'concealment' Story on Sex,sensuality,regret & past By Badiru Kehinde - Literature - Nairaland
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| 'concealment' Story on Sex,sensuality,regret & past By Badiru Kehinde by Badirukehinde(op): 12:21am On May 16, 2015*. Modified: 12:44am On Feb 18, 2020 |
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| Re: 'concealment' Story on Sex,sensuality,regret & past By Badiru Kehinde by Writeditor: 6:23am On May 16, 2015 |
Story lacks finishing. I'm surprised you sent it in for a contest like this. |
| Re: 'concealment' Story on Sex,sensuality,regret & past By Badiru Kehinde by Badirukehinde(op): 10:50am On May 16, 2015 |
Writeditor:And that's the wonderful aspect of writing,freedom,dynamism and uniqueness.All stories are not meant to have an ending or end in the general known or traditional manner.This one actually does have an ending.Re read it,It's left to the reader to envisage how it ends....That's the quality of writing,you engage your readers...Thanks for the observation tho |
| Re: 'concealment' Story on Sex,sensuality,regret & past By Badiru Kehinde by Writeditor: 10:30am On May 17, 2015 |
Badirukehinde:Sure. But I meant finishing as in crossing t's and dotting i's. Word placing, punctuation and co. |
| Re: 'concealment' Story on Sex,sensuality,regret & past By Badiru Kehinde by Badirukehinde(op): 8:33am On May 18, 2015 |
Writeditor:Thank You...It ended with an elipsis ![]() |
| Re: 'concealment' Story on Sex,sensuality,regret & past By Badiru Kehinde by Badirukehinde(op): 8:34am On May 18, 2015 |
Can this work be moved to FP dear moderator |
