captainnigeria: why r there a lot of people with their noses so far up repo's fanny.guys ur compliments r too cliche.and repo,ur kite going to ise's house that night why r there a lot of people with their noses so far up repo's fanny.guys ur compliments r too cliche.and repo,ur kite going to ise's house that night

guy, sofry naa..
uve made similar coment b4 inspite of d fact that ppl do critic repo's work, i being one of such ppl.. whethr u like/admit, she's good (suspense flows& storyline is crieative), no a**/f**** kissing here!

Melancholy: Repo keep it up! But this can only be a fiction cos i can't imagine a guy spending so much on a girl only to kiss her on a forehead,hold her hands ,talk about past stories in thesame room every night.Ise na dullard to badtt!

*laughing hard* guy, i feel u
but even if its fiction, it just shows u that women apreciate guys who think more upstairs!

Melancholy: ..Ise na dullard to badtt!

ah-ah! fyne, hot, sexy, SHARP boi ise?! pls, pls leave him o, he's repping wella..


repo darl, 2 thumbs up, d storys unfolding well..

captainnigeria: ..u shuld free time and update at midnight

hmm, make she no sleep cos of story update?!
guy, hav mercy naa
'aunty p,' 'repo darl,' i 4say make u update once sef, 2 giv u brain time, but some NLers would shoot..

joshmoy: Easy on the update requests guyz..han han..repogirl has a family 2 attend to, she gats 2 work 2 earn her daily bread...aw much will u all contribute if she breaks downoliver twists oshi..if u r nt satisfied, go 2 d beggining and read all over again

abi o!

[quote author=AMYpurple]Chai!..Lekwanụ temptation...*signs in a very depresd manner*Kite pls dn't give in,biko nne.
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lol...

silverluci: So what if ise had liked Vicky and had taken her home, will kite still barge into the house like that? At that time of the day? .. the CEO .. is beginning to sound too easy.

Kite too(k) advantage of the fact that the CEO likes her that is why she ran to his house first before thinking twice..

good point! silverluci
'repogeh' darlin mayb when prepping d main book u might consider mentioning kite's inconvenience 4 one/two days b4 ise comes to d rescue, to keep it realistic..
i also felt it was too early 4d shadow over vicki to come up, unles ofcourse we are close 2d books end...
just suggesting..
thnx again 4sharing ur effort

Damex333: .. But pls, lucky and diamond must not take her back o. Them don tell am b4 o, at least them don give am car. Make she sleep in d car 4 1 week..

lol.. na wa 4 u o!

Eneze1:


Sorry Aunty

lol.. u b character o

Carsonv: First of, very nice story! Got something naija proses rarely have...suspense! I was forced to read every word to the end so I don't miss a thing.

But somewhere within the story, Ise's word became something short of the Cambridge/Havard graduate and crme fela you described him to be. Not the part he conversated with Kenny in pidgin...well I guess you know what I mean. The senstences looked kinda everyday and colloquial.

All the same superb story! I'm abticipating the end already!

Lemme guess the end: Ise falls in luv with Kite and mama fights against it but the end they live happily eva after!

ehh, uncle Carsonv, no take ur blues intarupt our reggae naa!
we stil want d suspense so delay prediction til d end.. thaiinz

Eze Promoe:
Abeg make me hear word jor. If you're having a crush on Vickii Ro or Eneze1, let us know



#Team KITE

#Team KITE for life ooo!
all 'fiction' Izus, Vickis, Brendas, & Princesses shld pipe low joor!
err.. plenty luv 2 Eneze1, Vickii Ro..

*clearing my throat*
just 3 words..
hoT - hOT - HOT!!!
and this soo happened at the right time!
chai, m hooked ooo! now i know why faithful readers urge u 4updates
havnt stoppd loving it, well done repoG!

two thumbs up @repogirl!
well done on d originality, yes its the classic boy-meets-likes-&-falls-in-love-with girl but its different cos:
1.) It not d typical poor girl sob story, she's in dire straits yet humorous; pretty but unruly etc..
2.) Their initial chance meetings are not forced/unrealistic, they flow smoothly
3.) The brief moment of grief (d call about mom in a coma) which opens d door to romantic possibilities 4them is original, I didn't see it coming @all!
4.) Ur story was soo good, I read it nonstop for about an hour, from d moment I stumbled on it @11pm. Then I opened an acct just2post these coments.. Like @hadayshawler said, u don't hav to wory bout each book catering to evry part of d readin public, just make sure uve workd out each bk's target audience n include what'll appeal to thm, within d rules of Nigerian reality; somthg u seem 2b achieving already, goin by d majority of positv coments here..
5.) Also, no profanity, very good!
But
1.) there are quite a numbr of typos (even tho d story's interesting twists make thm almost negligible... almost)
2.) watch d overqualification with adjectives, happnd quite a bit eg "..ABOUT six feet three or THEREABOUTS" and as @anonimous pointed out, "..CORRECT afang soup.." (qualifiers in caps) in d case of makin "afang soup" stand out, u cld use 'delicious' or...
Hmm, lemme stop here 4now b4 I overanalyse a story that's not even finished
I'm lovin it tho, keep it up!