₦airaland Forum

GelTleStar:
Why?

GelTleStar:
Good idea. But I's suggest you start with upgrading your phone. The picture quality looks inferior.

chimkaire:
kikikikikikiki

Cutehector:
anything doesnt go..pls quit dat mindset... Social media has etiquettes...

Cutehector:
Wen will people stop putting unwanted information on social media....

googlepikin:
Which geopolitical zone is she from?

toksbisola:
@Op: first of all well-done for your effort. If this is your first effort in music then you’ve done well but your singing style needs a bit of improvement. Both of you singing were not synchronizing your voices properly and went off-tune. If I were to rate you on a scale of 1 to 10; I’ll rate you as a 7.

My critical points for you are below;

1) It seems that there was too much noise than required at the background for the lyrics;

2) The co-ordination between the 2 voices wasn't too good and definitely needs improvement;

3) You need your lyrics to flow with the content of the music; and

4) At a point, both of you lost pitch on your voice and l couldn’t make head or tail as to where the lyrics was heading.

Remember, there are so many people out there who release a music album on a daily basis; but only a very minute few that'll make it big and I would very much like you to be among that minute few and make it big. Overall, the lyrics itself ain’t that bad; it’s just that you need to train your voice and coordinate it properly with the style your using.

It'll be to your advantage if you don’t take offence when people critique your music/lyrics; rather use their critical analysis to build yourself up and get better for the next track you’ll release. I’m looking forward to hearing your next track and hopefully you would have done some amendments as others have suggested to you.

My plus point for you would be;

The unique style you have picked for yourself is good as your type of mix is not too common; hence make it into a grand style for yourself and capitalize on making it into a niche as against following what already exist.

@icedbeatz is into music I guess; and he’ll also be able to give you some tips you can use to develop your music career.

@Airforce1; are you still on your music as I was looking forward to hearing about your next music album; are you working on it? Don’t give up on your passion.

I rest my case

axiliborha:
me too since how many Thursdays ago we never see song one single o

ehix89:
its simple,step up ur marketing game,u cld attract fan base,gv youtube link to wat u do,mk sure u do gud music, Airforce 1 dhey try,but dat e "such a diva" song no go well

sparkleRed:
Yes I will be around 4 sure

sparkleRed:
South southerner (is dat my spelling correct sef)

Akwaibom state
National youth service corps brought me here