A Short Poem On Destiny!! - Literature

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A Short Poem On Destiny!! by emeralddayo(op): 8:27am On Jul 14, 2014*

our destiny says to us,
"come to the edge.
we say "its too high"
"come to the edge"
we say"i might fall"
"come to the edge"destiny says
and we stepped out.
and it pushed us
AND WE FLEW!!!!
RISKS TAKERS ARE HIGH FLIERS
#copied

Re: A Short Poem On Destiny!! by abdulslutsky(m): 8:53am On Jul 14, 2014

emeralddayo: our destiny says to us,
"come to the edge.
we say "its too high"
"come to the edge"
we say"i might fall"
"come to the edge"destiny says
and we stepped out.
and it pushed us
AND WE FLEW!!!!
RISKS TAKERS ARE HIGH FLIERS

Re: A Short Poem On Destiny!! by ayodejiayeola(m): 1:30pm On Jul 21, 2015

very nice

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Re: A Short Poem On Destiny!! by GBR1(m): 8:00pm On Feb 14, 2016

Re: A Short Poem On Destiny!! by davidif: 8:32pm On Feb 19, 2017

emeralddayo:
our destiny says to us,
"come to the edge.
we say "its too high"
"come to the edge"
we say"i might fall"
"come to the edge"destiny says
and we stepped out.
and it pushed us
AND WE FLEW!!!!
RISKS TAKERS ARE HIGH FLIERS

But it doesn't rhyme. Poetry for the most part is supposed to rhyme. Yours doesn't.

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