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| Poem: Tears From The Heart by lordthunderbolt(op): 6:26pm On Oct 24, 2014 |
She stood there with frozen tears From all her years Those bitter plea as he spoke his sweet A faithful pain caressing her ears Deep in thoughts, the mind lost Fires cracking from heated frost Her pains dissolved on a liquid purse Another glance...another pain on her hands Her meek heart betrayed his passion His tears made her many mansions Shattered lineage of broken inactions Still hung on the pains of yester year's emotions All that was ever said Was just too late In between her legs Lay another head |
| Re: Poem: Tears From The Heart by noble4d(m): 8:28pm On Oct 24, 2014 |
Nice writeup...I like the fact that each stanzas are in quatrain and making use of plain English is superb, easy to understand by a lay reader. |
| Re: Poem: Tears From The Heart by lordthunderbolt(op): 8:01am On Oct 25, 2014 |
noble4d:thanks Bro. ..its plain English with deeper subtle meanings... that's how u write my works...so that people can come to love poetry you can see this works and others at www.thunderboltpearlz..com home of poetry |