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scribble:
Shut your dumb ass up

CorrectionFLuid:
Many Democrats registered as Republicans to vote out trump during republican primaries.

The shooter also donated money to democrats. Get informed before opening mouth wah

Evidenx:
Just 4 days?

In my area no light for two months we Never shake.

DevilsEqual:
Whenever this Gumi comes out to talk, its always about negative happenings and pro-rebel thingy

Man doesnt stand positivity. What a scholar

Unperturbedpota:
Are you a university graduate?

Unperturbedpota:
Your grammar is really poor for someone assumed to be a university graduate

1. Punctuation:

Double periods ".." should be replaced with a single period or ellipsis "..." for consistency.
The second sentence uses ".." twice, which is incorrect.

2. Grammar:

"rid himself off the mess" should be "rid himself of the mess."
"brought upon him by Trump administration" should include "the" before "Trump administration."
The phrase "If not, why this act.." is unclear and informal. It needs clarification and correct punctuation.
The tag "[/b]" seems to be an unintended formatting code.

3. Informal Language:

"Imagine say Buhari wanted to extend his stay then..." is informal. It should be rephrased for clarity and formality.

4. Clarity and Conciseness:

The overall message is somewhat fragmented and can be more concise.


Corrected Version
Thank God he wasn't a Democrat.

The poor guy couldn't rid himself of the mess brought upon him by the Trump administration. Otherwise, why would he act this way?

Imagine if Buhari had wanted to extend his stay back then...

VULCAN:
Try to keep abreast with news instead of rushing here to comment in ignorance.

He registered as a Republic but all his political donations were made to Democrats.

We all put our money where our heart is.

I won't bother to explain what that implies.

senatordave1:
Atiku

Aareakinwunmi:
It's high time for US to find a lasting solution to it's gun violence.

Thanks to SSS, Trump almost turned dust.

senatordave1:
It is not,this man has been a philanthropist since 1999

Eze007:
Only tinubu supporters will say it isn't staged whereas it's looks very staged 😂😂😂

Herkim:
Irresponsible father . end result of taking alcohol

Tokskob2008:
Instead of foodstuffs to get cheaper because we now rely on local production it got more expensive.

Which gains have the local production witnessed for the past 9yrs