sounds knock out.

I brought out my two shades red and pink rubber eye glasses mom had bought for me, I wore it to compliment my dressing. My palm was sweaty, I was so nervous and the boys had gone quiet. They were giggling while covering their mouth with both hands. Nathan was laughing too. I looked behind me; there was no one behind me, were they laughing at me?

“Ayamataga Your shoe don remove” one of the boys called out.

Lo and behold! Both soles of my shoes were behind me on the ground. I almost died in shame; I picked up both soles and ran down through the valley which leads to my house. My mother was making Moi Moi in the kitchen when I entered the house.

“Tomi! See how dirty you are! Did you roll around on the ground?”


It was then that I noticed the ice cream stains on the gown but it was late for me to care. I flung the useless shoes into the dustbin.


“Don’t buy me these shoes anymore! Why do you keep buying shoes that I wear only once?”



“The sole of these one too removed? Nawa oo……awon Omo Nna are just ripping us off ni o”


“How do you expect them to last when they are just 400 hundred naira?”


“Who told you they are 400 hundred naira? I bought those shoes for N450 naira o! Oya go and remove it from the dustbin, I will gum it for you and you will use it to do New Year”


I walked into my room and banged the door shut. I fumed in my room until I was called for dinner and a crazy thing happened right after dinner.
“I am going to my room Tomi, please go and cover the pot of Moi Moi well, if not rat will eat it.” Mom said before heading to her room.
After watching the re-run of Lorenzo’s wife and sunset set beach I decided to call it a night, thank the good lord I remembered mummy’s words so I went into the kitchen.


I saw a big rat with scalded back trying to get into the moi moi pot, I stood back and watched it get into the pot before I hurriedly got a cover and covered the pot. I was still angry at what happened earlier so I felt I should pour out my anger on the rat. I got another big pot and placed it on the pot cover. The rat was struggling to escape so I got yet another pot which I placed on it .I stood back and watched the pot with satisfaction. Serves him right! The heat from the pot should kill him by morning and I went off to bed.


My mom’s shrieks woke me up the next morning. I jumped happily out of bed thinking the rat was dead if not why was mommy shouting? I also screamed in shock when I saw what the foolish rat had done! It ate all the Moi Moi and escaped. Ha! I don’t know what I was thinking! Who would believe anyone would still be that silly at fourteen?


this was epic! ! had to come comment quickly. had me holding my belly in laughter for real. Good job dear. Would comment again when I've read through the story.[/b][quote author=bibijay123 post=48966051] *Continues*



One Christmas day i took a short cut through Olusosun, where the boy I was crushing on lived. He was cute and had a brown skin, it was like he escaped from the grips of albino but he came out with the scars. Anyway I liked him, brown skin, red hair and all. I was all decked out in my red and purple readymade gown and I was rocking my Aba made shoes. My jerry curls was also on point, that very morning I had covered my head with the toilet sponge after smearing globs of gel on my fried hair. The relaxer I used on my hair made it look like the hair of a chick which fell into water. I had to use the toilet sponge because I didn’t know where the one I used I for bathing was. So I took a little mirror and picked my hair out of the tiny holes in the sponge with a needle. I was doing it all for Nathan.


I saw Nathan and his group of smelling boxers friends at the far end of the street, they had bangers in their hands which they lit and threw at young girls passing by. They were having a good laugh out of it. I heard them arguing as I got closer to them.


“I get six sounds, na five sound you give me!” one big headed akpu eating boy said.


“Your father Yansh! What of the seven sounds I give you?”

My crush was dressed in a faded baggy jean with that two phase fifty cent singlet. The net singlet with two colors. Red and Navy blue. Nathan had worn the red phase all through November and he switched to wearing the Navy blue phase in December. He was busy dancing to Yahooze while his friends argued about the missing seven sounds knock out.

I brought out my two shades red and pink rubber eye glasses mom had bought for me, I wore it to compliment my dressing. My palm was sweaty, I was so nervous and the boys had gone quiet. They were giggling while covering their mouth with both hands. Nathan was laughing too. I looked behind me; there was no one behind me, were they laughing at me?

“Ayamataga Your shoe don remove” one of the boys called out.

Lo and behold! Both soles of my shoes were behind me on the ground. I almost died in shame; I picked up both soles and ran down through the valley which leads to my house. My mother was making Moi Moi in the kitchen when I entered the house.

“Tomi! See how dirty you are! Did you roll around on the ground?”


It was then that I noticed the ice cream stains on the gown but it was late for me to care. I flung the useless shoes into the dustbin.


“Don’t buy me these shoes anymore! Why do you keep buying shoes that I wear only once?”



“The sole of these one too removed? Nawa oo……awon Omo Nna are just ripping us off ni o”


“How do you expect them to last when they are just 400 hundred naira?”


“Who told you they are 400 hundred naira? I bought those shoes for N450 naira o! Oya go and remove it from the dustbin, I will gum it for you and you will use it to do New Year”


I walked into my room and banged the door shut. I fumed in my room until I was called for dinner and a crazy thing happened right after dinner.
“I am going to my room Tomi, please go and cover the pot of Moi Moi well, if not rat will eat it.” Mom said before heading to her room.
After watching the re-run of Lorenzo’s wife and sunset set beach I decided to call it a night, thank the good lord I remembered mummy’s words so I went into the kitchen.


I saw a big rat with scalded back trying to get into the moi moi pot, I stood back and watched it get into the pot before I hurriedly got a cover and covered the pot. I was still angry at what happened earlier so I felt I should pour out my anger on the rat. I got another big pot and placed it on the pot cover. The rat was struggling to escape so I got yet another pot which I placed on it .I stood back and watched the pot with satisfaction. Serves him right! The heat from the pot should kill him by morning and I went off to bed.


My mom’s shrieks woke me up the next morning. I jumped happily out of bed thinking the rat was dead if not why was mommy shouting? I also screamed in shock when I saw what the foolish rat had done! It ate all the Moi Moi and escaped. Ha! I don’t know what I was thinking! Who would believe anyone would still be that silly at fourteen?


this was epic! ! had to come comment quickly. had me holding my belly in laughter for real. Good job dear. Would comment again when I've read through the story.

hottadiva:
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Thank u bt pls just comment n cc me instead of quoting a whole update. I am glad i made you laugh n thanks for reading.

bibijay123:



Thank u bt pls just comment n cc me instead of quoting a whole update. I am glad i made you laugh n thanks for reading.

my bad. guess it was over excitement. .. .lol. wouldn't do that normally ..


Meanwhile just finished reading this wonderful piece. Kudos OP. you know ur stuff. the ending though did seem unnatural with fast paced events and forced fairytales . But then it's fiction. lemme sleep now for work tomorrow and then digest all your other stories.

Hearty cheers again

hottadiva:


my bad. guess it was over excitement. .. .lol. wouldn't do that normally ..


Meanwhile just finished reading this wonderful piece. Kudos OP. you know ur stuff. the ending though did seem unnatural with fast paced events and forced fairytales . But then it's fiction. lemme sleep now for work tomorrow and then digest all your other stories.

Hearty cheers again

Thanks! * Cheers* sorry abt the ending, i did my best.

Wonderful wonderful story

you're fine Ma.


Thank you sir, you're not bad too

Bibi, you are awesome. great piece of art. well done

enohorglo:
Bibi, you are awesome. great piece of art. well done

ThANK YOU

kudos @bibijay23. I sincerely appreciate u for a job well done on this literary piece. Its just perfect in all phase. characterisation; plot; language; speech work;all is extremely well done.

please Bibi I also need a soft copy can I gt one

Bolanlera:
please Bibi I also need a soft copy can I gt one

I don't have a soft copy of this story but I can send you others.

bibijay123:


I don't have a soft copy of this story but I can send you others.

okay

send me the copies of your other stories

U are a great writer. More ink to ur pen..

Bolanlera:
send me the copies of your other stories

Sent. Have you seen it?

namedonfinish:
U are a great writer. More ink to ur pen..

Thank you ma'am

bibijay123:


Thank you ma'am

UWC maam

bibijay123:

Sent. Have you seen it?

yes dear tankx

bibijay123:

Sent. Have you seen it?

yes dear tankx BT I also need Twine

bibijay123:

Sent. Have you seen it?

yea tankx dear

I must say this story is what I call "LITERARY PIECE OF PERFECTION".
love the storyline, wow suspense, mind blowing twist and a wonderful end. You are one of a kind of a writer.
THE SKY IS YOUR STARTING POINT.

thumbs up.

preciousuweh:
I must say this story is what I call "LITERARY PIECE OF PERFECTION".
love the storyline, wow suspense, mind blowing twist and a wonderful end. You are one of a kind of a writer.
THE SKY IS YOUR STARTING POINT.

thumbs up.

awww. Thank you, Amen!

I have turned to Tomi ooooo
Since I got back frm work around 6:15pm av not been able to do anything in fact my cloth are all over the room all because of her majesty bibi
This is my first time commenting on NL
Well done ma'am. Av totally fallen for you
More knowledge and wisdom falls on you dear.

itsmaoaom:
I have turned to Tomi ooooo
Since I got back frm work around 6:15pm av not been able to do anything in fact my cloth are all over the room all because of her majesty bibi
This is my first time commenting on NL
Well done ma'am. Av totally fallen for you
More knowledge and wisdom falls on you dear.

Lol YIPPIEE!!! We all have a bit of Tomi in us

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NikitaNike:
Dedicate to missuniverse, pamelB, bibijay123.
.
.
.
Maggie.
I had to poison her. she was about to ruin my led out plans for the years.
Life has thought me to be hardless. It all started the day linda's mother got me redhanded in bed her husband. She had threatened to throw me back to the street. The idea of being a street girl wasn't appealling to me. I was already in love with chief or perhap with his money. I couldn't let all that slipped out of my hand.
After her nagging with chief that night, I gingerly entered her room, with pillow in my hand, looking at her goegeous face without remorse or fear, I covered her face.
She struggled for sometimes before giving up the ghost.

NikitaNike:
Dedicate to missuniverse, pamelB, bibijay123.
.
.
.
Maggie.
I had to poison her. she was about to ruin my led out plans for the years.
Life has thought me to be hardless. It all started the day linda's mother got me redhanded in bed her husband. She had threatened to throw me back to the street. The idea of being a street girl wasn't appealling to me. I was already in love with chief or perhap with his money. I couldn't let all that slipped out of my hand.
After her nagging with chief that night, I gingerly entered her room, with pillow in my hand, looking at her goegeous face without remorse or fear, I covered her face.
She struggled for sometimes before giving up the ghost.

omg dis woman is evil lyk really evil

djscailezee:
Been following up your stories secretly... deemed me to comment on how great your work is.. #newfan

Thank you

So na this topic dey bring couples together ... My wife I'm waiting

Happy Married Life dear.....
May your home be filled with joy, happiness and Testimonies...