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Beryl- No ordinary female by owcheychey(op): 2:24pm On Sep 01, 2015*

This story has been taken down

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by owcheychey(op): 3:05pm On Sep 01, 2015*

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by owcheychey(op): 10:28pm On Sep 01, 2015*

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Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by owcheychey(op): 5:40pm On Sep 02, 2015

Hello people... Umm I need to know if anyone is following this thread so I can keep posting. so is anyone?...

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by Mario1983(m): 7:28am On Sep 03, 2015

yep, I am following

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Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by Rasengan02(m): 7:51am On Sep 03, 2015

Kip it up

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Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by Nobody: 11:00pm On Sep 03, 2015

Oh please keep going.. Don't stop grin

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Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by owcheychey(op): 12:03am On Sep 30, 2015

Thank you all new posts coming this before or on this weekend.

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by owcheychey(op): 7:57pm On Sep 30, 2015*

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by Missmossy(f): 8:09pm On Oct 01, 2015

Such a beautiful piece, keep it coming grin

Beryl is my favorite character don't like her actions though.

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Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by Zeeenas(f): 5:22pm On Oct 02, 2015

Beautiful. I'll go wit shade

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Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by heeqhmart(f): 9:14pm On Oct 02, 2015

I'll go wiv Topaz's mother for now

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Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by ashatoda: 6:50am On Oct 03, 2015

this is a lovely piece, but i would like you to make use of a breaker either start a new paragraph where you intend to write about another character in an update. For example, in the last update, Beryl slumped and you just went on about Shade got me confused initially i had to read again and ponder on it before understanding.

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Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by owcheychey(op): 9:24pm On Oct 04, 2015

ashatoda:
this is a lovely piece, but i would like you to make use of a breaker either start a new paragraph where you intend to write about another character in an update. For example, in the last update, Beryl slumped and you just went on about Shade got me confused initially i had to read again and ponder on it before understanding.

Point noted thanks a lot tho

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by owcheychey(op): 6:26pm On Oct 10, 2015*

Hey people, for those following, it needs a lot of work So, sorry for taking it down + I wasn't getting feedback so I might put it back up when I'm done. Not sure. Thank for following this far tho...

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by Nobody: 7:15pm On Oct 31, 2015*

#unfollowing

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by owcheychey(op): 10:32pm On Nov 02, 2015

Yup you should @akpobi

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by Nobody: 10:38pm On Nov 02, 2015

owcheychey:
Yup you should @akpobi

okay

Re: Beryl- No ordinary female by Nobody: 10:38pm On Nov 02, 2015

owcheychey:
Yup you should @akpobi

okay

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