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LiteratureRe: BISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op): 9:21pm On Jan 28, 2018
muhammed50:
Why?
You were the first to comment on the topic, but you seem hesitant so I won't do it.
LiteratureRe: BISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op): 9:10pm On Jan 28, 2018
muhammed50:
my name??
I don't understand
Oh, just means I named a character Muhammed
LiteratureRe: BISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op):
What would I do to be with you ?

BISI - THE OTHER WOMAN CH 05


A single beep sounded from the pink I-phone on the nightstand. The time showed 1:00 a.m. Moonlight streamed through the bay window facing the foot of the bed. It was quiet, as the dead of night tends to be. Zainab watched her husband sleep. She knew him well. Nothing would wake him after the rounds of intimacy she had taken him through. Conflicting emotions rampaged through her heart. Out of the many uncertainties running through her mind, there was one which she was sure of. Leaning in she placed her thin lips near his ear.

"I will murder before I ever let you go."

Zainab whispered in an eerily calm voice. Grabbing her phone she swung out of bed and headed to the door. She hesitated, turning to take one more glance at her sleeping husband.

Dawn remained a couple hours away from the land of the living. Buried underneath thin blankets, Namdi began to stir. Instinctively his hand reached out towards the nightstand. He groaned, his back littered with scratch marks. Two blind grabs finally snagged him his phone. A quick swipe showed him it was almost 6 a.m.

"Babe, you awake? You were a tiger last night."

Turning, Namdi saw an empty bed. His upper torso rose up looking at an open door. An enticing smell flowed into his nostrils. Following the aroma, Namdi went out the bedroom door. His toes curled into the thick carpet as he made his way down the ornate stairs. The wooden railing had been carved with intricate designs. Supposedly it had been the railing of some aristocrat from a foreign country. Namdi only remembered how excited Zainab had been when it arrived. At the bottom of the stairs he could tell what it was. His nose led him to the kitchen. There Zainab stood in front of the stove frying Akara.

"Shouldn't the cook be doing that?"

Namdi was partly surprised. He knew she was a fantastic cook but she rarely bothered these past few months.

"Sent her home on a much needed vacation. Would you believe her daughter had a kid a week ago!"

"Is that so..."

Namdi replied, walking up to her and giving her tightly rounded bottom a smack. A sharp scream erupted from Zainab.

"You this...!"

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LiteratureRe: BISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op):
Love, Lust, two sides of the same coin?


BISI -THE OTHER WOMAN CH 04


Stepping out of the car Namdi walked up to the front door of their home. He paused, a slight wind blowing across his short curly hair. It was a simple door, made of cheap metal. His only input when the house was being built. More and more it looked out of place with each passing day. Like it did not belong with the rest of the house. With a practiced hand, Namdi lightly threw his shoulder into the door nudging it open. His mouth opened preparing to shout out his wife's name. Excitement could clearly be seen in his eyes. The anticipation had built to a peak by this point.

"Zainab where are..."

Namdi was unable to finish his sentence as his jaw dropped. In full view of the opened door stood Zainab in nothing but a violent red lingerie. On the top of her dark hair was a single red bow, the end of the ribbons framing her face. Namdi's gaze swept down her hourglass body, ending on the red stilletos she wore. His blood boiled, unable to look away he stood rooted to the spot; oblivious to the bandage around two of her fingers.

"Surprise. Now come here and unwrap your gift."

Zainab gently licked her ruby painted lips, her voice carrying a power Namdi could not resist. Taking two steps he reached her. With practiced ease he scooped her off the floor into his arms. Around his strong brown neck Zainabs arms went, her pearly white teeth nibbling on his ear lobe. As he climbed the stairs he could sense her flowery scent. She ran a finger along his bulging muscle, another bulge digging into her thighs.

Reaching their bed, Namdi began unwrapping his gift with abandon. Enjoying how more and more of her smooth ebony skin saw the light of day. With one last pull of a string, she knelt there on the bed, unclad, chest heaving in a way Namdi found nothing short of beautiful. With feline reflexes she pounced, drawing Namdi onto the bed, nails burying into his skin drawing blood.

They made love like they never had, both panting as their desires spilled forth, bodies in sync. Emotions of guilt, love, hate and so much more intertwined driving them to greater exploits, culminating in an explosive physical climax they achieved as one; but mentally Namdi had one more woman in that bed.

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LiteratureRe: BISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op):
Ayanfe29:
Please continue.... We're following ....Can you still post it today?
Yes. posting now. Also thanks, it helps to know one's baby is liked by more than just me the parent so I don't go chucking it into the bin. Story, not an actual baby. Wouldn't chuck a baby into a bin, well maybe baby Hitler, or baby Idi Amin, but then that would be a moral dilemma... I digress. Here's 2 chapters in appreciation
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LiteratureRe: BISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op):
muhammed50:
I swear they are post more erotic than this!
So move on!
Alright thanks. Ch 04 coming up, though I did some edits to tone it way down just in case. And hope you don't mind but I plugged your name into CH 05 or CH 06 depending on if i split it
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LiteratureRe: BISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op):
Hi, to the few following this hopefully ok story. Got a small dilemma I hope can be helped

So, Ch 04 has been written but been hesitant about posting it due to it having a slightly more descriptive erotic scene.

It is not 50 shades of grey level content and I was not explicit in the description; no direct mentions of Instruments (lol, site censored the english word for "genitaux"- this is french - replacing it with "instrument" )

Rule 4 says discussion of love-making... but this is a story so technically not really a discussion

Not sure if people are really following this story or care if it continues but if anyone who has experience concerning this could chime in and advice that would be appreciated.

Thanks

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LiteratureRe: BISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op):
Guilt, a monster of many flavors


BISI - THE OTHER WOMAN CH 03


Without a sound, the phone hit the floor face up, the carpet cushioning its fall. Each vibration put Namdi on edge, his mind racing to suppress the guilt he could feel in his heart. Forcefully calming himself he bent down to pick up the phone. His head hit the horn, drawing the attention of the few people in the parking lot. They could see nothing through the tinted windows of the Dakota Brown E-Class.

With the phone back in the palm of his hand, a war began in Namdi's brain. Should he pick it or not. He had never missed her call before. Even in the office, no matter how important the meeting he would always excuse himself. It had earned him a lot of nicknames and teasing. He was running out of time. Each vibration rang clear in the silent car. Remembering an article he had glanced at a few years ago in the waiting room of a friends hospital he closed his eyes and inhaled for 3 seconds. Letting out that breath he tapped the call button.

"Honey, is anything the matter? You are usually home by now. "

"Got held up in the office, I'll be by your side before you know it."

Namdi surprised himself at how smoothly the lie came out.

"Dear, you seem a bit out of breath"

"Rushed out, couldn't wait for the elevator."

"Alright sweety, that new hire in your office better not be eyeing you. You don't want me coming to your office with a machete."

She laughed as she said this. The new hire at Namdi's office was a good friend of hers. They had gone to the same all girls boarding school. Namdi also let out a laugh tinged with just a hint of guilt.

"You know she's not in my department, besides she couldn't hold a candle to your charm and allure."

"Awww, you really do know what to say to make a girl feel special. I got a surprise waiting for you to unwrap when you get home. It even has a bow on it."

"Guess i'll be breaking some speed limits."

Namdi said, anticipation of what she had got for him building. The sales girl had become but a dream. He heard her blow a kiss as she hung up. In a hurry for multiple reasons, Namdi swung the car into gear, burning rubber as he sped home.

A wine glass in hand, Namdi's wife looked at the phone she had just blown a kiss into. There was no smile on her lips as she observed a moving dot on the phone. She watched - unblinking - the small dot leave an area labeled store. Slipping the tracking device into Namdi's car had been her moms gift to her. She hated how her mom had no faith in her marriage. Still, she had not told Namdi about it nor had she deleted the phone app or removed the device. The hand holding the wine glass tightened.

"He lied to me!"

Each word came out through clenched teeth. She loathed the thought of her mom being right. With a crisp ping, the wine glass shattered in her delicate hand.

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LiteratureRe: BISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op):
BISI - THE OTHER WOMAN CH 02

"Excuse me sir can I help you?"

Namdi looked away from a mahogany door on display, his gaze falling on a bright eyed sales lady whose smile strangely seemed both innocent and seductive. For a split second he forgot what he was there for. Snapping back to his senses, he softly coughed.

"Yes, I'm looking for a... em... door."

As these words came out of Namdi's mouth he wanted to kick himself. He had zero need for a door. He had only ducked into this furniture store to while away time. But her eyes just seemed to slow down his brain functions.

She turned, walking to the door in question. Namdi couldn't help but watch her every movement; entranced. The uniform she wore accentuating her every devilish delight.

"Do you mean this door, sir?"

She asked, waiting for confirmation, hand easily resting on her shapely hip.

At a loss for words, Namdi could only nod his head; all his energy spent on keeping his tongue in his mouth.

"This is a good choice sir. It is one of our new models coming with a satisfied or your money back guarantee."

She smiled coquettishly as she said satisfied.

Her smile was a warm ray of sunshine, calming Namdi's flustered self. He couldn't help but smile back at her.

"How much for this door that comes with satisfaction guaranteed?"

A child like play fullness could be heard in Namdi's voice as he lobbed her word back at her.

"For you sir, a trifling 500,000 naira."

Namdi laughed when he heard this.

"Does this door come with you as an accessory?"

The sales lady giggled. To Namdi's ears it was a sound of pure delight.

"I'm sorry sir, but that is against company policies. I can talk to the manager about bringing down the price but he isn't here at the moment."

There was a twinkle of mischief in her eyes betraying the words from her lips.

"When will he be back? Maybe I come back then."

Namdi asked.

She didn't speak, merely gesturing Namdi to follow her. They walked, Namdi a step behind her trying hard not to watch the sway of her waist. Reaching the back of the store, she stopped in front of a door seeming to lead to a small room of some kind. Before Namdi could say anything more she grabbed the door handle and slipped her free hand into his.

"Can someone help me!"

A loud shout came from the front of the store. Namdi felt the hand in his stiffen then suddenly pull away.

"I have to go. Here, take this, see yourself out."

Stunned at the rapid changes Namdi was left speechless as a piece of paper was thrust into his hand. He walked towards the exit of the store unsure of what to make of all that happened. In a fog he walked to his Mercedes, getting in and closing the door. Enveloped in his familiar space his thoughts stabilized, the memory containing the paper she had slipped into his hand coming to the forefront.

Looking at that innocent piece of folded white paper a silent struggle went on in his mind if he should open it.

"It is just a piece of paper."

Namdi said out loud to no one in particular.

He opened the folded piece of paper; 2 bold words jumping right out at him.

"CALL ME"

Below it was a phone number.

Namdi's breath quickened.

"She just wants to talk to me about the mahogany door, there's no harm in calling."

His reflection on the driver window nodded subtly in agreement. Throwing caution to the wind he began to dial.

"I'm doing nothing wrong"

Namdi muttered over and over as he punched in numbers into his I-phone.

"Two numbers left"

He thought, a seed of anticipation growing inside of him as he imagined hearing that voice again. Punching in the last digit, his hand hesitated over the call button.

"It's about the door."

With that firmly in his head, his thumb reached for the call button only for the phone to flash with an incoming call, a single word displayed on the screen

"Wifey..."

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LiteratureBISI - The Other Woman (SHORT) By Jon Doe by just2day(op):
I will be popping my literature cherry here on nairaland with this piece. Comments decide all, good bad brutal share your depravity with complete abandon. Always looking for inspiration

And that is enough sharing for the moment.

Now to get the ugly stuff out of the way. Copyright. If you wouldn't mind just adding my twitter handle @just2days if you feel the work is good enough to copy, paste, screenshot, share... Thanks for crediting


Without further ado BISI - THE OTHER WOMAN CH 01


Rain fell heavily on a parked Mercedes. Its headlamps twin swords piercing the darkness, illuminating every tear falling from the heavens. Smoke rose from the exhaust, evidence of a silently purring engine. Inside was a single man, face buried in his hands. As the heavens cried, so did he. Freely his tears fell, pooling in his rough palms only to be absorbed by the cuffs of his work shirt already stained red.

Seconds ticked on, the tears coming to an end. Lifting up his head, the mans gaze fell on the I.D. card hanging from the rear view mirror. He could barely remember the man in the picture. Still, the name Namdi printed under the photograph was his. Lightning lit up the sky, driving away the darkness for a moment, revealing an extravagant two story home less than a mile away. Putting the car in gear, Namdi drove up to the front door.

Stepping out of the car Namdi couldn’t help but watch the rain falling a few feet away from him. With a heavy heart he turned away walking slowly to the mahogany door. They had picked it together. It was meant to be a surprise. He never expected it to be the gateway to more than a home. Looking at the door Namdi’s heart grew heavier as he fished for his house keys. He stood there about to lose himself to the bittersweet memories of the past when the door swung open.

There was no surprise on Namdi’s face when the door revealed a beautiful ebony woman. Even now in an empty house she wore heels, giving her 5ft5 frame an extra 5 inches. Still, he would need to tilt her chin up to kiss her. Her lips - painted blood red - slowly curved into a slight smile as she saw Namdi. They parted slightly, a lovely voice floating to his ears dripping with honey.

“I see her blood on your shirt, very good. Dinner is ready.”

Turning around, she disappeared into the house a violet fragrance in her wake. Namdi’s knees buckled and he crashed to the floor clutching his heart. Pain flooded his mind. A single word nearly escaped his mouth.

“B...i….s…”

Gritting his teeth he stopped. With great resolve he pushed himself to his feet following her into the house that was once a home.


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Art, Graphics & VideoRe: What Do You Think About My Magazine? by just2day: 8:28am On Aug 29, 2010
Looking as there's only the front cover to go by, the art work is great. Love the picture selection. Though we all know that SEX sells, its dosn't mean it has to be carried in a publication for it to sell. Broaden your mind girl and think outside that box of yours called conformity
RomanceRe: Guys Would You Cry While Watching A Movie With Your Girl? by just2day: 3:12pm On Apr 22, 2009
u have got to be kidding, the only guys that should have leaking eyes during any movie are the 'happy' guys (happy in quote) and the boyfriend of the girl who'll be kissing the tears away
TV/MoviesRe: Where Can I Download Movies Series On The Internet For Free Example Lost,heroes by just2day: 8:01pm On Dec 01, 2008
first download the software utorrent or bit torrent. i personally prefer utorrent. After, just go to this website www.torrentz.com. Its a search engine for torrents. Type whatever u want e.g. heores and it brings out the different heroes available. It really works like google yahoo dogpile e.t.c just that instead of just websites it links u to multiple torrent websites. Theres still stuff on how to select ur torrent, peers, seeders optimization blah blah blah holler if u need more info
RomanceRe: Questions For U Guys? by just2day: 7:20pm On Dec 01, 2008
come on we're guys but its not like we say hate

maybe date or kiss, basically along those lines

but one mans garbage is another mans treasure

no matter what a girl looks like there will be one guy who won't think she's ugly

she just has to find him or let him find her

and to round it up

u girls care more about ur looks than we guys do for crying out loud

so put a cork in it

and beautiful is more than the physical so after pretty fades if ur man is really ur man

he'll still see u as beautiful
RomanceRe: Ridiculous Excuses Men Give To Evade Marriage by just2day: 2:38pm On Dec 01, 2008
wat do u mean by milk for free. The milk women give is never free
FamilyRe: Should Chivalry Die In This Age Of Equality? by just2day: 7:53am On Apr 04, 2008
if one is treating a woman as inferior then one cannot call that chivalry. But, with the way things are going were a girl is expected to pay her side of the bill on a date whethere it be a restaurant, tickets transportation e.t.c it looks like the days of the knights has ended. What we cant forget is u ladies fought and u fought hard for this though u might not think so. What did u expect when u wanted equal rights. You cant eat the icing on the cake and want the cake to look pretty at the same time or something like that
Christianity EtcRe: Noisy Places Of Worship by just2day: 7:39am On Apr 04, 2008
a. Live with it. If your to afraid to go to the church and tell them ur mind then suck it up and live with it
b. You moved in then u can definitely move out
c. Buy your own set of speakers, face it in the direction of the church and play p-square or d-banj or watever artist that aint gospel
d. Throw a raucous party that spills into the church ground. preferably during their night vigil or maybe even during sunday service. Its called giving back a taste of their own medicine

and my personal favorite

sneak into the church and sabotage the sound system

I see no reason a church or mosque should disturb the peace. Even Jesus avoided as much as possible pissin of the people around him. And I definitely know God is not tone deaf. He can hear u even if ur prayin in ur room with just ur mouth. or maybe am rong

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