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i have a song i just composed, i kinda like it and i want to know what nairalanders think about it. i welcome any criticism but no insults please.

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merci. here is the song


LIGHT UP THE NIGHT

[CHORUS]
LIGHT UP THE NIGHT 2X
AND MAKE IT GLOW 2X
COS FOREVER
WE GONNA SHINE

After being in so many frustrating state
After being in so many crying state
Baba God no let me down
He no let me down
He make my enemies jealous mi
Even ATM no fit tell me insufficient funds
People just dey ask me
Aw I make am
I just dey tell them say na baba God
Cos tonight Nepa no fit stop us
Generator no fit mess up
So we
[CHORUS]
Dat job wey u dey pray for
Dat Ferrari u won buy
Dat lekki house u wan build
By God’s grace u go get am
Cos enemies no fit stop u
Haters no go c u again
Babalawo no fit harm u again
Cos we gonna
[chorus]

OP should I post mine?

francizy:
OP should I post mine?

u r free

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