Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 5:09pm On Feb 02, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 5:07pm On Feb 02, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 7:53pm On Feb 01, 2020 |
sampz: ayorohsuccess@gmail.com sent |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:09am On Jan 30, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read LOVE NA ELELE For Free by noble4d(op): 5:39pm On Jan 29, 2020 |
noble4d: Hello everyone, request for a free PDF copy of "love na elele(short story)" by dropping your email address. Written in Pidgin English.
|
Literature › Read LOVE NA ELELE For Free by noble4d(op): 5:38pm On Jan 29, 2020 |
Hello everyone, request for a free PDF copy of "love na elele(short story)" by dropping your email address. Written in Pidgin English. |
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 5:30pm On Jan 29, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 5:29pm On Jan 29, 2020 |
mokoh: Pls sent to Matthewokoh25@yahoo.com Sent |
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:06pm On Jan 26, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:04pm On Jan 26, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:03pm On Jan 26, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:01pm On Jan 26, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 9:59pm On Jan 26, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:11am On Jan 25, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:09am On Jan 25, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:08am On Jan 25, 2020 |
Jossybab: oreoluwabab@gmail.com Send it to me too pls Sent |
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:07am On Jan 25, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:06am On Jan 25, 2020 |
tall05: ofemi215@outlook.com Sent |
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:05am On Jan 25, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:03am On Jan 25, 2020 |
|
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 10:02am On Jan 25, 2020 |
|
TV/Movies › Re: First Few Pages Of My Feature Length Script by noble4d(m): 8:45am On Jan 24, 2020 |
sholay2011: Hello everyone. I just started penning a feature length film script and decided to share the first few pages here for review, critique and feedback from fellow scriptwriters, lovers of cinema and other people involved in various aspects of film making.
It is just a 13-page script so far. Your comments will be welcome. Please, find the attached pdf document. Thanks.
@prof800, @villageboi, @briareos, @speedyboi, @semid4lyfe @tonyayo, @morsadh, @lynx200, @ignatio, @cnario, @chromatic @thesoj. Well written bro. You can as well indicate if a dialogue is written in another language in parentheses. |
Poems For Review › Re: Love & Friendship by noble4d(m): 1:05pm On Jan 23, 2020 |
adeabdul2: I have no idea what that means But thank you Alright. A stanza is a group of lines in poem that are separated physically using spaces between the different stanzas. We have couplet which consist of two consecutive lines of poem. Tercet has three lines, Quatrain has four lines, quintain has five lines....and many more. You can check my thread "Rudiment of poetry" to learn more. |
Poems For Review › Re: When I Was Young by noble4d(m): 12:43pm On Jan 23, 2020 |
scarphase: I wonder where the years went The years of Innocence with little worries The days have gone Moments have flashed past I have grown older I look back at yesterday Oh how I thought I could shape the "tomorrow" then I used to think I could achieve anything I put my mind to Life seemed so easy like it was in cartoons Dreams were conceived Plans hatched Most of which have become wishful thinking as I have come to realise I remember with nostalgia The times I was younger When life wasn't so hard or so I thought Now here wondering why I grew up What really is the incentive for growing Responsibilities, bills and societal expectations These now take away the joy of "adulting" Oh if I could turn back the hands of time I wish I was younger When my troubles were fewer And friends truer Thumbs up poet. Please do not forget the importance of structuring. Your poem should be in stanzas except you wanted to write a villanelle or sort. Either you arranged them in quatrains, octaves, sestet, quintets... And please don't forget your punctuations, It'll help readers to know if there is enjambment or not. Thanks. |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Ride by noble4d(m): 12:30pm On Jan 23, 2020 |
Ojvictor: I need you I can't stop thinking about you My heart wouldn't stop beating for you I will travel to the moon Even to Mars To make right all my wrong And to justify my love for you With your name written loud in the sky
I want to be where you are I want to be at the comfort of your inclination I want to rest in the abyss of your heart Where all secret unfolds Where no lies survive but the truth
To the wonders that comes with the savour of your voice To your magnificent stature that breaks rock like magma I surrender my very self to your birth without debt For my heart lives where your heart beat. Thumbs up poet. Please don't forget the significance of punctuations. |
Poems For Review › Re: Love & Friendship by noble4d(m): 12:26pm On Jan 23, 2020 |
adeabdul2: I broke your heart, t'was not my intention. I wanted a friend, but you gave affection. When clarity came, it confused us both. Our real intent, we'd misunderstood Our feelings weren't tagged, we mutually assumed. What we each wanted, we each thought we knew. We were together, with hearts not in order. But what we both wanted, we both could not give. Love brings friendship, though they're not the same. I wanted companionship, romance was your game. We'd hurt ourselves unintentionally, but we hurt all the same. Should've spoken calmly, instead of trading blames. Mean words were spoken, bad names were called. That bridge is now broken, can't go back nor forward. Our relationship got stranded, it wilted and died Now what's left but sadness, to remember and cry. Thumbs up poet. Please for next time sake, try arrange your poem in stanzas. 1 Like |
Poems For Review › Re: Letter To Mama by noble4d(m): 12:18pm On Jan 23, 2020 |
poetictwenty: I know the stars will fall at my feet someday. The rain will oneday give way for sunshine. Our drenched body's will someday dry up When the future becomes today.
I can see the clouds gathering, Hugging each other before it drops like rain- A rain that will wash away the pains of yesteryears, Before leaving us with a happy ending.
I won't forget you when I bid farewell to tomorrow. For You're inscribed in each page of my heart. You're like a rose planted in the garden of my life. A rose that grew strong in a soil covered by weed of sorrow.
Countless times, I saw when you stood on you knees,- While knocking on heavens gate for my sake. Even when it seem the door was never opening. But you won't just give up because of me.
Now, The sun has risen, signifying the ends of those horrible nights. Paint your face with smiles dear Mama, Move your feet for joy. For the night has given way for a day so bright.
Ohuche, Joseph ogbonna (2020) Wow! Kudos poet, I felt each stanza you wrote. |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 11:54am On Jan 23, 2020 |
noble4d: Happy new year poets What is a Ballad? A ballad is a type of poem that is sometimes set to music. Ballads have a long history and are found in many cultures. The ballad actually began as a folk song and continues today in popular music. Many love songs today can be considered ballads. Literary ballads are often written in the form of poetry, with some consisting of quatrains and others consisting of couplets. They generally tell a story in a very direct manner, and they do not have to be about love at all. Ballads often use vivid and expressive imagery in a detached manner to relay the tale. A prominent characteristic of ballads is that they can often easily be put to music. Examples: Whitney Houston is famous for singing the ballad “I Will Always Love You,” which tells the dramatic story of timeless love a person holds for someone. Similarly, the movie Titanic includes the ballad, “My Heart Will Go On” sung by Celine Dion. This ballad tells the story of the infinite love the speaker has for someone. This ballad tells the story of how this love is everlasting no matter what situation life brings her. Furthermore, the band Journey is famous for the ballad “Don’t Stop Believing’,” which tells the story of simple people in search of achieving large dreams. It emphasizes the importance of preserving in order to achieve our goals. More lessons coming soon. Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco,dtito,isaiahogodo,paulaok4, basille,krystalxxx,richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep, firestar,TemitopeDaniel, repogirl,vonn, Royver. Cc:Seun, lalasticlala,mynd44 |
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 11:23am On Jan 23, 2020 |
1 Like |
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 11:22am On Jan 23, 2020 |
Sanniboi: sundayoluwasegun163@gmail.com Sent |
Literature › Re: Read Corpers' Lodge For Free This Holiday by noble4d(op): 11:20am On Jan 23, 2020 |
|