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ironkurtain:
Bro its not possible today......i wish i could, but i cant put up an update today. Pls bear with me

so when should we be expecting another sir

BTW cute baby you've got

ironkurtain:
Bro, i have one question. Are you a psychologist by profession?.....or perhaps a mind reader. Being amazed by this comment is an understatement. Everything you said above is exactly what i had in mind when i started this story. Infact it gave me alot of ideas. Thanks man......this is by far the best comment i have ever read.

thanks for the commendation boss.

I just poured out my mind nothing more and how it should go and not that I'm a mind reader

Please are we going to get a welcome update today. Pleeeeaaassseeee

I can't just enjoy this alone without calling on others to come have some taste of how yummy it is

I'll use this medium to invite the presence of these honorable individuals to come grace this page and also come along with others..
Missmossy
Calmie
harjibolar10
MhizEnkay
Mourin
SexySapphire
Aipete2
Hawlahscho


The story actually begins from the below link which is the part 1 before this
https://www.nairaland.com/2268155/bloodline.......part-one-family

Wow this is really a great piece and I can confidently say I enjoyed every bit of it from the part one up to the last update.

Well Eric had that tendency in him from time to be ruthless and just needed a little touch to make him become the baddest he presently is. I think he and Liza will make a perfect couple and I hope they end up together after this whole brouhaha.

Alex, I can't really remember what transformation he went through in order to become a little harder he is presently but I think he's very very far from been ruthless unlike his brother and probably Suzanne.. Please give us a little hint about what brought out the little hardness in Alex. He's presently a player and I can't point on who he should end up with

Suzanne, her own motivation in joining though very very absurd is laughable.. But I'm happy she's catching up and I'm even tempting to rate her ahead of Alex sha but lemme keep that to myself.. I hope she ends up with Chris though. He seems like a nice guy and will take care of her for us.

Chris, though he has found a very good profession for himself in which I'm sure he's gonna be making headway, I also want him to be given a little training too so that wherever he sees any obstacle he should be able to handle the minutest of them. Suzanne for him.

Esther, I think my wife should be like this.. She's the envy of the baddest of women because of her humane character in which every decent lady should have.. She's a thousand yard wife material.

Liza, I think she's just like the average day lady who loves the bad guys ahead of the good guys no matter how hard the good guys tries to impress them.. I also think she's a perfect bride for Eric and I hope they end up together if Eric survives this though

Nina, the seemingly toughest of all who was pushed into assassination because of something I can't place my hands on but I'm very sure deep inside her heart of hearts she still wants to be that innocent lady who goes her own way without hurting a fly.. I hope she finds peace and she ends up with the Philips too.

I don't really like how Eric wanna end the Sosai's life just like that sha.. I'll rather they like sit on a round table and finally become one big happy family together with his grandpa, mum his twin brother and his wife..

All in all its a great piece except for some typographical errors which I noticed but couldn't point out specifically because I wanted to see the end of the piece in no time

Ironkurtain I doff my hat for you and thank you very very much for sharing this..

But I'm earnestly waiting for my welcome updates though and that of my guests I'm going to invite in the next post of mine

Lemme follow after waking up I'd read

smileysmiley:
Typical pattern of a Nairaland "story teller"
1. Start a story
2. Beg for people to comment when they realize they are getting views but no comment.
3. Beg tirelessly.
4. Update without ceasing.
5. Threaten not to update when they start getting few comments e.g "I won't update till I get 10 comments"..
6. Updates become scanty when the comments increase.
7. No more updates.
8. Report that that their father's wife's mother's uncle was killed by DSS (Daura Secret Service) hence their inability to update.
9. Nothing again
10. Some divert to a new story entirely.
* I am a writer too and I have a lot of unfinished works cause I know how it works. You are writing a story then another idea pops up and you lose interest in that story entirely. It happens to me a lot and that is why I don't even attempt to post any of my work here cause I appreciate my peace of mind. Why start a story you can't end? As for me, I don't really care cause my "imagination filled brain" always gives me a clue of what the ending will be like but I think its pretty unprofessional to bring out an unfinished work unless its a review to get buyers interested in buying the finished work. Although Op you don't strike me as a professional writer cause your use of terms are bad and you have difficulty in making your readers relate with the story, the use of expression is zero and your manner of description is totally poor, I'm not trying to bad mouth you but if you have plans of being a writer, you have a long way to go. It is pretty embarrassing that you are a graduate and please stop using "I studied Physics" as an excuse cause I studied Physics too and my use of English might not be perfect but it will take someone who is into English language to dictate my error. A word of advice "stop using shorthand to write" , it is one of the reasons Nigerian youths are bad with their use of English, take your time to type out the full word cause shorthand will only affect you on the long run. I know I have written a really long epistle but I do hope you will take this as constructive criticism, please don't get defensive dear cause I didn't type all these in a bid to offend you. Cheers!

madam chat me up for whatsapp n tell me the unfinished stories you have with u

Nairaland have made me become addicted to unfinished works