Please keep Jaiye safe for us O!

“Daddy!” Dapo shouted.
Felicia huddled beside him and knelt to support him.
“Let’s get him to the car!” Felicia sobbed.
“There’s a gridlock. We can’t get on to the main road.” Ayo said.
Thankfully.
If the matter got to the police, Adunni would be charged with aggravated assault and stripped off her uniform.
“Then call an ambulance.” She yelled.
“If we can’t go out, an ambulance can’t come in.”
Jaiye’s grip on her hand tightened and he groaned.
“Get him up and let’s get him in inside.” He shouted at Felicia.
He turned and faced Adunni. “Do you still have your first aid kit?!”
Adunni nodded in her tears.
“Then we’ll have to get the bullet out.” Ayo said and walked back to Jaiye. “Let’s get him inside. We’ll remove the bullet.”

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Felicia latched onto Jaiye’s hand and palmed his head. His eyes were squeezed and his hand in hers pressed hers back. His chest rose and fell and groans left his lips.
“Just stay with me. Please.” She sobbed.
Adunni and Ayo moved left and right gathering items and bringing them back to the dinning table.
“Rather than say useless words, try putting pressure on his wound.” Ayo dictated as he washed his hand at the sink by the dinning table.
Felicia glared at the back of his head and did as she was told.
Ayo rushed back to the table and grabbed a bottle of gin from the stash on the table. He took a swig from the bottle and grimaced. He exhaled and pressed the bottle to Jaiye's lips.
“My husband doesn’t drink.” Felicia said still pressing her palms on Jaiye’s wound.
“The pain will be ten times worse if he doesn’t take a gulp of this.” Ayo snarled.
Jaiye opened in eyes and guzzled from the bottle. Ayo pulled the bottle away and Jaiye groaned in pain and from the heat of the drink. Ayo poured some gin on his hands and rubbed them together. He turned to face Adunni who was crying beside Dapo.
“Adunni, you’re better at stitching. I’m going to need you here.” Ayo said.
“That crazy witch is not touching my husband.” Felicia growled like a protective grizzly bear.
“Felicia, please.” Jaiye moaned. “Just let them get this thing out of me.”
Ayo shook his head and grabbed a paring knife from the bowl filled with now warm water. Felicia took her hands off Jaiye’s wound.
“Unbutton his shirt.” Ayo ordered.
Felicia's sticky hand fumbled his buttons as she started from the bottom up. Tears blinded her eyes as she moved her hands. She had never seen so much blood in her life. And it was Jaiye’s blood.
She pushed the shirt apart and Ayo stared at the wound.
“I’m going to cut open the wound and then dig out the bullet. It’s going to hurt like hell.” Ayo informed Jaiye.
He nodded, his breath coming in short pants. “Do it.”
Ayo nodded and reached for the bottle of liquid courage. He took another sip and dropped the bottle.
He put the knife to Jaiye’s wound and sliced open the skin at his side. Jaiye yelled in pain.
“Jay, just hold my hand and look at me!” Felicia cooed and palmed his head. Jaiye grabbed her arm and squeezed it like his life depended on it. “Babe, look at me.”
Jaiye’s scrunched eyes opened and he looked at her. She gave him a water smile and nodded.
“It’s going to be okay.”
Jaiye clenched his jaws and nodded panting. His show of strength was cut short as Ayo jammed his fingers into the wound.
He screamed again and his grip on Felicia’s arm almost snapped it in two.
“Babe, you’re going to be okay.” Felicia shouted above his screams.
Ayo moved his fingers around trying to locate the bullet. With each move of his fingers, Jaiye screamed.
“I've found it!” Ayo shouted. He pulled out a bullet and tossed it on a white plate. He checked the bullet to make sure it was complete. “Adunni, over to you.”
Adunni walked towards them and washed her hands with the gin. She picked up a needle and worked at closing up Jaiye’s wounds.
He groaned in pain as she did, not letting go of Felicia’s throbbing arm.

******
Ayo pulled Adunni into a corner as Felicia and her family discussed in the dining. She gasped at the force of the pull and he clamped his hand over her mouth.
“If you love yourself, you’ll pack a few things and get out of here. This guy has connections. He might want to charge you and I wouldn’t want to see you in prison. Not with the amount of people you’ve put there.” He whispered.
“Where do I go?” She whimpered.
“I don’t know but make sure it’s far. Very far.” He said.
She nodded.
“I’ll keep them distracted.”
He made to leave but she pulled him back and hugged him.
“Thank you.”
He nodded and left her.

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Thanks for the update and keep up the good work.

Sincerely this is the only story i constantly check on for updates like countless times in a day.
I love your work

millieademi:
Okay....

I'm mad and this is a rant.

I've stated it time and time again. Ocean of Secrets is NOT like other stories. There is no how you've read the book from page one till now and not come across one of such disclaimers.

Really....

I don't write like most writers. It's my blessing and my curse. My style and plots are different. I believe life can be shitty, so I won't paint no fairy tale.

Granted, some people scale through life without experiencing shit. I don't write about such people.

So, I find it really annoying when you say my work is complicated.

I might be overreacting or misunderstanding your comments but I'm really irked when I read that.

Please. Let's refrain from it.

My hands are together and my knees on the floor.

I'm not opposed to you asking questions but you flat out condemning my work as complicated is ANNOYING.

There's freedom but let's not abuse it.

Thanks.


AND THANKS TO EVERYONE FOR 255K VIEWS.

millieademi:
Okay....

I'm mad and this is a rant.


I'm not opposed to you asking questions but you flat out condemning my work as complicated is ANNOYING.

There's freedom but let's not abuse it.

Thanks.


AND THANKS TO EVERYONE FOR 255K VIEWS.

Millieademi, eku ise. But you know that your work is wonderfully complicated nau. Lol. Don't allow such comments get you mad. It's your style. Yes, it is!

The typical Nigerian (Lagosians especially) is impatient. So they expect you to cut the chase and get to the end of the story quickly, especially as the story appears like one of those with an end (some stories have no intended end - just a mash of different loosely connected experiences).

They want Tinu and Chris to earn their freedom, Roselle and Co issues done with, Dele and Seyifunmi finally married, etc. But that's not your style, right? You are on a detailed scene by scene analysis which some of us have gotten frustrated with.

But it's your story and we're enjoying it. Your consistency is even surprising. One of its kind! If I say your story is complicated, just smile, shake_your_head_for_me, and move on.

Bring it on, Millieademi. Nothing do you!

millieademi:
Okay....

I'm mad and this is a rant.

I've stated it time and time again. Ocean of Secrets is NOT like other stories. There is no how you've read the book from page one till now and not come across one of such disclaimers.

Really....

I don't write like most writers. It's my blessing and my curse. My style and plots are different. I believe life can be shitty, so I won't paint no fairy tale.

Granted, some people scale through life without experiencing shit. I don't write about such people.

So, I find it really annoying when you say my work is complicated.

I might be overreacting or misunderstanding your comments but I'm really irked when I read that.

Please. Let's refrain from it.

My hands are together and my knees on the floor.

I'm not opposed to you asking questions but you flat out condemning my work as complicated is ANNOYING.

There's freedom but let's not abuse it.

Thanks.


AND THANKS TO EVERYONE FOR 255K VIEWS.

calm down ma'am, if we could watch and read American series without probs , some people like myself love these twists , pls don't end the story soon o. you are exceptional different and that makes you outstanding.

....

Thanks for the update ma'am

Thanks for the update millie, can't wait for update on jaiye

My first comment since I started reading your story quietly...
I know all the characters matter to your story and your effort to make it a good one is appreciated but @Milliademi, you need to go straight to points in your narratives. I actually thought you'd keep us focused and not loose tract on the lead characters: Dele, Tinu and Chris. Maybe some other handful ones. But, I am not a writer, though I understand the pains you guys go thru to make stories interesting, so, let me leave you to continue. I hope you bring this to a wrap in no distant time.
*XoXo*

Wow, I have been glued for some days, to this story from the beginning, I love d suspense and everything.

Kudos

More update. More grease to ur elbow

Millieademi got pissed hearing her story was complicated. Wow, babe you know better that reaction. C'mon, you said it yourself. You don't write like other writers that we've seen/met, thats a plus glory on your path. You shouldn't get upset because some one who prolly havn't read something this mind blowing criticized you. You're the best since i know. Thanks for this. And please, when they say your work is complicated just smile and say thankyou. If they don't like it they should look for 'obi is a boy' and read. Kudos to you.
BTW. Your last update needs edition. I saw a mistake in the names, instead of MJ You wrote Tanya, and got me thinking 'what the...' later, I Got to understand anyway. Thanks for the update.

So, Tanya would repent of her sins? Wow. Freedom to Tinu.

.....

Inkopere:
Wow, I have been glued for some days, to this story from the beginning, I love d suspense and everything.

Kudos

Thank you, dear.

Khriztarl:
Millieademi got pissed hearing her story was complicated. Wow, babe you know better that reaction. C'mon, you said it yourself. You don't write like other writers that we've seen/met, thats a plus glory on your path. You shouldn't get upset because some one who prolly havn't read something this mind blowing criticized you. You're the best since i know. Thanks for this. And please, when they say your work is complicated just smile and say thankyou. If they don't like it they should look for 'obi is a boy' and read. Kudos to you.
BTW. Your last update needs edition. I saw a mistake in the names, instead of MJ You wrote Tanya, and got me thinking 'what the...' later, I Got to understand anyway. Thanks for the update.

Yesterday was a bad day for me. Faced some form of criticism from people and seeing here again, I think I lashed out.

I apologise.

As per editing, I'll get to it. Thanks for pointing it out.

segunjowo:
My first comment since I started reading your story quietly...
I know all the characters matter to your story and your effort to make it a good one is appreciated but @Milliademi, you need to go straight to points in your narratives. I actually thought you'd keep us focused and not loose tract on the lead characters: Dele, Tinu and Chris. Maybe some other handful ones. But, I am not a writer, though I understand the pains you guys go thru to make stories interesting, so, let me leave you to continue. I hope you bring this to a wrap in no distant time.
*XoXo*

and


Thanks for the comment.


So as per the ''relegation" of some of the cast, I'll just say it's for the advancement of the plot. Everything is like some sort of clue that will lead to the end.

Did that make sense? I'm not sure.

Just think of it like the MCU movies. After an Avengers movie, you watch a Captain America movie or Antman just to get a glimpse of the bigger picture and an in-depth understanding of the characters

millieademi:




Yesterday was a bad day for me. Faced some form of criticism from people and seeing here again, I think I lashed out.

I apologise.

As per editing, I'll get to it. Thanks for pointing it out.

Its alright sweetheart.
so Tinu is now psycho. Chris's face has been changed. His memories wiped out. How on earth would this dots be connected. So las las Tinu and dele would come back together. Haew.

Why is Chris's father treating him like this? Thanks for the update

Thanks for the update

Jason is so heartless, he wants to turn his own son into a vegetable......
How I wish Tinu will recover soon
Thanks for the update ma'am

There has been so much updates I'm almost lost
Don't know what I did for them but anti-spam bot blocked me.

I'll just jump to the date of birth part...my birthday is on the 29th(I think I've said it before)my brother's is on the 27th so mid-ground for us is 28th and now I'm hearing that yours is on the 28th....or is it?

Oremeyii:
There has been so much updates I'm almost lost
Don't know what I did for them but anti-spam bot blocked me.

I'll just jump to the date of birth part...my birthday is on the 29th(I think I've said it before)my brother's is on the 27th so mid-ground for us is 28th and now I'm hearing that yours is on the 28th....or is it?

Yep.

Hey Millie, I see what you are doing here and it's nothing short of excellent, keep up the good work Ma'am.

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Khriztarl:

Its alright sweetheart.
so Tinu is now psycho. Chris's face has been changed. His memories wiped out. How on earth would this dots be connected. So las las Tinu and dele would come back together. Haew.

I hope we know what Cyan Lady means.

Hmmmmm


Thanks for the update

Chris remembered the first time he met Tiny kudos to you for this wonderful masterpiece

wow, mili we shared the same birthday.. Awwww�, this is so sweet, in massive advance to us babe
btw, thanks for the wonderful update, God bless your

millieademi:


I hope we know what Cyan Lady means.

According to what i read, cyan lady's a yatch. Or am i wrong?