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| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 9:23am On Dec 05, 2014*. Modified: 2:26pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
Dropping a message.. .. The night was good.. .....Good morning all purity, babe2sure, ayozainy, laykorn, texanomaly, Africanapple, samflexxy, jigsawkillah, Elantracey, april07, valued |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Babe2sure(f): 9:45am On Dec 05, 2014 |
Good morning. Dre11, has gone on the overdrive. ![]() Chop knuckle for a poem well written. I meant 'IN NEED OF FREEDOM' I like the fact that you portrayed how you felt with picture. As per this morning own, change it to 'Devoid of pot-holes and hold-ups. |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 2:35pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
Babe2sure:Thanks for pointing the mistake out Babe2sure:But.. ................. Don't tell me u didn't get the message |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 2:37pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Purity1(f): 2:41pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
dre11:yea i did |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 10:01pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
dre11:good evening dear , your poems are just getting better ![]() |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 4:09pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Dre Baba! I go message you make I see how much of your knowledge I fit steal commot! You're doing great Baba! More ink to your pen. Ayamlaykorn |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 5:20pm On Dec 08, 2014 |
Elantracey:Thanks dear laykorn: ![]() Unless u wan teach me small |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 5:42pm On Dec 08, 2014*. Modified: 9:13am On Dec 18, 2014 |
Just a smile A smile would make my day.You break the norms of seeing just father Xmas on Christmas day
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| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Purity1(f): 12:23pm On Dec 09, 2014 |
Dre you're now an expert, i must say keep the ball rolling |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 5:23pm On Dec 09, 2014*. Modified: 9:15am On Dec 18, 2014 |
Thoughts I fell into a trance. |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 2:22pm On Dec 17, 2014*. Modified: 9:17am On Dec 18, 2014 |
Taking a glance Standing by the seashore,
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| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 2:49pm On Dec 17, 2014 |
Cc: Texanomaly Noble4d Laykorn I need some honest critique of some of this notes I do write..... I don't wanna feel like a teacher but a student |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by RaeMystix: 3:01pm On Dec 17, 2014 |
#claps# Bravo!. |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by herald9: 9:41am On Dec 18, 2014 |
dre11:hilarious...this is the type I wanna do. Not lamentations or love ish.. Maybe I'll become a regular here to steal some tips from you...Hehehe it's good |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 10:31am On Dec 18, 2014 |
herald9:You welcome boss, We all benefits each other in one way or the other |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 10:49am On Dec 18, 2014 |
Rambling thoughts I fixed my gaze. |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 1:02pm On Dec 19, 2014*. Modified: 1:39pm On Dec 19, 2014 |
Let me write this acrostic poem from yesterday lessons Good morningGood morning everybody Cc: Leki10 |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 1:33pm On Dec 19, 2014 |
Song to the soul I heard some voices, yes I did hear a music.Music for life ![]() ![]() |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by youngcrysta(f): 6:50pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
beautiful lines and words, thats what makes up a good poem.... kudos |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 9:40pm On Dec 29, 2014*. Modified: 1:12pm On Dec 31, 2014 |
Home that was lost Walking along a lonely road.Help save a city because war destroys what has being created |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 10:40pm On Dec 29, 2014*. Modified: 1:13pm On Dec 31, 2014 |
Turn back the hands of time. There is this hawker in my neighbourhood.Let's stand up for the girl child they need more protection from us |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 10:48pm On Dec 29, 2014*. Modified: 1:02pm On Dec 31, 2014 |
Miracle of the morning A day with the star. |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 6:25pm On Mar 05, 2015 |
Feels like saying a word Felt like jumping up and down The strength in me couldn't do it The spirit in me wants to do more................. But, in this my weakness...... I did had to thank GOD Thanking him for where he has brought me from Where I am today And where he is taking me to Despite all things I am still alive I added a year to my age. A miracle was added to me A reason to be happy A feeling of gratitude A measure of accomplishment Thank you GOD Your grace is just sufficient for me Its you GOD and no one. Happy birthday to me |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Babe2sure(f): 10:19pm On Mar 05, 2015 |
Hmmm...........Thanksgiving poem. Happy birthday to you. I wishing you the best in life. LLNP. |
| Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(op): 7:22pm On Aug 14, 2015 |



