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| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Rick9(m): 10:52pm On Nov 14, 2022 |
Amazing |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Rick9(m): 5:55am On Nov 17, 2022 |
Waiting |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Rick9(m): 11:13pm On Nov 20, 2022 |
Anticipating |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Kaycee9242(m): 9:46am On Nov 21, 2022 |
Larry no show yesterday |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by treasuree95(f): 9:12pm On Nov 21, 2022 |
Waiting.... |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by sulorog(m): 12:05am On Nov 22, 2022 |
Oga Larry, you don abandoned this your story and update. Wetin dey happen na? No update for 2 weeks now. Hope all is well with you. |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Vidamia(m): 6:22am On Nov 22, 2022 |
sulorog:Him dey vex say you guys no buy him book nah |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by francium001: 8:15am On Nov 22, 2022 |
In this thread two things are involved, it's either Mr. Larrysun is too occuppied these days that he wants to be updating every two weeks or that he wants to stop updating the thread, complete the BOOK 5 and sell it. The later is likely because if he is not careful some persons may want to play smart by publishing this masterpiece of his without his consent and before he would find out it may be too late. Well done Mr. Larrysun |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by LarrySun(op): 9:00pm On Nov 22, 2022 |
Update 20 |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by LarrySun(op): 9:00pm On Nov 22, 2022 |
Vidamia:Hahahahaha! No, that's not it. |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Ann2012(f): 9:46pm On Nov 22, 2022 |
Thanks for the update boss |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Calenikan(m): 10:00am On Nov 23, 2022 |
Thanks for the update baba |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by treasuree95(f): 11:53am On Nov 23, 2022 |
Thanks Mr larry |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Bukolaberry(f): 12:26pm On Nov 23, 2022 |
thanks for the update mr Larry |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by do4luv14(m): 2:14pm On Nov 23, 2022 |
LarrySun:Thanks for the update sah, but you are holding us an update in Arrears ooo |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by LarrySun(op): 6:28pm On Nov 23, 2022 |
do4luv14:I am? ![]() |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by do4luv14(m): 9:33pm On Nov 23, 2022 |
LarrySun:Yes sah |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Vulcanheph(m): 7:18am On Nov 24, 2022 |
The story is fascinating as usual but I'd like to point out something to Mr Larrysun... Maria went to Bekwarra in Cross River and as a Cross Riverian, I feel that there's something you should know. One if the characters in the story is the orphans is named Edet. The name "Edet" is actually a name mostly associated to the Efiks (who are indigenous to the southern part of Cross River) and and Ibibios of Akwa ibom. So someone named Edet who happens to come from Bekwarra (A local government located at the most northern part of Cross River) seems very unlikely. I am not criticizing your Amazing story but just bringing this "little" plot hole to your attention. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more updates. |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by do4luv14(m): 11:04am On Nov 24, 2022 |
Vulcanheph:Nice point raised, But you must understand, as I know you do, That not all the orphan are from the same local Govt, thank you |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by LarrySun(op): 12:47pm On Nov 24, 2022 |
Vulcanheph:Thanks for pointing it out. But you should remember that Edet was not originally from the village. He was a child condemned to die in the evil forest. He found his way into the orphanage. But then again, I probably have to make proper research. Thanks again. |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by LarrySun(op): 3:00am On Nov 27, 2022*. Modified: 12:48pm On Dec 04, 2022 |
Post removed. |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by NurHadejia(m): 7:29am On Nov 27, 2022 |
Thank you larrysun |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by treasuree95(f): 12:13pm On Nov 27, 2022 |
Thanks for the update |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by do4luv14(m): 2:07pm On Nov 27, 2022 |
Chaiii this update had me wishing Toni's next week Sunday, so so sweet, |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Ann2012(f): 2:34pm On Nov 27, 2022 |
Thanks for the update boss |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by eyezik3(m): 4:47pm On Nov 27, 2022 |
Mr LarrySun your write up always make me glued to my phone. I salute you, thanks for the update You're da real bomb! |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by sulorog(m): 5:09pm On Nov 27, 2022 |
Thanks for the update Oga Larry |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Kaycee9242(m): 9:01pm On Nov 27, 2022 |
Larry thanks so much for the double update |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Vulcanheph(m): 7:23am On Nov 28, 2022 |
Ride on sir... |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by ufss: 11:20am On Nov 28, 2022 |
welldone sir |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Rick9(m): 12:46am On Dec 01, 2022 |
Wow |
| Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by LarrySun(op): 1:21pm On Dec 04, 2022*. Modified: 5:33pm On Dec 15, 2022 |
Post removed. |
