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Oh boy'do i love rhymes.I am not a literature student,but with the little i know,have i written this piece.....

BLISS OF LOVE..

My heart skipped a beat,
as though i was to fall in a pit.
When i saw those beautiful eyes
made of diamonds that sparkle like the morning skies.
Gradually as she came closer,
I tried to draw away from her.
Though i had love deep down for her,
I just wasn't the type that could stand and talk.
Lets take a walk!
she said.
As i attempted to storm away.
Oh! i grinned in reply,and the exit way seemed far away.
But she held my hands,taking my grin for a yes.
As her skin touched mine,
Great heat as from a mine-
stormed my heart.
Oh what a beautiful thing love is;
And the feeling is simly a bliss.

You've really tried.. but this is more of a song that a poem..

GeneralQuamdeen:
You've really tried.. but this is more of a song that a poem..

noted! and modified.

Giitheon:
noted! and modified.

Keep it up.. but let me tell you.. some people will steal your good work here.

love dis

Jamzig1:
love dis

thanks man